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Tum hi ho

Part : 9

Manik n nandini come down all r waiting for them

Mukti : how r u nandini

Nandini : I m f9

Druv : buddy why u call us to come

All say ya manik kya bt hai

Manik : guys ISSI koe serious BT nhi hai maine socha itne dino we didn't do any party so let's party tonight

Mukti : ya sb ka mood bhi fresh ho jaega

Cabir brings shampion n everyone
Start dancing accept nandini she is lost in toughts n manik watching her

Mukti : nandini come n dance wid us
Nandini nandini

Nandini is lost in harshad word that I will kill manik but she didn't remember who say this word to her n when than mukti moves nandini

Mukti : kha koe hue ho

Nandini : khi nhi bolo kya bolna

Mukti : nandini kabse bol rhi hn come n dance

Nandini : voh mera shr main thodhi pain ho rhi h main ati hn

Mukti : k

Nandini goes to washroom
N say yeh kya ho RHA h mujhe yeh awaj kiski hai Jo mujhe br sunae deti bai every time BG voice I will kill manik Nandini shouts nhi manik ko kuch nhi hone dungi n close her ear with her hand mujhe manik pass Jana chihiye she has tear in her eyes n run down n shouting manik manik
Everyone get tense to see Nandini like this n than she hugs manik n say main tumhai kuch nhi hone dungi n she is crying n than falls in down in manik arm voh Nandini ko upar lekr jata h than doc. Comes checks Nandini
Manik : kya hua voh thik toh hai na

Doc. : she is f9 but uske andr andr hi kisi BT se preshn hai

Manik thinks aisa kya ho skta Jis BT se nandini itna preshan

Manik : doc. Voh thik toh ho jaegi

Doc. : ya tum khi bhr le kr jau nandini ko so that she will be fresh

Manik : OK doc .
Manik is looking very stress
Cabir : manik SB thik ho jaega

Mukti : u should go to Swaziland

Manik : no we go shimla becoz nandini like shimla she tll me

Cabir : so kl subha ki ticket book krva leta hn

All goes

Manik is looking very tense N looking Nandini n remembering that Nandini falling scene n nandini words main tumhai kuch nhi hone dungi n slept with her n after sometime nandini gets up n shouts manik n manik also gets up

Manik : kya hau

Nandini : manik

she shivering n manik hugs try to control him

Manik : tell me wht happen

Nandini : manik pta nhi mujhe ajeeb ajeeb voice SOE deti that somebody will kill u

Manik : nandini itne dino aisa ho RHA tabhi tumhai ASA lgta hai
Chalo ab so jau SB thik hai kl humhai nikna bhi toh

Nandini : kha

Manik : surprise hai

Nandini lay down on bead sleeps in manik arm

Next morng

Nandini getting ready n manik wakes up start packing bag

Nandini : Manik hum kha ja rhai h

Manik : shimla

Nandini : shimla really
N smiles

Manik : haan baba shimla I know u wants to go shimla

Nandini : haan manik but tumhai kaise pta n aachank shimla

Manik : aachank nhi main kbse soch RHA tha

Nandini is smiling n manik gets happy to see nandini n thinks nandini ab no sadness ab main tumhai ek pal ke liye bhi udass nhi rhane dunga
I make yr every moment happy

They both get ready

N all came to see off them

N than they reaches airport

N waiting for their flight

Nandini : I so excited manik hum phle bhr akle khi ja RHA hai

Manik smiles kis on his hand

Nandini thinks aai aapa ab SB thik rkhna aur manik ko aisa hai kush rhkna n they reaches Simla


Part : 10

Part : 10

Tum__hi__ho

Flight is cancel due to some reason

Nandini : manik ab kya kare

Manik : hum car se chlte h

Nandini : done

Manik calls cabir

Manik : cabir the plan is change

Cabir : why

Manik : voh flight cancel ho gye toh hum car se ja rhai h

They puts bags in car n start their journey

Manik on music in car

Nandini : manik I m so excited

Manik : really

Nandini : haan manik tumhai pta main shimla jb chuti thi tb gye fir kabhi moka nhi mila

Manik thinking nandini I always want to see u like this nandini happy always

Nandini : manik kha kho gye

Manik : pta nandini jbse u came in my life made my more than perfect

Nandini holds manik hand i always be wid u hamesha

They both looks into each other

Nandini : manik aage dekh kr car chlao

Nandini sleeps on manik arm n manik is driving car it's night time n after suddenly the car stops nandini wakes up

Nandini : kya hua manik

Manik : main check krta hn

Manik knocks on window

Manik : nandini come out

Nandini comes out

Nandini : kya hua manik

Manik : lgta gadhi ka engine khrb ho gya

Nandini : ab kya karenge manik

Manik : ab subha hi kuch ho paega khi aas pass koe hotel let's check out

They both comes into a juncle nandini is scaring n holding manik arms very tightly n some sound came from jungle nandini hugs manik very tightly n shouts manik

