Manan ff -Tum hi ho (part :73&74pg -139) thread 2 pg-1 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for being late
amazing chapters
so beautiful work
cont soon
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Update was really nice...
Manik cares soo much fr nandini. ..aww soo sweet...
N I hope everything in their lives sort soon...
Bye tc stay blessed😊

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Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Originally posted by: shubhshash

Update was really nice...

Manik cares soo much fr nandini. ..aww soo sweet...
N I hope everything in their lives sort soon...
Bye tc stay blessed😊


thanx..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear...
As promise um back... i read ur all parts...
very nicely describe all the parts...
manik is very cute and understanding he always support nandini in every situation...superb... some moments its very hearth touching between manan...
Their bond is so strong... their cute moments is superb...
amazing parts...
Once again thank you so much for ur pm...
Well done ... keep it up...
Continue soon...
keep smiling...
see u soon...
lots of love


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Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Hey dear...

As promise um back... i read ur all parts...
very nicely describe all the parts...
manik is very cute and understanding he always support nandini in every situation...superb... some moments its very hearth touching between manan...
Their bond is so strong... their cute moments is superb...
amazing parts...
Once again thank you so much for ur pm...
Well done ... keep it up...
Continue soon...
keep smiling...
see u soon...
lots of love



Thank so much dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
..caring Manik...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
Manan moments...awesome...
thanx for PM😊
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Originally posted by: arshuaar

.<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">.caring Manik...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
Manan moments...awesome...
thanx for PM😊</font>


Thanx..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum Hi Ho

Part : 50

Nandini start crying
Navya sit wid nandini n hold her face
Navya : nandini sb thik hai kuch nhi hua
Nandini get up

Nandini : mujhe manik ke pass jana hai

Navya : manik gya hai abhi ajega voh sb handle kr lega..

Nandini : no.. mujhe manik se abhi bt krni..

Nandini open the door n go outside navya shout

Navya: nandini ruko

Mukti n alai sitting on couch listen the shout of navya

Mukti : navya.. kyo chila rhi hai..

Alai : khi.. nandini.. ko sb pta toh nhi chl gya..

Nandini reaches downstair

Both goes toward her

Mukti : nandini kha ja rhi ho

Nandini : manik ke pas
Mujhe ushse bat krni hai

Mukti : nandini voh abhi thodhi dr bd ajaega than u will talk

Navya : haan nandini
Vaise bhi manik sb handle kr lega

Nandini start crying n say yeh sb meri glti na main rt ko manik ke sth party main jati na yeh sb hota jbse humri shaddhi hoe hai manik is suffering becoz of me ..

Mukti hold her from shoulder
make sit her on couch

Mukti : nandini aisa kuch nhi hai tum ek br betho yha

Nandini : it's all my fault
Mujhe hi sb thik krna padhega

Nandini get up n start going towards door they both stopping her but nandini didn't listening them n suddenly she reaches door she feels dizziness

Mukti hold her

Mukti : nandini..
Chalo phle upr fir manik se bt krlena
First take yr medicines

Mukti navya n alai takes nandini into the room n nandini is only saying mujhe manik ke pass jana hai
N navya give nandini regular medicines n also sleeping pills

Nandini sleeps n they all come outside

Navya : thank god nandini ko sleeping pill de di vrna ushai handle krna bhut muskil ho jata..

Mukti : ek toh vaise hi nandini ki health itni khrb upr yeah sb
She is in a shock

Alai : humhai manik ko bta dena chiyie

Mukti : no alai
Vaise manik itna preshn hai aaega toh ushai bta..denge

Alai : yeah

Scene changes

Manik holding the collar of reporter who spread the non sense news

Manik : teri himahat kaise hoe yeh sb krne ki

Manik punches him

Manik : i will not leave him

Cabir : manik rukja

Manik : tune nandini ke bare main aise kaise publish kiya
I will not leave u

Police came n arrested him n police forcefully make manik to leave as he beating him again n again..

N manik reaches to home n media not gone yet but manik ignores them n enter in the house

Manik : bloody media...

Mukti : media ko handle toh krna padhega

Manik : nandini kha hai
Voh thik toh hai na ushai kuch pta toh nhi lga

Mukti : manik nandini..
Nandini tv pr news dekhli thi

Manik : wht??
Guyz tumhne tv kyo on krne diya

Nandini go upstair doing rest n than she watch that news

Manik : kaisi hai ab voh

Mukti : ushai handle krna bhut muskil ho gya
She is only saying that she wants to meet u
Phir ushai chkr agye

Manik : kya..
Nandini thik toh hai na

Mukti : manik relax..
She is sleeping now we have given sleeping pills to her

Manik go upstair n nandini is not there in the room n manik got tense n start shouting her name n than he go to washroom n nandini is sitting in corner all wet n she is looking very disturbed n shower is on
N manik off the shower

Manik : nandini r u mad... just get... up..yeh kya halt bna rkhi.. u know.. na.. yr.. condition na.. no cold water bath.. he shouts n hold her arm n try to get her up )

N than nandini get up
Manik covers her with towel n dry her

Nandini tears r continuously falling manik hug her n say calmly

Manik : nandini everything is f9

Nandini break the hug n say

Nandini : no
Kuch thik nhi hai
Meri vjaha se all this happen it's all my fault (crying)

Manik : nandini kl humhne iss sb pr bt ki thi na
Isme tumhari koe glti nhi thi

Nandini : main party main gye hi kyo
No main tumhari jindgi jbse i made life hell

Manik : nandini...(holding her arm tightly..)

