Manan ff -Tum hi ho (part :73&74pg -139) thread 2 pg-1

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TUM HI HO

PART : 1

Hey guyz i m new on india forum n i m writting my first story on this hope u will like this n if u like it than plz comment than i will continue

So the story started

(Alarm rings n manik wakes n sees the time it's 10:30 n manik an toh gya main n he gets ready quickly n reaches at one restaurant n girl is waiting fr her he closes her eyes from back )

Manik : sorry sorry ...
Nandini tum janti ho na yeh alarm humsha bhjta hi nhi

Nandini : ab bhane marne band karo manik tumhe pta humhe 10 bje Milena now it's 11 manik tum humesha ESE hi krte ho

(Manik gives her rose n say sorry na baba n kisses on her hand
N nandini smiles
A man his standing beside the wall covering his face with gun pointing towards manik
Nandini gets up n comes toward manik for kissing him
She puts her hands on him face )

Manik : aaj toh bhut romance ke mood main ho

(Nandini get close to manik face than guns sound come n nandini l eaves manik n about to fall on ground manik catches her in arms manik start shouting )
Manik: nandini...
Nandini

(Nandini taking long long breath n manik n his tear comes out n say manik .Manik wipes nandini tear )

Manik : be strong tumhai kuch nhi hoga
(Manik start shouting call the ambulance )
Manik: nandini plz hosh main rhao plz
(Manik nandini ko khod main ushta h aur car main bitha tha hai n start driving the car )
Manik: main tumhai kuch nhi hone dunga

Nandini : manik I love u plz do one promise

Manik : ya say

Nandini : mere Jane ke bad tum kisi achi ladhki se shaddhi karoge aur humesha kuch rahonge

Manik : nandini kya bol rhi ho tumhe kuch nhi hoga

Nandini : plz manik mere liye

Manik : OK promise but main tumhai kuch nhi hone dunga

(Manik is thinking yeh jishne bhi kiya hai main ushai chodunga nhi)


Guys plz tell me howz my story n leave yr comments if u like than I will post next parts
Thank u




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KHANSHAMA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz do it next part its nice updates..bt plz dont do this dont die a nandani.plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start
bt seprate manan
continue soon
stay blessed
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Sorry to say
Dear but
I read this story
On watpad
Are u the one
Who wrote it
on watpad?
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Tum hi ho
Part : 2
(They reaches the hosipal manik enters the n shouting for the doctor n doc. Comes nandini ko ICU main lekr jate hai manik is leaves nandini hand n manik bend down n cry shout nandini... N his phone rings it's cabir)

Cabir: hello manik

Manik: cabir (in very low voice )

Cabir : kya hua manik

Manik : voh nandini...

Cabir : kya hua nandini ko
Voh thik toh hai na

Manik : ushe goli lgi h ( n manik start crying )

Cabir : tu roh mt manik nandini ko kuch nhi hoga

Manik : pta nhi kuch smj nhi aa RHA kya karu

Cabir : hum SB ate h konso hospital

Manik : city hospital

Cabir : tu chinta mt kr nandini will be fine

Cabir informs everyone ( navya, multi , alia , Abhi , druv , nandini's mom n dad n manik's dad )
(Nandini's mom : Meera
Nandini's dad : Akash
Manik's dad : Vikram )

Meera : kya hua nandini ko ( secreming)

Manik tells everything

Mukti : manik aisa kon kr skta h
Nandini ki kisi se kya duhmani thi

Manik : voh goli mujh PR chlna chte Thai lekin by chance nandini comes
In front of me .
Meri vjha se nandini aaj iss halt main

Akash : Nhi beta tum tension mat lo meri beti bhut strong h ushai kuch nhi hoga dekh Lena

Vikram : main police ko inform kr deta hn .

( manik continuously walking around the operation theater n after 1 hour doc. Comes out )

Manik : howz nandini

Doctor: humhne goli toh nikl di h but

Manik: but kya doc.

Doctor: kuch kha Nhi ja skta
Humhene observation PR rkh diya h kl subha hi kuch kha ja skta h

Manik : kya main nandini se mil skta hn

Doctor : ya sure but only one person

Manik rushes towards nandini
He holds hand n say wake up nandini ab bhut hogya
He kisses on her hand than chicks n on head n Cry's

Next morning bhi nandini ko hosh nhi ata

Doc. Comes checks n comes out

Doc. : she is in coma

Manik : what?