Manik : daro mt jungle main ISSI awaj ati rhti h

Manik notice one cottage

Manik : nandini voh dekho kuch hai vaha

Nandini : haan chalo kuch toh dikha iss jungle main

They reaches their

They enter in cottage

Nandini : manik yeh kitna scary h
Somebody is there koi hai

Manik : yha toh koe nhi h

Nandini : manik let's go hum car main so jaege

Manik : daro mt nandini main ho

But Nandini is not listening to manik

Nandini : manik plz let's go from plz plz

Manik : nandini nandini look at me

Manik hold nandini face n touches with his face

Manik : relax nandini I wid u

Nandini hug manik n manik smiles

N after manik kiss on hand n than chick n head n eyes n comes to lips but nandini push him n runs in corner n blushing n holds him from back turn Nandini n start singing song
N start dancing also n get lost in looking each other eyes

Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujh se juda agar ho jayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jayenge juda

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ek pal door gavara nahi
Tere liye har roz hain jeete
Tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho..

Tere liye
Hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun
De diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko
Dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai
Naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhura na raha
Hunm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

In last they hug each other n sleep in each other arm


Part : 11

Early morning time

They both gets up n manik kiss on Nandini forehead

Manik : gud mrng

Nandini : gud mrng my babu

Manik give me mrng kiss
Nandini comes close to manik lips n give kiss on his chin n ran

Nandini : manik CHLO yhi rhna hai kya

Manik gets up

Manik : nandini nandini wait

N holds hand

Manik : this not fare

Nandini : manik CHLO fir car bhi toh thik karvani h

Manik nod n say k let',s go

They ask for mechanic. N after sometime their car is repaired

They sits in car n moves on

Scene change

Harshad is thinking where they both gone
N listen to alai talking at phone wid Nandini that when will u reaches shimla

Harshad think kha Bach ke jaega manik tu

Night time they reaches shimla n they book room

N they both reaches room

Manik order food for them

Manik go to take shower n ask nandini for towel nandini comes to give towel but manik pull Nandini in washroom n gets her under the shower

Nandini : manik kya kar rhai ho

Manik moves nandini hair n moves his finger on nandini hand n come close to nandini n holds nandini tightly about to kiss her on lips but door knocks

Nandini : manik go n dekho kon h

Manik go n nandini came out from the wash room n manik put dinner on table n holds nandini n brings her to dinner table n offer her chair n sits with her n start feeding her n nandini to feeds manik n nandini cuts manik finger in fun

Manik : aauch

Nandini : sorry sorry

Nandini kiss on Manik finger n manik start seeing nandini how she is caring for him

Manik : Nandini it's f9 now

N they both finish their dinner

Nandini : I m so tired I m going to sleep

Manik : OK u sleep I m coming in 5 min kl ke liye car book karva kr ata hn

Nandini : k gud nite n kisses on her forehead

Manik : gud nite

Nandini thinking about manik n smiling n sleep after few min n after sometime Manik also came n sleep wid her
Manik thinking kl ka din tum kabhi nhi bhul paungi I make it so special for u

Next mrng nandini getting ready n thinking about jungle night n smiling

Manik : nandini do fast we r getting late

Nandini comes out n she is looking so beautiful

Manik can't kept her eye away from her n goes close to nandini

Nandini : Manik ab late nhi ho rhai

Manik : k let's go

N song start

Uljhi si baatein dil
Mujhse bhi baantein
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)
Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)

Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani
Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai

Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..

Milte rahe jo aise hi dono
Lag na jaaye ishq ki nazar
Aye dil farebi, tham sa gaya kyun
Aisi waisi baat soch kar

Bas mein na mere ab ye raha hai
Tujh pe aake dil ye jo ruka hai

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise Mera Tu..
Aye.. oo.. ee..
Na na.. yea..

(Mehar.. mehar.. meherbani ho)

Fariyad karti phir yaad karti
Sochti hoon tumko baar baar
Na chahatein hain, par chaahte kyun
Tumko yunhi mere aas paas

Kuch bhi nahi hai
Kuch phir bhi hai
Tumse milke dil ko ye laga hai

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Hoo hoo.. (jaise mera tu)
Meher.. meher.. meherbaniyan
Jaise mera tu..
Jaise mera tu!
Scenes r changing in song

Manik n nandini is doing rafting
Shopping in which nandini is trying dresses
Nandini is running manik is coming after her n they hugging each other
N enjoying n both r feeding sparow n seeing rainbow n peacocks
N eating I cream n clicking photos n traveling in truck n at night doing pillow fighting n tickling n kissing each other n in last they both sleep in each other arm n next early mrng going back home in car nandini. Wakes up in car see manik n smiles n manik also smile n song end

