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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Bahut.. Hi emotional ,lovely,cute part tha...

Coz... This update was so ... Long...

Ki muje read karne me 1 hr.. Lag gaya..

Aur in this part... Hug... And hug... Kiss and kiss..

And nandini Abh kaha chali gyi.. Poor manik...

Manik ko bta dena tha plan ke bare me...

AGR bta deta toh ASA na hota...

Aur acha harshad... Pakda gaya manik ka plan ... Successful

Ho gaya... Thank u so much.. For such... Lovely update...

Waiting for the next part

... Jaldi upload karna.. Okay.. Thank u bye...

Luv muskan...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Thank you ...Thank you

SooO much

Dear

For giving

Such a

Wonderful update

Am literally crying

While reading the letter

Part

U really make me

Emotional

Please upload next part today

I can't wait for next part

Eagerly waiting

Love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

TUM HI HO
Part : 21

(Anjali is nandini friend lives in Mumbai n manik also know her too)

Manik : hello

Anjali : manik I call u to ask u that
Is there any problem b/w u n nandini

Manik : no but why asking that

Anjali : nandini booked ticket of Bangalore tomorrow
N she was saying it's urgent

Manik : thank u so much anjali
Kitne bje ki flight hai ?

Anjali : 12 bje ki thi
Everything is alright

Manik : thank u
Bye

N cuts the call

Manik thinks nandini Bangalore gye hai
But flight to take off kr chuki hai
Shit
But yeh toh pta. Chala where is nandini
Main aa RHA ho nandini tumhai lene

Again Manik calls. Rings up
It's anjali only

Anjali : manik u seen new

Manik : no wht happened

Anjali : just switch on yr TV

Manik go down n switching on the TV so desperately

Cabir : manik what happen

Mukti : manik manik

News Bangalore jane wli flight 12 pm the plain is crashed n Abhi kuch kha nhi ja skta who is alive aur who is. Dead

Manik phn fallen down n he can't control himself n tear start falling from his eyes n bend n shouts nandini
Nandini

Everybody controlling manik

Cabir : manik kya hua

Manik : Nandini bhi. Isi fight se Bangalore ja. Rhi thi

Everybody gets shocked n nandini mom fallen down

Alai : aunty

Cabir : alai aur druv n navya tum yhi rhao

Main manik aur mukti hostipal se aur airport se ate h

Navya : main jaungi plz
( crying )

Cabir : OK

Cabir : manik chle
Manik don't worry nandini ko kuch nhi hua hoga

Manik : haan Nandini ko kuch nhi hua hoga

They reach the hospital n check die body
But Nandini is not there
Manik relaxed n they too

Cabir : dekh maine kha tha nandini thik hogi

Mukti : manik tu chinta MAT NANDINI WILL BE FINE

They both check every room of the hospital but they can't find nandini

They calling. Doc. pae no one is listening

Manik holds the collar of doc. ( angrily ) n ask where r all the patience
Doc. : jinta bande ush plain main sare aa chuke aur jo vha mile nhi mile
I can't say any thing about them may be thet r die

Manik get angry n try to punch doc. But control himself

Cabir : manik...

Manik : I m sorry

Doc. Goes manik crying slowly sit on bench

Manik : nandini
Kha dundo tumhai

Mukti : manik nandini ko kuch nhi hua hoga u should not lose hope

Manik : ya hope

Manik is fully heart broken

They reaches home

Alai : kuch pta chla

Manik didn't say any thing n went upstair

Mukti : nandini hospital main nhi mili aur aunty kaisi hai Abhi Abhi SOE hai bhut muskil se

Druv : khi nandini ( having tear in eyes )

Navya : aisa nhi ho skta

All having tear in. Eyes

Mukti : police is finding nandini there

Manik comes upstair n saw the photo of Nandini n say
Where u nandini
Nandini plz vapas aa. Jao

I can't live without u I need u in my life
( from back someone holds manik eyes n manik turn around n see it's Nandini manik hugs her immediately n nandini too
They both having tear in eyes
They break their hug n manik not stopping crying

