NiBir FF|| Love is friendship set on fire|| updated Ch 8-pg 35 (13/1) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: zaara610

Interesting prologue..

please don't kill kabiraa..😆
continue soon

thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ofcourse yaar continue n pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
sorry guyz for late update
actually i was busy in exams

part 1


Nisha fell on the seats with tears continously flowing from her eyes. "No nothing will happen to my Kabir...i will not let anything happen to him.."she told herself...
she sat their and remembered their first meeting...

***Flashback***

In St. Xavier's College
A beautiful girl was running in the college corridoor finding something...looking at her watch twenty times...as if getting late. Suddenly she bumped with someone and was about to fall when she was caught by two musculine hands. She had closed her eyes with fear. After a few seconds she opened her eyes only to get drowned in the hazel brown eyes. They both were lost in each other when the bell rang bringing them out of their dreamland.
"Kabir chal late ho rhe hai" Rohan called out to him. Rohan was Kabir's best friend and only companion. Kabir made her stand straight. "thank you"Nisha said still drowned in his eyes. "thank you...tumhe thank u ke jagah sorry bilna chahiye miss" replied Kabir. "sorry...wo main actually is college mein new hu and mujhe class nhi mil rha tha tum beech mein a gaye and main takra gayi. actualy meri galti nhi hai" she said innocently.
Kabir mesmerized seeing her innocence her simplicity...but he composed himself and showed her class. then he went away with Rohan. Nisha was still standing there and gazed at his retreating figure when someone snapped fingers before her. "Nishu kha khoyi hui hai chal hum class ke liye late ho jayenge." said Kirti, Nisha's friend. "khi nhi chal" they both went to their class.
In the class though professor was giving lecture but Kabir's mind was occupied by the morning incident. He was still lost in those beautiful eyes and sweet melodious voice.
Kabir Singh Rathode was the son of Mumbai Police cpmmisioner Arjun Singh Rathode and a big business woman Vasundhara Rathode. His parents got seperated when he was seven years old. It was really tough for a young aged boy to suddenly part from his father. His mother got busy in work and had no time for him. He grew up with Rohan and he was his best buddy with whom he could share all his talks.
After college Nisha went home with Kirti. It was a big villa. Nisha lived there with his uncle Vijaynath Gangwal who was a famous politician and his cousin Umesh Gangwal. Nisha went up straight to her room and took out a photograph under her pillow. "Maa papa aap kyun mujhe chodkar kyun chale gaye ...main kitni akeli ho gayi hu...par aapko pata hai aaj na mujhe college mein koi mila hai...uska naam Kabir hai...mujhe to use dekhne se hi dil aur tez dhadakne lagta hai. I am in love with him mom...i love him...dekhna main jaldi hi usse dosti karke use apni dil ki baat bataungi...love u mom." the whole day went by Nisha was smiling continuously like a fool. She lost her parents 5 years ago. Her father was a famous business man. He had put all his property in the name of Nisha. Her uncle only looked after her to get access to all the property.
i don't lnow when will be the next update due to some laptop issues😃
and i also don't know how i have written...theis my first time writing an ss coments and critisism welcomed😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
res b4 PM🤣

UNRES😆

Awesome Update Piyu👏👏👏👏

Started with little sadness of Nishu's tears...😊 But FB scenes was worth watching😃 I loved it👍🏼

Aaahaaa... 😉NiBir ki pehli meeting😉 takarana.. Falll...😳

Nishu ko pyaar ho gaya at first sight😆🤣

Kabira bhi kho gaya Nishu ke eyes aur voice par...😆🤣

So.. 😛Both Miss their parents... in diff ways..😊

Ek ke paas parents hothe huye bhi na ke barabar hai doosare ke na hothe huye bhi pass hai... Wat AN IRONY...!!!!! 👍🏼Well Written Piyu👏👏👏

Thanks 4 PM😳(I res ed b4 PM🤣)

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
awesome piya... ohho.love at first sight ha... ❤️ do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Lub at first sight atleast for nishu k ka pata nahin. Awrsome .gofu wall clock
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Finally... update...nice bt kabir theek hua ya nhii yeh abhi bhi ek mystery h...
Flashback part...kabir nishu ki innocence kho gya awww so cuteee...waitng for nxt part...bt plz yeh mystery try to release soon k kabir theek ho gya h...loved d update...thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awesome piya... ohho.love at first sight ha... ❤️ do continue soon...

thank u mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

nice update piya👍🏼

thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awesome👍🏼
love at first sight❤️
feel bad fr NiBir😭

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