Everyone get shocked n meera start crying

Part : 3

Manik goes towards nandu n remembering her laugh sound

Manik: Nandini tumhe uthna padhega Abhi toh humhne sth bhudhe hona nandini I can't leave without u plz wake up plz wake up
(Manik is crying very badly in her arms)

(Manik comes out all r very sad
Police comes manik tell everything to police )

Police : manik apko humhre sth chlna hoga

Manik goes wid police

Police ask from manik kya kise koe dhushmani h

Manik : I don't have any idea yeh SB kisne kiya h

Police : OK u can go we try r best in find the shooter

Manik go to hospital n say

Everyone r very sad n manik goes to nandini n says
Manik : nandini plz get up I need u n everyone needs u

(Manik tears dropped on nandini hand
N nandini moves her fingers
Manik seen this n calls the doc. N everyone comes there)

Manik : nandini ne Abhi apni finger move kari

Nandu's mom : kya ( happily )

Doc.: coma main patience SB kuch son skta aur feel lekin nandini ne react kiya it's good I m sure Dr. Patel experiment se nandini will get out of coma

Everyone gets happy

Manik: who is doc. Patel

Doc.: he is best doc. Of London
Main aaj unhai phn karunga voh Mumbai ae hue h

Manik : aap SB ghr jao aur rest karo I m wid nandini

Nandu's mom : Nhi beta main nandu ko chudh kr nhi jaungi

Manik : don't I wid her uncle aap aunty ko lekr jao

Nandu's dad : meera tumhri tbiyt krhab ho jaegi aur nandini ko jb hos aega toh ushai acha LGega

Cabir : main tere sth hi rukta hn

Mukti : take care manik

SB chle jate h

Manik is setting wid nandini n say do din bd humhri shaddhi humhne kitna SB plan kiya tha n manik remember one scene

Two day's back
Manik comes to nandini house for shopping for their marriage

Manik goes to nandini room

Nandini calling maa maa plz meri chain bnd nhi ho rhi plz band krdo
Manik touch her back n uski chain. Band karta h

Nandini : manik tum

Manik : nandini tum ab tk ready nhi hoe humhe shopping Jana h

Nandini : manik bs hogya

Again n again her hair touching her eyes manik touch her hair n sets it
Nandini blushes n goes to washroom

Nandini : chale manik I m ready

Manik : koe roj itna beautiful kaisa lg skta

Manik come close to nandini about kiss her but nandini push him n say

Nandini : chle manik late ho RHA h

Manik n nandini in car

Nandini : manik SB kitna jldi ho gya na ek hafte bd humri shaddhi h pta hi nhi chla time kB bit gya

Manik : hmmm...

Nandini : manik jb SB acha ho RHA hota humhre tabh hi kuch glt ho jata h
( says in worried )

Manik : ab SB acha hoga don't worry holding her hands

Flashback over

Manik is in tear n thinking nandini tumhara Dr bilkul shi tha aur voh Jo koe bhi jishne tumhre sth yeh SB kiya main ushe nhi chodhuga

Plz guyz if u like the story than plz do comment
n than i will continue to post
thank u all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Continue soon
And one more
thing u
are an amazing
Writer
And did a very good work
SooOrry can't say more
Bcz I knew what is
going to be next
But yaah update early
Taki hame bhi toh pata chale
Uske baad kya hoga
Love
Diya😛😛😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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awesome update yar
jst loved it
manik was to pain to see her like th
bt nandu cant live him like tht so she shd come back to him
loved the past track

continue soon
keep smiling

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Tum hi ho

part : 4



Manik goes to washroom n cabir is sleeping outside one enters in nandini room n say hello nandini
They boyz is harshad
Harshad : I am sorry nandini main tumhai kuch nhi krna chata tha lekin tum bich main main aa gye
Lekin acha h manik is very hurt by this ab uski bari h voh phle toh Bach gya ab nhi bachega I will kill him

Nandini starts breathing very fastly

Harshad : kya hua nandini Dr lg gya

Manik comes out tb tk harshad is gone from there

Manik : nandini nandini (n calls )doc. Doc.

cabir : kya hua manik

Manik: nandini is not fine main wash room gya main aya toh nandini ke yeh hlt thi

Doc. Comes n start to check nandini

Doc. : Nurse injection lekr ao

Manik is worried

Manik : kya hua nandini ko

Now nandini stop breathing

Manik shouts nandini n bend down
Cabir console him

Doc . start giving nandini electric shock after 1 min. Nandini start breathing

Doc. : don' t worry manik now nandini is fine voh ab coma se bhi bhr h

Manik is gets n gets happy

Manik : lekin nandini ko hosh kB aega

Doc. : kl tk

Cabir calls everyone

Manik can' t control his happiness n kisses nandini

Cabir is also happy

Next day

Manik wakes up n see nandini

Manik : aur kina intzar karvaogi open yr eyes

Manik watching nandini for an hour n she open her eyes

Manik is very happy n has tear in his eyes nandini wipes his tear

Manik : kuch bola na nandini

Nandini start coughing manik gets her up give him water n hugs him

Manik : pta main kitna Dr gya tha

Nandini : auch ( having pain )

