NiBir FF|| Love is friendship set on fire|| updated Ch 8-pg 35 (13/1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii guys am here with a new ff. I don't know about the future of this story. It just came in my mind and I wrote. I hope you like it😃😃

Love is friendship set on Fire

Prologue

Kabirrr"

Kabir was surrounded in a pool of blood. Nisha was badly crying keeping his head on her lap."Tujhe kuch nhi hoga Kabir...kuch nhi...main tujhe kuch nhi hone dungi...kuch nhi"she said.

A screech of brakes was heard at the hospital and Kabir was rushed to the operation theatre. "Doctor, mere pati ko goli lagi hai...pls save him ...pls...use kuch nhi hoga na...mera aur koi nhi hai uske alawa...doctor.pls use bacha lijiye"Nisha was pleading continously to the doctor. Doctor said that they will try their best and went to the OT.

After 2 hours doctor came out of the OT

Nisha hurried to him. "Doc Kabir...mera Kabir kaisa h...wo theek ho jayega na????? pls kuch boliye na doctor pls..." "Dekhiye madam aap sambhaliye khud ko...patient ki halat bhot serious hai...hum abhi kuch keh nhi sakte...bullet dil ke bhot paas lagi h. humne bullet to nikal diya h. but internal bleeding h...hum koi gurantee nhi de sakte..."



Do you want me to continue?????



INDEX

prologue - pg 1

Chapter 1 - pg 4

Chapter 2 - pg 9






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Posted: 10 years ago
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Of course piya
Continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Piya(I wl call U Piyu 😳)

Excellent Title👏👏👏

Prologue was shocking😲👏👏👏

Pls Kabira ko kuch math hone denaa...

Waiting 4 its continuiation😃

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice prologue piya👏
kabir ko goli lagi hai(that was not nice😆)
nisha ka kabir ke alawa koi nahi hai?🤔
plz do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Of course piya
Continue soon 👍🏼

Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Piya(I wl call U Piyu 😳)

Excellent Title👏👏👏

Prologue was shocking👏

Pls Kabira ko kuch math hone denaa...

Waiting 4 its continuiation😃

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

Thank you...
You will have to wait a little as my exams are going on will continue as soon as possible😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelanju

nice prologue piya👏

kabir ko goli lagi hai(that was not nice😆)
nisha ka kabir ke alawa koi nahi hai?🤔
plz do continue soon...

Thanx😊
In this story there are no family bonds😆😆😆
You will have to wait..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start.
shot in the beginning itself.
are we going to get flashbacks?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

nice start.

shot in the beginning itself.
are we going to get flashbacks?

thank u😊
Yup u guessed it right😃😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

Gr8 start...pls update soon...

thank u😊

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