MaNan FF: The Forbidden Fruit (Chapter 26 on Page 82) (25/05/16) - Page 36

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Posted: 10 years ago
Again a beutiful beautiful update. Really loved how smooth and comfortable transition from hate to trust you are showing in Nandani. She wants to be angry but is liking his company and trusting in sharing her life. I am loving the smooth transition with which both are coming cIose to each other. loved how these two shared their childhood with each other with ease and given a piece of advice to comfort other. I will like to mention specially about Manik as he had always neglected childhood with no one to guide him still he was giving such a good piece of advice how Nandani Mom must be wanting her happiness may be longing that one day his mother be wish the same for him. I really felt the pain the way he told his story to Nandani and I loved the fact he knows the consequences of reason coming out in front of Nandani. I hope he get his happiness in Nandaani also his childhood wish of getting his parents love be fulfilled.
I really loved Manik and Cabir's bond and I wish it stays like this. I completely agree with you Manik had no right to be angry with Cabir as he himself was involved in it even Cabir's own parents doesn't have that right as they only pushed Cabir to take that step ONLY NANDANI has right to be angry with Cabir and give him punishment no one else.

Nandani has lots of work in her hand in future after straightening these two idiots she will have to straighten two sets of parents as well.
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Sorry for the late reply.

Starting from Nandini and Manik convo was a bliss.
She was talking a lot about her, and to whom to her husband.
I was really appreciating Nandini disclosing more and more about her.
Also, Manik was enjoying it.
I mean, with so much humble, he was loving this moment.

And when Nandini was sympathizing with him, it really mean a lot, because Manik needed someone to understand him, not like Cabir, but also to mend him.

When she said Thank You softly and Manik smiles.. I was like.. oh my cute babies...

Alya!!! Unexpected entry but I believe that it will be a good thing to Manan.
Manik has a past with her (thank god it's the past!! )
Maybe, we will get to see Nandini jealo part ... I know it's not so soon... but maybe... can't wait in case you are planning about this!!!

And I'm here if you need me... I loved the way Nandini react to this.
Like, she was beginning to understand Manik...
She smiled!!!! I was aaawww
She started to trust him...

Well, I'm really loving the way Manan is heading.
Slowly, but very carefully.
Without trying to hurt each other.

Thank you for your beautiful writing.

Looking forward for next update- please do not forget to pm me




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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous ...
beautifully written part...
nandini's trust and feeling for manik started ...amazing
is she falling for manik...
but she is hurt with this marriage ...
... manik has feeling for nandini...
poor Manik carving for nandini's love...
waiting for nandini's acceptence..

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Posted: 10 years ago
u r amazing writer u know that right...
r u professional...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was simply amazing
I don't knw who is wrong...but I can bet that this was it for Manik...he was to marry nandini...to fight his fears...and to fill his heart with happiness once again...

Please nandini...forgive him...and once try and understand him...
He will love her like crazy no two ways on that

U are awesome dear
Update son
Loads f love and regards
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww so sweet so now nandini has started to trust manik so now thinngs are getting better wowww but there is a problem ALYA but dont make her a villan or a problem creator but an awesome update i must say man i loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much for your lovely comments! It makes me so thrilled to know that you are liking the story. And I'm not any professional, just a bored MaNan fanatic but that compliment meant a lot so thank you :] Updating in a few hours.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm aware that I'm terrible at keeping promises, sorry! PMs will be late, blame my network. Also, if you're reading the story and have liked the last post on page 3 for PMs, then please either comment or like the chapters so I know that you want to continue receiving PMs, as I don't want to bother people who've stopped reading. Hope that didn't sound rude?


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"At what time should I pick you up?" He questioned as the car came to a halt in front of her college.

"Around three," she casually said as she opened the door next to the passenger seat, "maybe a little early."

"Will two-thirty be fine?"

"That's about right," she said before stepping out. She paused for a little while, and turned back to look at him. The door was open but he started the car anyway. She bent down a little, looked at him, and softly said, "Um, goodbye."

He looked at her completely casually and with a slight smile on his face, he bid her goodbye as well. When she closed the door, he immediately put the car into ignition and drove away. Nandini, however, kept on staring as the vehicle disappeared into the road. She bit her lip a little, completely confused at why she was acting so weird.

She wasn't as angry at him anymore and that frightened her. She knew she should be angry, then why couldn't she? She felt herself forgiving him for all he did, bit by bit, and she wanted to stop that. She was sure that he didn't deserve her forgiveness. It didn't matter how he treated her because what he did was wrong on so many levels, but she couldn't believe in that so much anymore.

As Manik opened the door to enter into the old, abandoned beach house, he found yet another surprise awaiting him. As Alya turned the moment she heard the door creak open, her face broke out into a huge smile to see her friend, safe and sound.

"Alya?" he questioned, cringing his eyebrows, not believing his own eyes.

"Hi, Manik," she softly greeted him as she took a step forward. "How are you?"

"What are you doing here?" he asked her instead of giving her an answer.

"You won't believe how worried I was for you," she started to explain. "I thought something terrible happened to you. Seriously, I was having sleepless nights, I swear."

"Funny, because I really can't believe that," he told her instead, his tone filled with bitterness and Alya let out a regretful sigh.

"I know you can't because you're so stuck up over the past," she told him and he knew it was the truth. "Why must we go there again? What's done is done, and there's no way to erase that."

"But we can learn from it, can't we? I've learned not to trust you anymore, you see," Manik angrily spoke and she knew she deserved it.