Manik : sorry sorry

Nandini : I m f9 now manik bs thodha sa pain h

Doc. Comes in

Doc. : how r u nandini

Nandini about say something but manik. Before her

Manik : ushai pain ho RHA h

Doc. : goli lgi pain toh hoga hi
Vaise ek BT bolu nandini manik is very. Protective fr u

Nandini blushes n. Say

Nandini : voh toh h doc.

Manik also smiles

Manik tum bhr jao Abhi uski threading krni h

Manik goes out n sees nandini both r smiling

Manik comes out n cabir Wakes up

Maink : cabir I m so happy

Cabir : nandini ko hosh aa gya ?

Manik : haan

Cabir hugs manik

N inform everyone



Tum hi ho

part : 5

Everyone r in nandini room all are happy n planning fr manan wedding

Nandini : sorry I filling
little tired so need to rest

Mukti : are sorry ki kya BT hum bd main yeh SB discuss kr lenge tum rest karo

Alia : ya

All gone except manik remain there

Manik : r u f9 nandini

Nandini : manik come here

( manik comes to nandini
Nandini hold manik hand)

Nandini : tum tension mt lo I m alright vaise bhi main tumhra picha agle 7 jnam tk nhi chudhungi

( they both laugh n suddenly manik has in tear n happy to see nandini laughing )

Nandini : wht happen manik

Manik : are baba this is tear of happiness

Manik wipes his tear n kisses on nandini hand n than on her head
N help nandini to lay down on bed .

Manik : chalo u have to take rest na

Manik about to go nandini hold his hand

Nandini : plz manik be wid me

Manik sit there n holds nandini hand n nandini sleep

Manik is looking nandini n happy to see her alive .

After something manik comes out n cabir is outside

Cabir : ho gye personal talks

Manik : cabir

Cabir : acha kuch pta chla kisne shot kiya tha

Manik : nhi Abhi kuch pta nhi chla
Pta nhi kon
Ek br pta chl who is he than I will not live him

Cabir : manik relax

Doc. Comes

Manik : when will be nandini discharge

Doc. : after two three days
She can't able to walk properly fir three week

Manik : kya hum nandini aaj ghr nhi le ja skte I will hire a personal nurse

Doc. : k yr choice aur koe bhi problem ho u can call me immediately n nandini ko month tk exercise krne ke liye anaa padhega

Manik : ya sure

Doc. : main discharge paper ready karta hn

Manik tell everyone today is nandini discharging from the hospital n all happy

Manik : kya main nandini ko apne ghr le ja skta fr 1 week plz aunty
Aap bhi mere ghr Lena uncle bhi out of india gye hai
( manik convince nandini mom )

Mukti : toh manik hum ghr ja kr nandini ke welcome ki tyri krti hai

All gone accept manik

Nandini : SB kha hai

Manik : SB ghr gye h tum aaj ghr ja rhi hn

Nandini : really manik I m so happy
I missing dad

Manik : don't worry tum unshai vedio chat kr Lena

Doc. Comes

Doc. : howz u nandini

Nandini : better

Doc. : good

Nurse come wid wheel chair

Nandini get tensed

Doc. : don' t be worried nandini this temporary u having pain na so u can't walk properly

Nandini get relax n manik comfort her

Nandini sit on wheel chair

They come to car n manik helps nandini to sit in car

N manik sits with her

They reaches home

Nandini : yeh toh tumhara ghr h na manik

Manik : u r wrong ab yeh tumhara bhi ghr hai nandini kya hau humhri shaddhi nhi lekin it' s yr home also

Nandini : lekin manik

Manik : lekin vekin kuch nhi nandini main aunty ko bhi bna liya h tum 1 week tk yhi rhaugi

Nandini smiles n manik gets out n nandini sits on wheel chair nurse come wid them

Everyone welcome nandini n go to bed room says aap SB bhr jae mujhe inki threading krni h

All goes out it's nite time

Mukti : chalo manik ab humhai chlna chiye

All gone

Manik : dad aap bhi ja kr so jae ab
N aunty aap bhi

Nandini mom : I want spend some wid my doll

Manik : ya sure aunty

Nurse comes out n she goes in the room n talk to nandini fr an hour n manik is waiting sitting in hall