Nandini. : manik main bilkul thik hn aur tumhare sth hn

Manik again hug nandini n nandini is looking happy

Manik : nandini tum kha chli

How. Dare u think that u will live me

On the other hand

Cabir : CHLO acha h nandini bilkul thik aur SB thik ho gya

Mukti : ya

Navya : CHLO upr chlte hai

Alai : humhai unhai kuch time akle spend krne dete hai

Nandini is sitting in Manik arm

Nandini : manik main tumhse dur nnhi ja ski

Manik main bhut Dr gye tumhai kuch ho na jae

Manik main plain mein bhet hi nhi pae

Manik kuch toh bolo

Naraj ho

Manik : I got scared nandini
Aisa LGA I lose u I loss my life

Nandini : manik PR harshad

Manik : harshad is arrested

Nandini : kB (happily )

Manik tell everything to nandini

Nandini : why neyonika mam do this Manik

Manik : nandini will not leave her this time ( gets angry )

Nandini : manik relax plz don't spoil yr mood
Ab SB thik hoga

Manik : hmm...

Manik cubing her face start coming closure to her face n with in a sec. He fuses his lips with her n nandini also responded in same manner n they were kissing eachother like they dieing to that from ages n they stop their never ending kiss in need of oxgyen n rested their head on eachother n both are breathing heavily

Manik : i love u... (pecks her forehead

Nandini : i love u more...

Part : 22

#Tum__hi__ho

Manik n nandini sitting n manik holding nandini hand

Nandini : manik
Agr main chli

Manik cuts her sentence

Manik : sh..
Sh...(puts finger on her lips)
Don't say like that
Never
U will be always wid me

Nandini hugs him

Nandini : i will never go from yr life
Never

Bg music

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho..

After some time

Manik n cabir n druv are sitting on couch n all r girls in nandini room

All girls come from upstair
Nandini is smiling n. Looking so happy after many days
Manik notice her n also gets happy to see her star happy n think (nandini aaj itne dino ke bd I have seen u happy like this n hope this happiness never gone from yr face )
Cabir : where lost

Manik : khi nhi

Mukti : tu janta toh hai cabir
Manik hr waqt kiske khyalo main koya rhaita hai

Nandini blushes

Manik : mukti
Aur tu kha koe rhti h. Yeh bhi SB jante

Cabir : by the way Abhi kB ane wala hai new York se

Mukti : about after 2 3 days his work will over

Druv n alai r busy in their own romance
Manik goes to nandini n holds her hand

Nandini : manik kya kr rhai ho
SB dekh lenge

Manik : so what's a big deal
Unhai bhi toh pta chlna chiye how much I love u

Cabir : dekho yeh dono fir shuru ho gye

Manik leaves hand of nandini

N both blushes

Navya : cabir yha sirf yeh dono nhi aur koe bhi hai Jo

Everyone. Laugh n alai n druv stop. Romancing

Navya : ek hum bichare akle

Cabir : mujhe bhul gye
Ao chlo hum romance karte ( hold her hand )

Navya : cabir...

Everyone laugh

Manik : chlo we should do party
At my house at night

All say done

Night time
Manik house
Druv n alai aur manik n nandini aur navya n cabir doing couple dance

On song tu Jo hai toh main hn

And after after sometime neyonika comes n shock to see nandini n going upstair but manik shouts

Manik : neyonika kha ja rhi ho

Neyonika stop

Manik : tum nandini ko dekh kr shock nhi hoe

Everybody standing there n nandini looking very tense

Neyonika comes downstair

Neyonika : manik I don't understanding wht r u saying

Manik dad also come down stair listening manik voice

Manik : itni bhi anjaan mt bano

Nandini ka kidnap kuch yd aya

Neyonika : Nandini ka kidnap
Wht r u saying Manik

Manik : Nandini ka kidnap tumhne karwaya tha also blackmailed nandini to leave me

Manik's dad : neyonika kya manik sach bol RHA hai

Neyonika : haan Maine kidnap karvya tha nandini ka becoz I don't want Nandini marry u manik
Yeh Middle class ladhki iss ghr main kabhi nhi aa skti
Manik iss ladhki ne tujhe Fasya hai
NANDINI U R SO SMART
I must say

Manik : just stop it neyonika now don't say a single word against nandini
Maine tumhai phle bhi smjaya don't ever come b/w me n nandini

Nandini having tear in eyes

Neyonika : nandini kuch bolti kyo nhi
Tum kya bologi tumhara phn to successful ho gya ek amir ladhke ko fashna

Manik : neyonika...