Nandini : Manik wait wait voh dekho icream
I want to eat ice cream plz

Manik : OK let's go

The go ice cream stall n purchase ice cream

Small boy came there ask manik for help that her mom his ill plz help

Manik : Nandini tum car pas jao main ata

Nandini : jldi ana I m waiting

Manik : OK baba n kiss on nandini forehead

Both smiles

Part : 12
Part : 12

Tum__hi__ho

Nandini going towards car one car came after him Nandini start running n shouting manik plz help manik... ... Manik...
n start crying n the car not stop following her
On the other manik go with that guy there is gunday waiting they start beating manik n manik is trying to fight them but they beat manik n than he listen the sound of. Nandini n to protect nandini manik beats everyone one after one n manik is fully bloody n start finding nandini

Manik : nandini Nandini

Nandini : manik manik

Nandini enters in jungle to get away from the car n from car the man come out start following nandini
Manik also entered in jungle

Nandini running so fastly n shouting manik n thinking manik kha ho tum khi manik ko toh kuch nhi hogya n the man that following nandini having knife in hand nandini slip down from slanting land n shouts aaa...

Manik listen n get tense n runs towards that direction from where the sound came

Nandini roll down n gets hurts but the man also coming down n nandini gets up by facing difficulties n again start running n
Hide behind the tree but the man saw him start coming towards her n than nandini again fall n get up immediately n again start running reaches to peak of the mountain .

manik also reach their standing on other side both having tear in their eyes becoz of afraid of getting apart from each other n also having happiness of seeing each other

Man comes to nandini n try to attack nandini but manik stops with his hand n blood start flowing hand n nandini crying n saying manik n manik thrown away knife n start beating the man n asking

Manik : kisne bheja h tujhe yha

But man. Is not answering n manik again n punching that man very badly

Manik : bol

The man after some time

Man : harshad ne humhai yha bheja tha plz mujhe chudh do meri koe glti nhi h

Nandini : harshad ( confusingly)

Manik leaves the man

Manik : main kyo nhi smja ki yeh SB uske alwa kon kr skta h

Manik brust into anger n shout

Manik : harshad I will not leave u

Nandini shouts

Nandini : Manik...

They man start punching manik again n again try to attack manik with knife n nandini also trying stop that to attack manik by knife but man push nandini down the mountain n nandini shouts

Nandini : manik...

Manik : nandini... Nandini ...

Manik kills that man by knife n than man fall down from the mountain manik again start shouting

Manik : nandini...
Nandini ...

Manik screaming very badly

Hey guyz... plz do comment for more parts
Thank u


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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Oh i love it...
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Thank you SooO
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Dear for
Continue it
Please 16 ke
Baad wale parts
Jaldi update
Kardo
And update was
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Amazing
Superb
Fabulous
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
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awesome update so far...
loved all of it...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
hope hearted doesn't harm manan anymore and spends the rest of his life rotting in prison for his deeds...
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awesome updates dear
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Tum hi ho


Part : 13

Nandini : manik

Nandini holding the stone

Manik give his hand try to bring nandini above but nandini can't came above so Manik try best n bring nandini above

Nandini is not stopping crying n
N manik hugs nandini n she also hugs Manik both r bleeding manik remove her tear from his face from both side n nandini touches manik lips that is bleeding try to remove blood they both again hug each other n manik start kissing nandini
Again n kissing everywhere n nandini also kisses him

Manik : nandini I got scared aisa LGA meri jaan mere hatho se chli gye

Nandini : but mujhe pta ki tum mujhe. Bacha loge

Manik : I love u

Nandini : I love u tooo

Both having tear in their eyes n having pain too but happy to together

BG song

Hai dil ye mera

In last They again hug each other it's night time

They go to one cottage

Nandini having pain n manik too but they can't go to hospital becoz it's dark nothing is visible

Both of them r disturbed n in pain
Manik comes n hold nandini n start kissing on her wound n than nandini too They both start kissing on each other wound try to minimize the pain first
manik kisses on nandini hand n than shoulder

Nandini kisses on manik face

Manik kisses on nandini neck n stomach

Nandini kisses on. Manik forehead

Manik kisses nandini back

Their pain is visible in their they r full of tear n both of try to consoling each other by hungs n kisses
Like this they spend their romantic n painfull night

BG song
Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala
Main jo mit bhi gaya tto wajood mera
Sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda

Kyun ki tum hi ho, abb tum hi ho
Ki zindagi abb tum hi ho.. woh o..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui abb tum hi ho

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Karz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Next morning
Manik wakes up n watching nandini from half n hour thinking how to remove her sadness n holding nandini hand n moving hand on her face
After sometime

Manik : nandini wake up

Nandini gets n looking very stressed not able to get up

Manik : r u ok

Nandini : ( having tear in eyes) no manik I worried SB glt ho RHA hai
Manik we r not safe

Manik brings nandu close to her n try to carm down n hug her tightly

Manik : main janta hun nandini but hum ek sth h so nthng will happen to us OK
Manik removes nandini tear
n nandini faint in manik arm

Manik : nandini nandini

Nandini : manik ( in low voice n having tear in eyes)

Manik feels that nandini is warm

Manik : nandini ko toh fever h

Manik brings nandini in his arm


up to car n driving car very fastly n looking very disturbed not able to control himself n brings nandini to the hospital looking very disturbed

Doc. : wht happen to her

Manik : kl rt humhar accident ho gya tha n she is having fever

Manik : plz doc. Do something

Doc. : tumhai main bhi bhut chote lgi nurse do stitching of him also

Doc. check nandini n give Her medicine n do her stitching also n manik goes wid nurse

Part : 14


Doc. Comes after nandini checkup

Manik : how is she ?

