#3 Tum Hi ho Part:132 (love is u..)pg-138 12jan.(compeleted)

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Hey... thank u all of u.. the all credit goes to u... that i create 3rd thread of this story so i only want to say that keep supporting



Part : 100

At 1am
Manik n nandini sleeping in eachother arm n babies start crying n manik wakes n manik moves nandini in half sleep n say " nandini... wake up na... go n make them quite na" n nandini get up in jerk n sat up n say "why they r crying "n nandini get up from the bed n nandini take the baby from cradle n manik is sitting on bed seeing her n nandini comes to him by touching baby with her n saying "aru... kya hogye mere bacha.. nini nhi aa rhi han... " n nandini sit on bed n try to make him sleep but arnav is not in mood to sleep n manik says " lao nandini give me i make him sleep aru..wants dat dad make him sleep na " n nandini giving arnav to manik says " okay manik u also try i don't think so ki he will be sleep today night "n manik taking baby in his hand say " why... aru u will sleep na muma ko aur dad ko preshn nhi karoge na haina " n manik moving baby to make him sleep n nandini looking so happy by seeing manik like this n manik says " aru.. plz sleep dekho yr brother is so gud boy he is sleeping so nicely na "n than Arjun also start crying n nandini say " manik... why u say dat " n nandini go take him also from cradle n ly him down on bed n both try to make them sleep for 1 hour n talk to them but they both r not in mood to sleep they want to do masti n nandini lap arnav is there n in manik hand arjun n nandini say " manik... i don't think so they r mood to sleep so lets go outside wid them " manik say " r u mad nandini... can't see the time " n nandini say "manik... but babies also want dat plz manik... let's go na plz... " manik say " nandini... no we can go in garden na " n nandini make faces n say "okay.." n nandini say "manik... wait ..
I m just coming u remain wid babies " n manik say " where "nandini says " manik... wait na " n nandini kept the baby on bed wid manik n she come after 10 min. N than take one baby n say " manik chlo " n manik also get taking baby n say " nandini where u were gone " n nandini say " come wid me u will came to know " n they reaches garden n manik is stops n suprise to see the garden is lightning so beautifully with candles n mat is spread on grass n manik say " wao nandini tum ne itni jldi intna sb kaise kr liya " n nandini smiles n nandini say " lets sit" n they both sit n nandini say " manik... wait main babies ke toys lekr ati hn"n she go n brings their toys n comes n they both play wid them n after sometime babies slept n manik n nandini both take the deep breath of relaxation n both say in a union " finally.. "n both smiles seeing eachother n ly down on mat beside baby n both r now looking at sky n manik hold nandini hand n nandini looks toward manik n manik says looking at sky " nandini... babies chahe jintne bhi rate jagae i m ready to awake thank u nandini for giving such a beautiful gift of life " n now manik looks toward nandini n nandini fully lost in him n than both looks into eachother eyes n manik hold her sholder n make her come closure to him n nandini says slowly " ma..."n manik puts his finger on her lips n say " sh..." n than he come close to her face n put his lips on her lips n moves lips up n down inside her mouth n nandini also respond in same manner n they both stops for oxygen n manik getup n tear fall from his eyes n nandini also get up n hold him from back n put her chin on manik shoulder n manik immidaitly wipe his tear n nandini say " kya hua manik... " n manik say nthng n nandini again say "manik... say something " manik hold her from back kiss it n say "nandini i luv u " n nandini kiss on manik face n say " i love u more dan u " n nandini about to leave him but manik say " plz remain like this " n nandini stop n both close their eyes n lost in eachother n manik thinks nandini... is so painfull to smile in front of u in this condition but i have to do this for yr smile " n manik see nandini is sleep on his shoulder n he make her ly down comfortably n see kiss on her forhead n see babies also n tear again fall from his eyes n he also ly on mat n sleep