Nandini is crying ran outside n manik. Also come after n everyone goes

Manik's dad : neyonika just get out from my house
Aaj toh tumhne hadh hi kr di

Neyonika : mujhe bhi yha rhane ka shock nhi h

Nandini is crying in garden
Manik comes
Manik : Nandini why u crying
Don't think about her

Nandini : manik aaj tumhari mom bol rhi h
Kl SB bolenge ki maine
Maine ek amir ladke ko fasaya hai

Manik : nandini...
why u thinking that Duniya chaye kuch bhi sochai
Matter yeh karta ki hum kya sochte
We know that we love eachother

Nandini : manik farak padhta
It's hurt manik

Nandini is not. Stopping crying
Manik Nandini ko bench pr bithata hai

Manik : sit here nandini

Manik wipes her tear n hold her face n touches with her face
N kisses on nandini forehead n they hug each Other

Bg music

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho..

Nandini : manik ek BT bolu
Promise me u. Don't say no

Manik : wht
Say

Nabdini : first do promise

Manik : ok baba promise

N kiss on her hand

Nandini : I will not do marriage jb tk main singer ban Nhi jati

Manik : PR tum singer toh shaddhi ke bd bhi bn skti ho

Nandini : manik plz u promise me na
I request u plz manik

Nandini hold manik hand

Manik : pr nandini

Nandini : manik plz ( hold his face )

Manik : okay miss nandini murti
N manik is about kiss nandini on her lips but he kiss on her chicks

Nandini kiss on manik forehead

N they hug eachother

Part : 23

#Tum__hi__ho

Next mrng

Nandini wakes up

N manik calls come

Nandini : hello manik

Manik : gud mrng nandini
Today u will not ask wht r u dng manik

Nandini : manik...

Manik smiles

Manik : manik 1 min more (doing acting nandini )

Nandini : k bye manik

N cuts the call

Manik : nandini wait

Nandini start thinking about maink words
(Matter yeh karta we love eachother
U love me n i love u
N smiling)

On the other hand manik thinking about nandini

(Their hug n nandini word i will never go from yr life )
N smiles but also thinks about nandini word ( manik main shaddhi tabhi karungi jb tl main singer nhi bn jati )
Manik says to himself
( yeh laddki bhi na
I have to do something)

After something

Nandini comes to her mom

Nandini's mom : beta maine tumhari shadhi ke liye jewellery jo pasand hai voh bta do

Nandini : maa mujhe abhi shaddhi nhi krni

Nandini's mom : nandini
Yeh tum kya bol rhi ho
Tum hosh main toh ho

Nandini : maa main singer bna chti hn fir shaddhi

Nandini ' s mom : sari preparation ho chuki
Ab mujhe na nhi suni n go outside

Nandini : maa...
Maa..
(Main kaise smjau maa ko )

Nandini call manik but manik is taking shower didn't receive her call
( manik phn uthao i need to talk to u )

Nandini go to manik house

Manik comes out see nandini misscalls

Manik thinks nandini ki itni miss calls n than he calls her

nandini entering to manik's romm

Manik calls ring up n manik turns around nandini having tear

Manik : nandini kya hua (goes toward nandini )

Nandini : manik (crying )

Manik : stop crying first (wipes her tear )

Nandini : manik
Maa naraj ho gye mujhse
Maa chati ki i will do marriage
Manik even i also was waiting to do marriage with u
I always want to leave wid u
Pr
Manik
Main apne paro pr khadha hona chti hn
Manik humhare liye

Manik holds nandini hand

Manik : nandini i m with u always
I don't care
If u losse
Tabhi i m wid u aur abhi bhi i m wid u and i promise nandini
U will successfull in this than yr mom has proud on u
Tabh vohe sabse jada kush hogi
Dekhlena

Nandini : manik tum itne ache kyo ho
Daily mera pyr aur badhta h tumhare liye

Manik : u made me like this
U change me from monster manik to yr manik
Yr manik who will never hurt u

Manik puts hand on nandini lips n say now smile

Nandini smiles n they hug eachother

Nandini : vaise manik if i will be more popular singer than u
So u will jealouse
( ask question in fun)

manik : no
I will not jealous infact i will be more happy if u will be popular
n jo bhi ho yeh jealous part humhari life main kabhi nhi aega
Never

