MaNan FF: The Forbidden Fruit (Chapter 26 on Page 82) (25/05/16)

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"What do you want?" he asked once he saw her approaching him. He was obviously displeased to see her here, even though it was exactly where she should've been.

She took slow and cautious steps towards him, yet she had a seductive smile plastered on her face. They both knew what her actual intentions were.

Once she had finally reached him, she tiptoed to reach his height. He sucked in a breath and she smirked, well aware of the effect she had on him. Her lips lightly brushed against his ears as she whispered, "You."

He couldn't handle it anymore as he let out a groan. She knew her plans were working and she was going to make sure she gave herself a pat on the back later on.

He quickly grabbed her waist and brought her back down, leaning and angling his face so that their lips were inches apart. She licked her lips and he couldn't wait to kiss her. He wanted to kiss her, he needed to kiss her.

She put her arms around his neck slowly and for a brief second, he saw her wedding ring shine under the light. He realized what he was going to do and left her immediately. She seemed shocked to see him stop after he came this far. It was unlike him to have any control of himself when she was around.

"You have to leave, now," he said with gritted teeth. She gave him a look of disbelief before she turned away silently.

He let out a sigh as she left and after exactly five seconds, he punched himself in the face. He deserved it, he really did.

He couldn't believe what he was about to do! He was going to kiss his wife, but he wouldn't allow that to happen. He couldn't have any sort of feelings for her.

Not again.

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Well written 👏
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Originally posted by: i-love-manan

Well written 👏

Update soon



Hi. Thank you for the commenting, glad you think so. First chapter will be up very soon.
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Originally posted by: manya_189

Wow!!
Different n interesting!!



Hello. Thanks for commenting and liking this piece. I am glad you find it interesting.
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Originally posted by: ecstasy.



Hello. Thanks for commenting and liking this piece. I am glad you find it interesting.



Update soon :)
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BEAUTIFUL ND INTERESTING PROLOGUE

CONTINUE SOON:):):)
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Wow the title itself is interesting
Prologue has got me hooked
Will be looking forward to ur updates
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Sure, expect an update soon.
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BEAUTIFUL ND INTERESTING PROLOGUE

CONTINUE SOON:):):)



Thank you very much for commenting. I am pleased to hear that you've liked this. I will be updating very soon.
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Originally posted by: Sumz99

Wow the title itself is interesting
Prologue has got me hooked
Will be looking forward to ur updates



Haha, I spent hours thinking of that title and I am still not satisfied, but it makes me very glad to hear that it worked out and you liked it. Glad you liked the prologue although it is quite short. I will be updating very soon.

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