"I don't get why you must act like such a child," Alya spoke with a tinge of annoyance. "Really, Manik, that was years ago. Can't we just let it go? If you fail to remember, then let me tell you that we were friends first. I want that friendship back, Manik."

"I don't," he informed her, his face devoid of any emotion as he walked over and held the door open, "you may leave now."

"Mani-"

"I said leave, didn't I?" he told her again, and she knew just what to say then to get his attention.

"How's Nandini?"

Manik narrowed his eyes then, shocked at how she knew about Nandini. This girl was clearly giving a lot of surprises today. "Who told you about Nandini?"

"Doesn't matter," she said with a slight smile, knowing she'd gotten his attention now. "I just want to tell you that you can trust me, really. If you guys need any help, I'm there for you. Just give me a call whenever you require my services, okay?"

"See, you tell me to trust you, but you don't really let me," he informed her. "How do I even believe your words when you refuse to tell me how you got this information?"

"Not now, Manik; I'll tell you when the time is right. You're not ready yet," she simply told him before walking past him and outside the house.

Manik couldn't express his annoyance at those words, but then he paused for a while as the parallels came to mind.

I'll tell you when the time is right, she'd said to him.

You have to wait for the right time, he'd been continuously telling Nandni.

At that moment, Manik knew that he felt what she felt. If the right time annoyed him so much, then why couldn't it annoy Nandini? He knew that he wouldn't be able to trust Alya before she told him the entire truth. If Nandini was to trust him, then it had to be the same.

Alright then, he thought to himself, I'll tell you everything today, Nandini.

"Navya?" Nandini called out for her friend, who simply hummed in response. "Do we really have to do this?"

"The principal personally asked us, Nandini," her friend said as she set up the camera. "Testimonials for the trustees are a great idea."

"Yeah, I know that," she muttered as she bit her lip, "but it'll take some time, won't it?"

"Just an hour or so," Navya told her and she immediately looked at the clock. It was almost two-thirty and she knew that Manik would be here soon. She let the sympathy take over as she thought about him outside the gates, waiting continuously for her arrival, and being utterly disappointed. She didn't know why it bothered her so much.

"I'll get the students," she offered, and then quickly said, "If you're done with that then... erm, Manik is coming to pick me up in, like, five more minutes. Do you mind informing him that I'll be late?"

Navya looked at her friend and with utter annoyance, she groaned, "Oh come on Nandu, really?"

"I feel bad, okay?" Nandini tried to justify herself.

"You feel bad for the guy who kidnapped you and married you against your will?" Navya questioned, crossing her arms over her chest and Nandini slapped her forehead.

"I don't know, Navya. You're right; what he did is unforgivable but he's been acting so nice and patient and caring with me since the first day that I... I really don't want to treat him with such hatred anymore," Nandini confessed and her friend rolled her eyes.

"Seriously, Nandu?"

"Can you please just do it?" she pleaded again. "I'm sorry, okay? He's got a black BMW and he... erm... he looks like... well, really tall like about six feet, dark hair, sharp jawline, erm..."

"That's very brief, thanks," Navya scoffed.

"I suck at this, sorry! Just go and ask him if he's Manik Malhotra," she suggested as she grabbed her bag and rushed off, not giving Navya any more chances to complain.

Navya simply sighed once more before leaving.

Manik had been waiting for fifteen minutes now and he was just so eager to meet Nandini and tell her the truth. It shocked him that he was actually waiting for this for this as he didn't know what her reaction would be. He was expecting anger from her, but he just felt like it would be short-lived. He could tell that she was starting to enjoy his company, and in his heart, he felt like this would make it easier for her to forgive him for all that he'd done.

After some more minutes of waiting, he saw a short, braided girl approach him and ask, "Are you Manik Malhotra?"

"Yeah," he quietly answered, a little confused, and Navya tried very hard to control all her anger and act civil with him.

"Nandini has some work so she'll be an hour late. She told me to inform you," Navya said and his face fell almost immediately. It angered her to see his disappointment because she was convinced that it was all an act. Why would he be disappointed if he didn't even care about her?

"I wish you'd stop acting for once," she bitterly told him before he could say another word. "We all know this is a farce then why do you even bother? You don't care about her, and she doesn't care either."

"Hey, look, look," he tried to stop her but she wouldn't hear another word.

"You know what? She's going to leave you," she spat and he immediately felt his heart stop. What? "The moment you tell her why you married her in the first place, she'll leave you. So why don't you just do all of us a favor and tell her the truth? You don't want her and she doesn't want to so just tell her, Mister Malhotra, and let her go free."

After saying that, she simply huffed and turned away, leaving without bearing him a second glance. Manik stay frozen over there, his eyes slowly widening as he took in her words. He felt so empty inside that he just could explain. He knew why he was feeling the disappointment and the loneliness.

She'll leave, he thought to himself, like everyone else.

She stood there, drowning in the sadness for some more time, but then he tried to gather himself. He'd grown so attached to Nandini that he wasn't ready to let her go as of yet. Frankly, he didn't know if he would ever be able to let her go.

He knew she wouldn't trust him completely if he didn't tell her the truth himself, but he didn't want her to leave either. He knew, at that moment, that keeping her was more important than her trust. If that made him selfish, then so be it, but he couldn't let his wife leave him too. It was just too risky.


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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing amazing amazing...
next chapter plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...poor manik...you write manik really well...he is so attached to her already and she is falling for him too... and navya, never my favorite character and im liking her even less after this... looking forward to seeing them come together.. wonderful update...

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