Nandini smiles

Nandini : manik it's
1 pm u have to go for yr recording today na

Manik : nandini i will be posponed it
becoz i want spend some more time with u

Nandini : manik u want to me
So i m there wid u
Means i m coming wid u

Happy

Manik : Than let's go

They reaches to studio

Manik start the recording (tum mile song )

While manik singing song looking at nandini n she is smiling

Nandini : wao manik
U are amazing

Manik : all becoz of u
That time i was feeling u in my mind

Nandini blushes

N manik come close to nandini

Part : 24

#Tum__Hi__ho

Manik about to kiss other
But someone knocks the door

N manik n nandini come outside the studio

One car came fastly and manik n nandini both become dirty becoz
mud water come upon them

Manik become angry

But Nandini start laughing

Nandini : u r ( laughing in b/w)
U r looking so funny
Manik

Manik : nandini tum bhi cartoon se km nhi lg rhi

Nandini : really manik
( puts hand on her face (hiding her face with hand) but manik put her hand down n gets out hankercheif from his pocket start cleaning his face
N after that nandini also clean his face )

Somebody come from studio

Man : sir aap toh bhut gande ho rhai ho
Sir mam aap mere sth aya

They follow him
He leave them in room
Manik pull nandini in washroom

Nandini : manik manik

n start the shower they both come closer n manik clean nandini with his hand n nandini clean manik than they both use the towel
Manik leaves nandini to her house
Nandini : bye manik

Manik : kiss on his forehead ( from window)

Nandini smiles

Nandini knocks the door n her maa open the but she did n't say anything
N went insidd

Nandini : maa wait

She goes to her room
N she say nthng n went
Inside

Nandini : maa wait

Nandini go to her room n she is packing her bag

Nandini : maa where u going

Nandini's mom : nandini i m going pune
yr bua is ill n vaise bhi main mumbai tumhari shaddhi ke liye ae thi

Nandini : maa
Look at me
Naraj ho mujhse

Nandini's mom : hoe thi pr main smjhti hn tumhai
Ki meri beti jo bhi karegi usmain jarur kamyab hoe gi

Nandini hug her n say i love u

Nandini's mom : i love u to beta
next mrng
Nandini mom is going

Nandini : bye n hug her

Nandini's mom : bye

N sits in car n gone n after that manik car comes

manik : nandini everything is alright

Nandini : maa chli gye

Manik : chli gye but why

Nandini : voh my bua is not well ba

Manik : okay
Chalo we have to go for recording of yr first

Nandini : manik I m nervous

Manik : nandini don't worry I m wid u OK

Nandini : manik SB acha hoga na

Manik holds her n put on his heart n say

Manik : u believe na

Nandini hug n say

Nandini : hmm...

They both sit in car reaches to studio
Manik see chair

Manik : sit here I will be coming in 2 min.

Manik comes after 15 min n nandini is gone from there
Manik ask to gurds they said she us gone

Manik thinks nandini aise kaise chli gye yha SB ready tha
Manik calls nandini but she is not picking the call

Manik : nandini pick up. The call

Manik calls navya n sits in car n start the car

Navya : hello

Manik : navya kya nandini se tumhari kuch BT hoe

Navya : kya hua manik everything alright

Manik : ya PR nandini is not picking the calls

Navya : busy hogi
tum uske ghr ja kr check

Manik : okay thanks

Scene change

Mukti is calling n Abhi is not picking the call sitting on couch
From back someone holds her eyes n say surprise

Mukti turn around put his hand n immediately hug him tighty n shouts abhimanyu n after sometime
She got n angry with him n come

Mukti : I don't wanna talk to u

Abhi didn't say anything n mukti turn n see Abhi is fallen down n mukti run towards him n hold his face n shouts Abhi abhi