Guyz hope u like this smally smally se 2 parts if u like it than plz do commetts n tomorrow i will upload 3 parts
Thank u enjoy it



sadiya51 thumbnail
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Hey I've read this ff on facebook n its really nice
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Tum hi ho

part : 6


Manik goes to nandini room n nandini is sleeping n he goes n kisses her on head n slept wid her n nurse is sleeping outside n nandini gets up holds manik n sleep again n after some manik gets up goes out for drinking water n nandini is dreaming that somebody comes in their room kills manik n remebring the word that she listen in coma said by harshad n suddendly gets up n shout manik n saw on her other manik is not she gets worried n remove her blanket n try to get up n screaming very badly manik manik n fallen down on floor n manik hears the sound of nandini n rushes to nandini room n see nandini is fallen on ground n sit down hold her

Manik : nandini kya hua

Nandini gets happy to see manik n hold his collar

Nandini : manik tum thik ho na

She hugs manik n crying

Manik get tensed

Manik : nandini kya hua why r crying

He wipes her tear try to consule her

Manik : I m all right don't worry

He puts nandini on couch

Manik : tumhne koe bura sapna dekha hoga

Nandini : manik I scared ki tumhai kuch hona

Manik : I m wid u always mujhe kuch nhi hoga

They holding each other hand

N manik hugs nandini n sleep wid here

Nandini is thinking about that harshad voice asking to herself mujhe yeh kiski aawj yaad aa rhi h

N they both sleep

N first nandini wake up n seeing n love is sleeping

N after sometime manik also gets up n kises on nandini chin n say

Manik : gud mrng nandini

Nandini : gud mrng manik

Nandini start coughing

N Manik gives him water

Manik : I m sorry nandini mujhe tumhe thodhi Dr ke liye dur Jana padhega for taking bath

Nandini smiles

Navya comes in nandini room

Navya : nandini kisi ho I m sorry main I m not wid u that time

Nandini : navya it's k tum toh apni mom se milene gye thi na howz yr mom now

Navya : she is f9 but tum btao howz u

Nandini : I m also f9 don't worry

Nandini mom comes n nurse give medicines to nandini

Nandini mom : gud morning

Navya : hello aunty

Nandini mom : hello beta howz yr mom

Navya : she is f9 now

Everyone comes wid the gift for nandini n cards n flower also

Nandini : guys thank u so much

Manik comes

Nandini manik looks at other n smiles

Cabir : esharo esharo main bate ho rhi h

Nandini blushes

Manik : cabir tu bhi na

Mukti : CHLO sare boyz goes out main nandini ko tyr krti hn

Everyone goes out n nurse come n do do threading of nandini

Mukti comes wid nandini outside

Manik : guys mujhe nandini ko hospital lekr Jana bd main milte h

They reaches the hospital

They doc. Start nandini exercises

Aise hi 1 month passes

manik n nandini sleeping in each other arms


Tum hi ho

part : 7

Nandini is getting ready as the last day to go hospital for exercise n manik gets up

Manik : Nandini ( rubbing his eyes )

Nandini : gud mrng manik

Manik : gud mrng

Nandini : ab jldi utho aaj tumhari recording h na

Manik : main ready ho kr aata hn hum sth main chlte h

Nandini : nhi manik tum late ho jaoge AGR mujhe drop karoge
I will Go myself

Manik : nandini

Nandini : manik plz

Manik : OK f9 tum meri car le Jana
Give one kiss now

( Manik pulls nandini toward himself n nandini also come closure to Manik n about kiss him
Nandini calls ring in b/ w )

Nandini : manik wait

Manik : don't go plz aaj toh kiss de do

Nandini : mom ka call h

Manik leaves nandini n upset wid nandini n nandini pics up the call n talks to her mom in the mean while manik goes to washroom n than manik comes out from the washroom

Nandini : gussa ho sorry baba

( n kisses on her chin )

Nandini : all the best manik

Manik smiles N nandini goes outside n she sits in manik car n somebody is watching nandini hiding at corner of the wall n that guys says oh no

Manik is getting ready n nandini is thinking about manik n driving the car n smiling n push the break but car's breaks are fail n nandini gets tense n again pushes the break n driving the car very fastly n she calls manik

Manik : mujhe miss kr rhi ho

Nandini : manik manik

Manik : kya hua. Nandini

Nandini : manik car ki break nhi lg rhi

Manik : what where r u nandini

Nandini tells the place name n shouts manik his car get strike with tree n his phn fall outside the car

Manik : hello nandini nandini kya hua

Manik rushes n starts the car n he is looking very tense n controlling himself n reaches that place n nandini is alright only get some scratches on hand n wound on her head

Manik get relax n comes outside from his car n rushes toward nandini

Manik : r u okay nandini ( looking very tensed )

Nandini : manik I m f9 don't worry

Manik : yeh SB meri glti na main tumhai apni car main ane ke liye na yeh SB hota

( nandini holds his hand).