Doc. : stress ki vjha se chkr agye Thai unhai kaisi BT ka stress nhi hona chiyhe it is dangerous for her

Manik : kya main ushai mil skta hn

Doc. : ya sure but unhai hosh kl tk aega we have given him injection

Manik goes to nandini n sits beside her n moving his hand on her face n hair n talking to himself

Yeh kya hogya ho gya nandini I thought ki tum khi bhr aaugi u will be fresh but things are gone more worst

Manik holds nandini hand n kisses
N say nandini I don't want to see u like this
Never
I
I want u to be happy ever
Nandini tum tension mt lo main iss br SB thik kr donga
I will finish him
Harshad ab tumhai mujhse koe nhi bcha skta yr end has come start yr come down from now jitne ( giving angry looks )
Nandini ko jidtna dard hua hai I give u more than that much of pain

n than manik kiss her on forhead n came out n sit outside n tear in his eyes n than Nandini also gets up n start crying
Both crying by remembering all that bad incident happen to them

Manik goes to nandini

Nandini : manik tum aa gye main tumhra kabse wait kr rhi thi u now that

Chlo ab mere sth betho (pretending to be happy

Nandini : manik I will planning for our wedding I m so excited

Manik : nandini
Nandini stop acting
I know u r not god
U r sad from inside(holding his hand )

Nandini : manik i got so tried
Thak chuki hn main in SB se
Yeh SB jo ho RHA h
Kab tk I don't power to fight more
( she bend down her face to Manik sholder n hold Manik collar n crying )

Manik gets her up n touches his face with her n say

Manik : ab aur nhi
Ab bari harshad ki hai

Nandini : kaise

Manik : nandini u trusted me na
If we r together nthng will happen to us u don't need to worry
I know ki Jo bhi ab tk humhara sth hua it's bad
But nthng happen to us becoz we were together AGR
AGR aage kuch aisa hota tabh bhi humhai koe kuch nhi kr if we r together
Manik smiles n nandini also smiles

Nandini : u are right
If we r together nthng will happen to us


Part : 15


Nandini : manik tumhne call kr sbko bta diya ki hum kl aa rhai h ghr they will be worrying

Manik : no I forgot voh phn ki switched off hai na

Nandini : Manik go now n call

Manik : OK

Next morning they reach home

They entered in nandini house

Nandini's mom : yeh kya hua tum dono ko

Manik : voh aunty

Nandini : mom ek chota sa accident ho gya tha

Nandini's mom : toh tumhne btaya kyo nhi

Manik : aap ghr bhte bhte tension leti aur vha nandini apki tension
Ab SB thik h na

Nandini's mom : SB ate hi honge

All come to nandini

Nandini's mom : beta main ati hn

Cabir : yeh kya hua tum dono

Mukti : manik kya hua

Manik tells everything to them

Manik : harshad done all this

Everyone get shocked to hear this

Alia : Bhai ne aisa kiya

Cabir : yr humhai kuch krna chiye

Mukti : ya

Cabir : yr itna SB kuch hogya tune humhai kuch btaya bhi nhi

Druv : guys ISSI phle harshad kuch kare we have to make a plan

Manik : ya but nandini u r having fever now come wid me upstair n do rest
Guys I come

They both go upstair

Nandini : manik now I m f9
Don't worry

Manik : u r not fine I notice u
U having pain in yr head

Nandini : manik...( holding his hand n kiss )
K baba I m resting

Nandini ly on bed n manik cover her wid blanket n kiss on forehead
N sit with her
( nandini main tumhai upr ane ko isliye kha becoz Jo plan maine socha h u never allow me do that )

Manik goes after Nandini sleep

Manik : guys I have pln

Cabir : that's great

Mukti : tll na

Manik : yha nhi nandini ko iss bare main kuch pta nhi chlna chiye

Cabir : but why

Manik : cabir nandini will never allow to do that vaise bhi doc. Ne ushai stress lene MNA kiya h

Navya comes

Navya : nandini ko kya pta nhi chlna nhi chiye aur manik yeh tumhai kya hua

Cabir tells everything to navya

Navya : yeh inshn aur kya krna chta
I kill him

Mukti : navya relax

Navya : Nandini kha hai voh thik toh hai na

Manik : ya she is f9 now resting in bed room

Navya : konse pln ki BT kar rhai thai tum Jo nandini ko pta nhi chlna aisa kya pln h

Manik : pln toh hai aur I m sure voh successful bhi hoga
Harshad I m coming

Manik : navya tum nandini ke sth yhi ruko cabir will tll u pln after n we r going to my house nandini ke uthte hi mujhe call krna