Next afternoon both manik n nandini sleeping till 1 pm
N nandini open her eyes n see babies r also sleeping n manik too..
N nandini prays to god "kash sb kuch ise taraha acha rhai " n manik also get up n see nandini is also getup n he get up n peck her lips n say " gud mrng nandu " n than manik take is phn n immidiatly stand n nandini ask worriedly " manik... sb thik hai na" n manik say "it's 1 pm nandini.." n nandini also get up in jerk n say "oh my god manik.. hum itne dr tk sote rhai " n they hurriedly do everything n nandini see her phn there is mukti's many misscalls n manik call somebody n say " i m just coming " n nandini about to go for bath n manik stops her by holding her hand n say " nandini mujhe khi jana hai so plz breakfast oh sorry lunch krlena " n nandini about to ask something but manik peck her lips n say "bye... "n he goes n after sometime mukti arrives there while nandini is taking lunch n mukti go n sit wid her n say " nandini... kitne call kare maine tumhai pta hai " n nandini say " voh mukti.. rt ko we slept late so subha need bhi late khuli " n they talk for many hours n play wid babies now it's 6 pm n nandini try to call manik n manik is not picking up the call n nandini worry is vissible on her face n mukti notice her say " nandini main kabse dekh rhi hn u were looking so disturbed sb kuch thik hai na " n nandini say " pta nhi mukti manik subha bina btae hi chala gya aur ab phn bhi nhi kr rha " mukti put hand on her hand n say "nandini... busy hoga tabhi call pick nhi kr rha vrna voh kabhi aisa krta hai "n nandini says "u r right mukti main hi kuch jada soch rhi hn "
Now 10 pm n mukti now also wid nandini n she knows nandini is worried but she can't do anything n nandini sitting on couch head down n mukti say "nandini... plz mere liye coffee bna dungi tumhri coffee bhut achi hoti hai " n nandini nodded n go to kitchen n manik arrives n mukti goes to manik n mukti says "manik... sb thik hai na " n manik says "hmm... " mukti says " manik... plz nandini ko sb bta do she was very worried for u maine ushai bhut hi muskil se sbhala hai " n manik say " plz mukti maine kha tha na hum iss bare main bt nhi karenge " n mukti start crying n put head on manik shoulder n say " manik... yeh sb kyo ho rha hai main nandini ko aisa nhi dekh paungi n aur tumhe " n manik says " plz mukti stop" n manik move his hand on back n say " mukti stop crying agr nandini.. ne tumhai aise dekh liya na " n mukti put her head above n wipes her tear n say "manik.. nandini bhut sad hai jao aur ushe bt karo " n mukti go to room n take the kushi n go home n manik comes to kitchen n hold nandini from back n nandini says "manik... " n she turn n hug him tightly n manik to hold her n nandini remain like this for something n nandini break the hug n make angry faces n manik hold her ear n say "sorry baby phn battery was low can't able to call u bhut hi imp. Meeting thi vrna" nandini ignores him n comes to room n start arranging the thing n manik come there n again n coming in front of her n say "sorry baby " n afTer sometime nandini replies him n say " manik it's not about sorry Manik.. manik i worried for u..mujhe tumhri chinta hai agr tumhai kuch ho jae toh mere kya hoga aur babies ka " n she sees manik having tear in eyes n he hold her face n say " manik.. why u crying
Sb thik hai na " n manik hold nandini n nandini moves her hand on back n say " manik... i m sorry i m not angry wid u plz stop crying " n than manik realize that he is crying in nandini arm n than he wipes his tear n break the hug n nandini about to ask sometime but manik to stop her from saying anything he put his lips on her lips n hold her face n start moving it n nandini also hold his face n lost in kiss n without breaking the kiss manik ly on nandini on bed n they both stop for oxgyen n both r breathing heavily n manik kiss on neck give love bite n nandini moving her hand on manik hair n she maoned his name n manik again kiss her on lips n while kissing now nandini come above him n kiss on his throat n her hand moves down n she start unbuttoning his shirt

manik hold her hand n get up n go to washroom n nandini thinks " manik... ko suddenly kya hogya "


Hope that u guyz like this part if u like this than plz do comment because comment encourage me to write the story more beautifully




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update more so manik is in problem n that problem has to be riya
Edited by devilkhushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved hw manik hided things from nandu hust to keep her happy
Nd go through the pain alone
Eagerly waiting for the suspense that manik is
Hiding from nandu
Love u mehak
Edited by shilvi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulation for your new thread. The update was amazing one. Waiting to see the truth manik is hideing from nandini. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon. Tack care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations dear
For the new thread and 100 chapters
Bless you always
Well deserved
Now the suspense is killing me
Pls reveal soon !!!!
Thanks for The pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new thread
Nice update bt what he is hiding frm nandini
Reveal the secret soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...congrats fr yur new thread. ..
loved the update. ..
eagerly waiting fr the mystery to unfold. ..
I think manik is in problem...n I am thinking it is bcoz of riya...
update soon
Bye tc stay blessed. ..
n thanx fr the pm. ..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I I'm sure dat prblm has has 2 b riya...
Bt aisa h kya jo manik ko itna disturb kr rha h...
Upar aisi knsi chiz h ki jo nandu ko sad kregi...
Hua kya h pls. Yr dnt separate dem...
4 god sake nandu is having 2 children how ll she manage pls. Dnt separate dem...
Hope so koi badi bt nai ho...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all a big Congratulations for the new thread ...
And coming to the update its awesome ...amazing ... marvelous

MaNan scene with the babies were too cute ...

And Manik is suffering alone ... so much ... He is hiding something ...really excited to know what

Loving it

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy
Thanks for pm
Nice update
It was really really cute
Manan moments with babies were really really awesome!!!
Babies rat me uth gye wow!!
Bt what is that manik is hiding from nandini
Want to know that!!
Waiting for next
😊

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