Nandini : look at me I m f9 okay mujhe kuch nhi hua

Manik : kon h Jo again again trying to attack on me but har time tum meri vjha tum khtre main padh rhi hn

Nandini comes close to manik n about to kiss him but doc. Comes in do the bandange of nandini

( they were in medical clinic that time )

They comes out

N sits in car manik is looking very tensed

Nandini : humhai police ko inform kr dena chahiye is bare main

N manik informs the police n ask him for police security at their mansion

Nandini : plz Manik don't take tension SB thik ho jaega

manik : kya thik hoga nandini kuch thik nhi ho RHA jb tk voh admi pakdha nhi tb tk kuch thik nhi hoga

Nandini holds manik hand

Nandini : relax manik everything will be f9

Nandini having pain in head n puts hand on her head n manik notice her

Manik : r u okay

Nandini : ya ( smiles )

Manik also smiles

They reaches home

Tum hi ho

part : 8


No one is there at home

Nandini : u go manik

Manik : go. Mtlb I m not going anywhere

Nandini : go fr yr recording manik

Manik : main tumhai akle jodh kr khi nhi ja rha

Nandini : manik jb se mujhe goli tum khi u always remain wid me but u have to do yr work also na

Manik : no means I not going u go to room n take rest

Nandini : I m also not going to take rest I m doing work

Manik : OK f9 I m going but u don't go anywhere jb tk main na aun ( giving angry looks)

Nandini : manik I don't remain alone I m calling navya n navya will come k but u too have take r of u
Manik remain still than nandini moves manik hand n kisses

Nandini : manik thodhi Dr ki toh bt hai

They both go upstair nandini lay on bed manik cover her wid blanket n kisses on her head n start going but nandini hold his hand n manik turn nandini smiles manik also smiles n leave

N navya come to her

Navya : yeh kya hua tumhai hai bagvan

Nandini : calm down I m OK voh car ki break fail ho gye thi

Navya : kya kaise

Nandini : I don't know who is he
Mujhe bhut Dr lg RHA khi voh manik ko kuch. Krna de ( n start crying)n navya console her

Navya : nandini tum preshn mt ho mata rani hai na SB thik ho jaega

Evening time
Manik comes n nandini Is sleeping
N navya is reading magzine setting on couch
Manik enters nandini room

Navya gets up n manik ko kich kr bhr le kr ati h

Manik : yeh kya kar rhi ho tum

Navya : voh nandini so rhi thi na

Manik : so wht

Navya : humhai tumhe kuch khena

Manik : wht ?

Navya : tum jante nandini kitni pareshan ush accident ke karan
She was crying

Suddenly cabir comes n say

Cabir : kyo why she was crying

Manik tells everything to cabir

Cabir : manik yeh mamla toh bhut serious hota ja RHA we have to do something

Manik : ya tum niche betho main ata hn u calls everyone n ask them to come her I have to tell something

Cabir : k hum dono jate h

Manik goes to nandini room

Manik touch her face move his hand on her face n kiss on her n say

Manik : I m so mean tum apni prshani mere samne dikha ti nhi taki mujhe koe dukh na ho aur main humsha gussa hota rhta hn n manik tear cames from his eyes falls on nandini face

N nandini wakes up

Nandini : manik wht happen why u r sad I m okay

N nandini gets up n hug manik

Both r gone out of world get lost in each other arm trying to consule each other both having tear n BG song

Hai dil ye mera
Mujhe hardum ye poochta:
Kyun hai mujhe tujhse itni wafaa..
Kyun teri hasrat
Hai har khwahish se badhkar mujhe
Kyun naam tera hi leti zubaan..

"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Or de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salamat rakhun

Tere hi baare mein, hai ab har zikr mera
Huaa hai kaisa asar yeh tera
Koi naseehat, na chaahun main koi salaah
Jo rooh ne mere tujhe chun liya

"Saathi tera ban jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Aur de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salaamat rakhun

Hai dil khamakhaa pareshan badaa
Isko koi samjah de zaraa
Ishq mein fanaa ho jaana
Hai dastoor yahi
"Jisme ho sabar ki fitrat"
Wo ishq hi nahin!
Samajh bhi ja aye dil mere
Kya hai ye maajra..

"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Aur de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salaamat rakhun


n cabir knock the door n breaks their hug they clear each other tear n looking each other eye
So here i posted 3 parts
Enjoy n don't forget to do comment
love u all




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