All goes n navya go to nandini room

All comes to manik house n sit on couch

Cabir : chl ab bta wht's the plan

Manik : tomorrow I will going for concert alone in news it will be inform n where I m going the way is gone frm jungle

Mukti : so wht manik

Manik : tum smji nhi harshad will come their to attack me again I m sure than police will arrest him

Cabir : manik it dangerous for u

Manik : cabir ab tu bhi nandini mt bn we have do this otherwise

Mukti : manik bilkul thik bol RHA h dangerous toh hai but humhara pass koe rashta nhi

Nyonika comes there n over hear them n thinks ( harshad is doing all this )

Nandini gets up n say manik

Navya : nandini manik is gone to his house
Nandini tumhre sth itna SB hua aur tumhe mujhe btaya bhi nhi

Nandini : I don't want u to take tension

Navya : manik ne bola tha tumhare uthte hi tumhari ushse BT kar vau

Navya try to call maink but it coming not reachable

Nandini get tense

Nandini : main try krti hn
mujhe Abhi manik ke ghr jna h

Navya : PR nandini manik ne tumhai khi Jane MNA kiya h

Nandini : plz navya ( having tear in her eyes )


Part : 16


Neyonika reaches to harshad

Harshad get shoched to see her n thinks
(Yeh yha kya kr rhi h khi isse SB pta toh nhi chl gya aur isse pta kase chla main yha hn )

Neyonika: harshad tum soch rhai hoge yeh yha kaise ae n khi isse SB pta toh nhi chl gya
I don't have time to tll his things
Tumhari himat kaise hoe to kill my son
Main chahu toh Abhi tumhai arrest karva skti hn but main aisa nhi karungi

Harshad : wht do u want

Neyonika : smart boy ab Jo main bolungi vohi tum karoge

Neyonika tell him wht to do

Harshad : main sochta tha ki main sbse badha kamina hn but tum apne bete ke sth aisa kr rhi ho

Neyonika : mujhe tumhari koe bakwas Nhi suni AGR anything happen to my son than I will not leave u aur Jo Maine kha hai voh aaj ho Jana chiye kyoki tomorrow manik is going for event

She goes n thinking tum manik PR attack to jarur karoge aur as Manik plan u will be arrested isse khte ek tir se do nishane

N harshad is thinking Kamal hai apna km bhi krva gye aur mera km bhi

Harshad call someone tll him to go n tll nandini address n send Nandini image

Scene changes

Nandini getting out from the house
Some one pull nandini from backside n try to close nandini mouth n navya trying to help nandini but some other man hold her

Nandini : leave me
Leave me... Manik

Navya : nandini...
Help...

On the other hand manik saw his phn n no network is there n think ab tk toh nandini uth gye hogi n he try to bring network n network comes n calls Nandini

2 man nandini ko forcefully car main bitha rhai Thai n her phn rings up n she try to attend the call but. Man thrown it phn

Manik Abhi toh bell ja rhi ek DM se switched off phn yeh kya ho RHA h manik got tensed n calls navya

Man put nandini in car n navya try to stop them but fails than her phn rings

Navya : manik nandini ko

Manik : kya hua nandini ko
Bolo navya

Navya : voh

Manik : voh kya

Navya : nandini ko gunday le kr chle gye

Manik : wht ?

Cabir is standing with him

Cabir : manik kya hua

Manik : kaise

Navya : voh tumhara call nhi lg RHA tha toh nandini jid krne lgye ki ushe tumhra ghr Jana hai

Manik : tum ushai ROK nhi skti thi

Manik cuts the call

Cabir : manik tu kha ja rhai h
Kya hua

Manik : nandini ka kidnap ho gya

Cabir : wht

They both run downstair

N every one ask wht happen

Cabir : nandini ka kidnap ho gya

All r shocked all say together
Wht

They all go to police station

Manik : wht r u doing till now inspector

Cabir : manik calm down

Inspector : dikhiye hum apna km kr rhai hai

Manik : toh ab tk voh padhka kyo nhi gya

Inspector : ab kya hua

Mukti : Nandini is kidnapped

Inspector : wht
How

Manik tells everything n inspector and go there n do investigation

Manik comes out n get standing with car
Manik : where r u nandini

Try to controlling himself

N crying

On the other hand nandini reaches to house

Man tied her with rope on chair

Harshad comes

Harshad : nandini so u here

Nandini : harshad manik tumhai chodhega nhi

Harshad : I got scared

Nandini main tumhari dhamkiyo se darne nhi vla ab tk ushne kya kr liya

Nandini : chodo mujhe

Harshad : chodh dekhge

Nandini is crying n thinking where r u manik plz mujhe yha se le jao mujhe bhut Dr lg RHA h

On other hand manik n his friend n navya trying to find harshad everywhere

But nothing information get yet

Manik thinking harshad where r u
Nandini ko kuch nhi hona chahiye

Part : 17

Nandini : harshad tum aisa kyo kr rhai ho mujhe chodho varna I will shout

Harshad : tumhai jitna chilna chilna h chila lo yha tumhari awaaj koe nhi sunega

Nandini : help...
Help...
(Crying also )

Harshad : OK nandini let's make it easy for u

Tum mera km karo main manik ko kuch nhi karunga

Nandini : kaisa kam

Harshad : tension mat lo Nandini tumhai kiska murder krne ko nhi boluga bs
Only u have to do one thing

Nandini : Kya ??