Abhi : u really don't wanna talk to me

Mukti : u r so bad na
Never do this again
Tumhne to meri jaan di thi

Abhi : I m sorry baba n hug each other

Scene change
Manik reaches nandini home

Manik : nandini nandini

Manik enters nandini room
N nandini is sitting down support of wall n crying

Manik go towards him n sits with her

Manik : nandini wht happened

Nandini : manik I don't need u

Manik get shocked. N say

Manik : nandini Kya hua

Part : 25

Tum__hi__ho

Nandini : Manik I need u but I don't need any recommendation of yr

Manik : tll me kya hua

Nandini : Manik when I was o setting outside two man r talking

Flashback

Man 1 : suna hai aaj manik mahlotra apni girl frnd ko lekr aya

Man 2 : haan voh ushai singer bna chta hai
Asi ladhkiyo ki kismat shi hoti hai bina kuch kare SB mil jata hai

They both laugh n nandini having tear n ran outside

Manik : kon Thai voh

Nandini : bat khali unki nhi hai
Manik kis kis ka muh band karoge bolo

Manik hold nandini hand

Manik : OK tll wht do want

Manik wipes her tear n nandini put her head on Manik shoulder

Nandini : I. Need yr support
I want to become singer on my own

Manik : PR nandini

Nandini : pr var manik kuch nhi

Manik : okay
Now stop thinking about that
Now smile
Do u know
I got so worried that time

Nandini hug manik

Nandini : i m sorry manik
Ush waqt
Muhje smj nhi aa rha tha wht to do
Manik only u can relief my pain

Manik : u made me like this

Manik put her hair back the year n hold her face Manik come closure to nandini face n about to kiss her on lips

BG music

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

navya enter in the room

Navya : nandini ...

Both of them immidiately get away from eachother

Navya : are km se door toh close kr dete

They both shy

Manik : navya tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Nandini : haan navya tum yha

Navya : voh manik bol rha tha na tumhara phn nhi mil rha tha
R u okay

Nandini : i m f9

Manik : ya she is f9 now u can go

Nandini : manik...

Navya : hum ja rhai

Nandini : manik toh uhi bol rha tha

Navya : i know but mujhe km se jana
U both carry on

Nandini : navya ...

Manik smiles n navya goes

Scene change

Abhi is bending on knees
Proposing mukti

Abhi : my life
Will u marry me

(abhi gim her rose n mukti smiles)

Mukti : yes

Mukti put her hand on abhi hand
N abhi put ring on her finger

N he get up n they hug eachother

Scene change

Manik again going close to nandini
Manik calls rings

Manik : not again

Manik pick up the call n nandini is smilimg

Manik : bolo mukti

MUKTI : manik
Manik
I m so happy

Manik : oh my god mukti aisa kya hua

Nandini ask him wht happen

Mukti : is nandini with u ?

Manik : ya

Mukti : put the phone on speeker

Manik : ok

Manik put phone on speeker

Manik : ok now say

Mukti : abhi propose me for marriage

Nandini : really

Mukti : ya i m so happy

Manik : we r coming at yr home
Mukti cuts the call

Manik : ab toh humari shaadhi se phle mukti aur abhi ki shaadhi
( make sad face )

Nandini : manik

Manik : nandini
This is not fare

Nandini : manik chlo

They both reach to mukti house

All r waiting for them

Manik n nandini hug mukti
N abhi

Manik : tu toh bhut fast nikla

abhi n mukti smiles

Nandini : abhi tum kb ae
Aur btaya bhi nhi

Abhi : shbha hi aya

Cabir : so wht's the pln

Abhi : ab shaddhi krke mukti ke sth london settle hone ka

Alai : tum alai ko humhsai dur le jaoge
This is not fare

Druv : acha manik aur nandini tumhara kya pln hai

Mukti : Haan manik humhari shadhi se phle tum dono ki shaddhi hogi na

Nandini tells everything

Mukti : nandini yeh shi fashla kiya tumhne

Abhi : ya independent hona bhut jaruri hai

Cabir : oh shit aaj toh mujhe training pr jana tha
Sorry guyz i have to leave

Cabir goes

Manik : chlo ab humhai bhi chlna chahiye

Alai : yes

They all go

Manik is driving the car
N suddenly stop the car

Nandini : manik yha car kyo roki

Manik come out from the car open nandini side door n give his hand nandini come also come

Nandini : manik

Manik : a special dinner for u

Part : 26

#Tum__hi__ho

Manik and nandini enters the resturant and their table is outside n the place decorated with light

Manik give chair to nandini &nAndini sit on it

Manik : nandini close yr

Nandini : manik ...