Harshad: Manik ko chodh do aur main manik ko kuch nhi karunga

Nandini : main aisa kuch nhi karungi

Harshad : u love Manik or love manik's life
Which one do u love more

Nandini : harshad why r u doing this

Nandini get shocked to hear n tear r not stopping from her eyes
N remerbering harshad words u love Manik or love manik's Manik life

Harshad : nandini u have to decide now u don't have much time

Nandini remembering Manik words if we r together nothing happen to us n harshad words too
Kya karu main Manik
Nadini removing his tear n say nhi
I have to save manik life

Nandini : OK I m ready

Harshad : good girl

Harshad Leaves Nandini

Harshad : u have time up to tomorrow morning AGR u leave Manik till tomorrow nthng happen to Manik

Nandini left come outside n go to home

Nandini ly on bed n start crying very badly holding the bed sheet very tightly n saying manik I m sorry manik I have to do this for u
Humhara sth yhi tk tha
I know ki hum sth rhai toh tum mujhe kuch nhi hone doge but tumhari life ke liye
Tumhare liye
I have to do this
For u manik

I'm sorry manik
I m sorry

N Cry's loudy for n hour

N than after she wipe out her tear n call manik n say I need to talk to manik

Manik : hello nandini

Nandini : manik

Manik : where r u nandini

Nandini : at home

Manik : ghr pr ??

Nandini : voh
Voh Manik main vha se bhaag kr aa gye

Manik : r u okay na

Nandini : ya manik I m absolutely fine ( trying to control herself from crying n clearing her tear side by side )

Manik : thank god tumhai pta meri toh jaan hi chli gye thi

Nandini : I love u manik

Manik : I love u too my babu

Nandini : ab ghr aao tumhare liye surprise h

Manik : surprise ??

Nandini : manik come fast na

Manik : OK OK I m coming
N u remember nandini humhai aaj rt party main Jana h Maine tumhai apne friend rohan( song producer) ke bare main btaya tha ushai tumhari awaaj suni h
Isse tumhara Carrier bn jaega singing main

Nandini : ya I remember OK now u come here first

Manik : OK coming
Love u bye

Nandini : love u too

N cuts the phone n kiss on phn
N thinking manik this is our last day of life when we r together n I will
make it special for us

Manik tells to everyone

Everyone gets happy

N manik gets in car

In car thinking about Nandini

Other other hand

Nandini holding fireflies saying

Why always all bad things happen to us manik
Manik I need u but I can't
I can't Manik



Part : 18

Manik reaches to nandini house n get out from the car
Nandini comes at his back n closes manik eyes with her hand

Manik : wht r u dng

Nandini : manik wait na

Nandini manik ko terrace PR le kr jati n she decorate the it so beautifully
Nandini get down the hand from Manik eyes n manik open his eyes

Manik : impressive nandini

Nandini holds manik hand n put one had on her shoulder n other hand on her back n pull him close n start move trying to dance with him
N they start dancing
After than they lay on the mat n seeing the star n after sometime manik start seeing his real star

Nandini : manik
Why life is not like star
Why life is not always twinkling like star

Manik : u r wrong
My life is u
N u always shining like a star
Always my shining star
U r my shining star
If u go my will go in dark becoz star of my life are gone n
N I m

Manik saying last word die but nandini put her hand on mouth n manik kiss on it

Nandini : no manik life is not stop if someone gone
Life never stop for anyone

(Manik u r forcing me to change my decision but now I don't change my I don't able to forget never but u have to Manik
U have to )

Manik : where u lost

Nandini hugs her tightly like she never wants to leave him n having tear in her eyes n thinking I m sorry Manik I have to do this for u plz don't stop me

Manik watches his watch

Manik : nandini we have to go it's 8 pm n we have to reach upto 8 :30 get ready fast main tumhai pick krne ata hn

Manik leave his hand n than nandini touches her hand with her face feeling Manik

Manik : n nandini there is also a surprise after the party
now it's my turn

Nandini smiles

Manik also smiles n go

Nandini finding dress n she find red dress given by manik n sit on bed holding the dress start crying than she wipes out her tear n say
I should wear this dress becoz u gave me this dress
N Nandini start getting ready
Than horn sound come

Nandini comes to window n manik calls n she says coming manik

Nandini go down n sits in car n the car moves on

They reaches their destination

Manik open her side door n give him hand n nandini hold his hand n come out of car

Manik : chle Nandini

They both go inside

Rohan : oh hii manik

They both hug each other

Manik : hello n introduce nandini to him

Rohan : hello nandini

Nandini : hello

They shakes hand

Rohan : u was talking about him
K Nandini r u ready to perform here

Nandini sees to Manik n manik moves his eyes n ask her to say

Nandini : ya

Rohan goes to stage

Rohan : hiii guys
Here is friend manik mahlotra everybody knows him very well
His friend want to sing nandini plz come on
Everybody is clapping

Nandini start singing n seeing manik in whole song remerbing their old days n also having tear in his eyes

N manik is smiling n seeing nandini

Song

Teri khushboo aur teri saansein
Katra katra sab bhulayengi
Silvatein jo tumne chhodi hain
Dheere dheere sab mitayenge

Kaatne ko itni lambi umr aage hai
Jaane kiske peeche tu bewajah bhaage hai
Aankh nam hoti hai hone do
Honth lekin muskurayenge
Uski raaton se subah apni
Rafta rafta kheench laayenge

Aisa koi dil nahi jo kabhi toota nahi
Kaanch se ummeed kya rakhna...
Aisa koi dil nahi jo kabhi toota nahi
Kaanch se ummeed kya rakhna..

Song end everyone claps n nandini wipes her tear n rohan stage

Rohan : nandini u sing it U r amazing singer like manik

Nandini : thank you

Rohan : nandini u r main lead singer of my next album
Really manik she sing osm

Manik is happy to see it n smiling

Everyone is congratulating nandini

Manik : nandini CHLO let's go
I have a surprise for u
I tll u na

Nandini : OK

Manik : bye rohan n thanks

Rohan : thanks kyo
Instead of u I have to say thanks u
U give so osm singer
Honestly Manik thank you

They again hug each other

N come outside

Part : 19

Manik tie ribbon on nandini eyes
N make her come in

Manik : come this way

Nandini : manik

Manik open the ribbon from her eyes n went n than she open her eyes n see fire flies all around n the place so beautifully decorated with light n flower n she smiles

Nandini : manik manik

He comes hold nandini from back and n kiss on neck n move nandini in front of him n push closer to him n start dancing n than Manik kisses on her forehead than eyes n than on than on chicks n nandini too kisses him but when Manik try to kiss her on lips nandini pushes him very slowly n move a little forward than manik stop her by holding her hand n manik make her to come back n again move closer n than they kiss each other lips n at they lost in other word
They stop n nandini hug manik tightly and having tear in eyes n manik is smiling n manik break the hug see nandini n wipes his tear
N thinks
( no more tears nandini tomorrow everything will be f9)

N nandini thinks

( manik this is r last hug n kiss
Tomorrow everything will over )
Nandini again hug him

After hug they have dinner they feed each other so romantically
N than manik bend down in front of nandini n give him ring n than put the ring to nandini hand n after kiss on nandini hand n nandini having tear in eyes
Manik : u r my life
U always my shining star nandini
U bought light in my life
U taught how to live life
N shouts loudy
I love u nandini...
N hug her again n nandini also say

I love u manik

Manik drop nandini at home
They again hug each other n manik went nandini seeing manik car going n go to her room n calls anjali for tomorrow ticket for Bangalore
Ajanli thinks why nandini is so urgently going to Bangalore

Nandini whole night Cry lying on bed with holding fireflies n remembering every memory from starting to end with manik
BG song

Khoi khoi si hun main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwab hai
Ulja har khayal hai
Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Rah me kal kitni chirag the
Samne kal phoolon ki bhag thi
Iss se kahun kaun hai jo sune
Kante hi kyun maine hai chune
Sapne mere kyun hai kho gaye
Jage hain kyun dil me gum mere
Saare kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Na na na...

Kya kahun kyun ye dil udas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil wo baatein ab kahan
Wo din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betab sa
Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi beh gaye

In early morning nandini gets Up n writing letter for manik n think I should call Manik last time

On the other hand manik also gets up n calls everyone n gets a call from nandini

Manik : hello nandini
Gud mrng

Nandini : manik kya kr rhai ho

Manik : nandini
Koe intni subha kya karta h sota hai na

Nandini : Manik I want to say that I love u
I
Love u ( controlling herself from crying but having tear in eye)

Manik : I love u to my jaan
But nandini r u okay na
Mujhe kuch thik nhi lg RHA

Nandini : manik I'm absolutely f9
SB thik h

Manik : Nandini u r not f9 u need more sleep bye n sleep

Nandini : manik 1 min

Manik : Nandini plz tll
any problem

Nandini : no no manik not at all
Thinking(Sorry manik I have to do this )

Manik : nandini r u okay na

Nandini : OK bye manik
Sorry

N cuts the call immediately

Manik :hello Nandini
Nandini
Yeh nandini ko achank kya hogya

On the other hand Nandini kept the letter under the pillow
Nandini get out of the room n close the door n crying
N nandini stepping out from the house
N sitting in taxi thinking about past memory n specially about last night
Her eyes are full of tear