Manik : plz nandini

Nandini close her manik go backside of nandini n take out the beautiful heart pandate n put it on nandini neck

Nandini open her eyes n touch pandate n say

Nandini : wao manik it is so beautiful

Manik : just open

Nandini open pandate n see there one side manik pic n on other nandini

Nandini smiles

Manik : this us nandini always live together i always remain with u if i am not there wid u than this pandate will protect u
Nandini having tear in eyes n hold manik hand

Nandini : manik tum bhut achai ho
Do one promise to me that
u will never break my trust
N u not do any recommedation for me
Manik i want to express myself
Manik i know
U want me to see settle
But
U don't want me to see struggling

Manik : sh...

I will never break yr trust
Stop bothering about that
Sb acha hoga
Enjoy yr dinner ok

They feed eachother n than goes to washroom
N after sometime come wid guitar
Start singing song
Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

N nandini too dance with manik n after that manik n nandini are so close to eachother ,manik hold nandini face
Kiss on nandini eyes n than on chicks n n than they kiss eacother on lips
They were lost in other world

Bg music

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Nandini : mujhe dar hai ki khi humari khushiyo kisi ki najar na lg jae

Manik hold nandini hand

Manik : jb tk we r together nthng happen to us

They hug eachother

Manik driving the car n nandini setting with her

Nandini : manik i want to tell u something

Manik : wht tll
Na

Mandini : kl i have audition in one singing reality show ,singing star

Manik tum aoge na

Manik : nandini ...
Tum na bhi bolti main tb bhi aajata
Infact aaj rt main tumhre sth hi rhaunga
Aur hum ja practise karege

Nandini smiles

They reaches at home

They r on roof n after sometime rains comes
Manik start singing song
& after that nandini too join him ;they sing so osmly n romantically

Manik : nandini u will be selected tomorrow

Nandini : r u sure manik ya

Manik : ya i m dam sure

manik take nandini downstair holding in his arm n put her on bed they both r wet n manik come close to her n nandini breathing heavily n than he kisses her on her forehead n than eyes n than come down kiss on neck n nandini moan his name n than manik come to her lips n with in sec. He fuses his lips with her n they r kissing eachother widely in kiss manik hand travels down n he about to open her jeans botton but nandini hold his hand n he break the kiss n both look into eachother eyes n manik knows she want to do it after marriage so he didn't force her
N get up from her n ask her to change the cloth n than they both change their cloth n sleep into each other arms...

So here is one more long update hope u like it plz... if u like than plz... guyz do comment
keep smiling
LOVE MEHAK

Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

OMG. .nandni saved from big accident.

Manik is hurt badly with the news.

Now nyo...like bad

Mother in law suna dya bechi ko.

But nandni is very self respected girl.

Want her own singing career. .

Now they will wait for marriage. ..

Overall very interested and emotional

Chapters.

Thanks for sharing this.

God bless you.

Thanks for pm.

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Fantastic awesome update

Nandu wants to make her own identity and not want any favours from manik and nyo gates her and will do anything to keep them apart hopefully this will prove her point for making herself

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Muskan_Dhamija

@Muskan_Dhamija

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

😉😊😊Thank god.. nandini was safe..and manan is togther now.. so happy😆

such.. a big...post ... thank u so much for lamba wala.. update...and each and ever... scene i luv u it...😊 and the romance scene... i was just blushing..😳 but nindini ko rukna nhi chahye tha...😃😉 koi. Nhi ... keep it up..👏 luv u.. alot mehak...

LUV MUSKAN 😛🥱😊

LOVE MANAN

Edited by Muskan_Dhamija - 9 years ago

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Ausom update

Buddy

Really love it A lot

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Love

Diya😛

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Wow wat an update nice one owsm blossom

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Mehaklovely

@Mehaklovely

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: princypriya
awesome updates
continue soon
thnks frpm

Thank u so much...😊

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Mehaklovely

@Mehaklovely

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: bhagupur
OMG. .nandni saved from big accident.
Manik is hurt badly with the news.
Now nyo...like bad
Mother in law suna dya bechi ko.
But nandni is very self respected girl.
Want her own singing career. .
Now they will wait for marriage. ..
Overall very interested and emotional
Chapters.
Thanks for sharing this.
God bless you.

Thanks for pm.

Thank u so much 😛

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