On the other hand

Everyone comes to manik house

Manik : all r ready

All say yes n hug

Manik also left the house

Cabir inform police

Manik reaches to the jungle

One car came


Part : 20



Harshad come out from car n manik too

Harshad :so
Q u are here manik

Manik : harshad harshad
Tu nhi sudhrega na
Mujhe LGA u will come wid many people to kill. Me like before

Harshad : main tere liye akla hi kafi hn
Pr main tujhe mar kr apne hath gande nhi krna chta tha

Manik : harshad tu kitna kamina u try to kill nandini
Ushai kya dushmani thi teri



Harshad : i wanted to kill u manik but har bar nandini comes in
When i wanted to shoot u nandini comes in front of u
Aur jb maine teri car ki break fail ki
U know that wht happen
Manik pr aaj nhi aaj koe nhi aega

Harshad punches on manik face n manik angry holds harshad collar n suddenly he calm down n leave n smiles n cabir making their video For evidence n calls the police to come

Manik : tu kya sochta tu yha kudh aya hai
I call u here

Harshad : manik yeh tu kya bol RHA hai

Manik : harshad ji Dr gye

Harshad again punches manik

Harshad : main Teri in bato main nhi ane wala

Manik puches harshad n they begin fight but after that police come n cabir n mukti n alai n druv n navya come n smiling n police arrested harshad

Harshad : main tum SB ko nhi chodunga

They all r smiling n manik thinks
Nandini I want to see happiness on yr face
N nandini mom calls manik

Manik : hello

Nandini 's mom : beta jldi ghr ao

Everybody gets tense

Manik : kya hua aunty everything is alright na

Nandini 's mom : beta nandini is not at home aur uska phn bhi nhi lg RHA h

Manik : u don't worry aunty I try to call Nandini
I m just coming

Everyone ask kya hua manik

Manik : nandini pta nhi kha chli gye aur uska phone bhi nhi lg RHA

Tum SB nandini ke ghr jao
I m just coming

Manik goes to meet harshad in jail
Shouts harshad

Harshad : mujhe pta tha manik tum vapas yhi aoge
Nandini nhi mil rhi na

Manik : kha hai nandini

Harshad : I don't know

Manik ( angerly ) : bta where is Nandini

Harshad : muje yeh nhi pta nandini kha hai PR mujhe yeh pta hai ki voh gye kyo hai

Manik : wht r u. Saying say clearly

Harshad : Maine nandini ko kha ki voh tumhai chodh de aur main tujhe maruga nhi
Aur voh bholi nandini mn bhi gye
She is so sweet

Manik : (manik holds harshad collar from outside ) harshad ...

Harshad : Manik Abhi toh aur kuch bhi hai btana calm down

Yeh nandini ka kidnap ka pln was not mine

Manik : wht ?

Harshad : yr mom neyonika

Manik : neyonika
Manik thinks
(I will not leave u neyonika easily
First I have to find nandini
Where u gone nandini
Come back plz
Nandini why I can't understand that how much pain from u r suffering that time n sits in car n reaches at nandini house

Manik comes

Mukti : kuch pta chla

Manik having tear in eyes

Cabir : manik kya hua nandini thik hai na

Manik : she leaves me
She is gone

Cabir : wht happen
Manik
Yeh tu kya bol RHA hai

Manik tells everything

Cabir: nandini will come soon
I know she can't leaves without u

Nandini's moms : kya
N start crying
Navya n alai control her
Manik goes to nandini n finds the letter of Nandini
N start reading letter
(Manik u know that we have share many memory I can't able to forget that never & u always live in my heart n manik main ja toh rhi hn but I will always in yr heart jb bhi meri yd ae just close yr eyes n feels me I m there wid u always manik jb se tum meri jindgi main
My life is totally changed n u make my life lovable when I m wid u I feel safe
Manik I can't define my love to u
Yeh yaddie le ja rhi hn apne sth
Inke shahre I will live my whole life n manik hope that u will forgive me
Manik main tumhse dar nhi jana chti but I have to this for yr life
Manik u will always leave in my prayers aur bs yhi dua krti hn tum kha bhi rhao safe rhai aur kush rhao
Manik I have to go
I have to go
I m sorry
Yr love nandini )

Manik eyes are full of tear n say nandini why u don't tll me n why I don't tll u

Manik calls ring
It's anjali


So here is long updae hope u guyz like it plz.. if u like it than plz... do comment
Love u all
Keep smiling



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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF]


Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome superb fantastic update

Manik will come to know about where Nandu could possibly go and will start his search from there but will ge be able to reach on time to get his Nandu back and he dint know what Nandu will do now

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Very nice and yes very long update. 😛.
Awesome and very emotional to.
Harsha never change.
But nandni left...yeh padke
Manik ki kya haalt hogi
Very emotional.
I like each and every bit of it.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful update.



Stay blessed.






P.s thanks for pm.





Love..

Jyoti.






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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
awesome update...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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