Nandini : i think
I should go out from yr.. life

Manik : nandini wht r u saying
U made my life hell
No nandini no u told how to live a life kya hua thodhe gm ae
We will fight them together
N don't ever talk about going anywhere

Manik hold nandini hand

Manik : nandini...
Plz... don't worry i will sought out everything n i m going to do that now (says while whiping her tear)

Manik about to go but nandini hold his arm

Nandini : where r u going (now.. nandini.. is not crying)

Manik : sabka mouth shut krne
Sabko jwab dene

Nandini : i also want to go wid u
Manik : nhi nandini tum janti nhi ho voh kaise kaise question puchte
No i don't want that u to enter in this

Nandini : no yeh sb meri vjahase hua toh mujhe hi handle krna hoga
Plz manik

Manik : nandini isme tumhara koe fault nhi hai k aur main sbko yhi btauga

Nandini : okay okay isme mera koe fault nhi but lekin fir bhi i want to go wid u plz manik
Tumhne abhi we fight every problem together
Toh why not this

Manik : okay

Nandini go change her cloth n than manik hold nandini hand n they both come downstair

Cabir : tum dono kha ja rhai

Manik : sb ka mu bnd krne

They all come outside
N all reporter start asking silly questions from nandini n nandini got confuse wht to say n than manik lose his temper n hold the collar of one reporter n start shouting on them n nandini saying manik...
N cabir hold manik n controlling him

Manik : do u know tum yeh sb kiske bare main bol
Voh ladhki jo abhi abhi itni badhi bimari se uthi hai
N she trys to sing for me
For his husband ushne pichle itne mahino se gana nhi gaya tha n she sings for me n u r sying she insulted me
U all r not human being u all that wants only masala not even thinks that ise kisi ki jindgi pr kya effect padhega
She always thinks about others before herself

Nandini having tear in eyes n looking to manik with so much love n affection n manik leave inside in anger

Nandini : i hope aap sbko sare ans. Mil gye honge

nandini also leaves

Cabir : aap sb yha se hat sakte hai

Nandini n all come inside

Manik is sitting on couch

Mukti : wao manik tune sbki bolti bd krdi

Navya : ya unke faces dekhne layak thai

Everybodybody looking happy
But manik is looking disturbed
N nandini is lost in manik words
Cabir sit with her on couch

Cabir : manik ...
Kya hua

Manik :yeh log don't have any sense
Yeh log nandini ke bare main aisa kaise bol skte

Nandini go to manik hold manik hand

Nandini : manik..
They only want masala n u know manik (come close to ear n say) aaj mujhe tumsai aur bhi jada pyr ho gya hai

N both look into eachother eyes n smiles


Part : 51

Night time

Manik is giving medicine to nandini but he was lost that all happen n nandini knows that manik is disturbed nandini look at him n smiles n manik also give her little bit smiles n manik is about to go but nandini hold his hand

Nandini : manik come here n sit with me

(Manik is sit beside her on bed)

Nandini holding his hand say

Nandini : manik ab toh sb thik hai

Manik : nandini
I can't able to forget that how anybody can speak about u
Like this way

Nandini : manik...
They r reporters
Unhai bs koe bhi masala chiye
Apne channel ko popular krne ke liye
Manik mujhe in sb koe prvha nhi becoz i know u r always with me (holding his face )

Nandini hug manik n say i love u manik n manik also hold her tightly n say i love u to nandini

N than nandini break the hug n say

Nandini : i m just coming

Manik : where ?

Nandini : wait na

Nandini comes with guitar n start playing it n looking towards manik n than also start singing song

Haan aa o...

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon (x2)

(Nandini go towards manik n sit on his lap n hold his face n both r looking into each other eyes)

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Aa o... aa...

( n than nandini holding his hand make manik get up n put his hand on her back n put her hand on his shoulder)

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda (x2)

(Come close his face)

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye

(Put her head on his shoulder n than manik hold her )

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O...
aa...

Next mrng

Nandini get up n see manik is ready with the luggages

Nandini : where u r going

Manik : i m not going
We r going

Nandini : hum ja rhai
Pr kha

Manik : goa

Nandini : goa!
Pr manik yeh pln kb bna

Manik : stop asking questions
Get up n get ready fast

Nandini : pr manik

Manik hold nandini shoulder n make her get up n push in the washroom

Manik :pr var kuch nhi
first get ready n than i will talk

Nandini come out from washroom

Nandini : now i m ready ab toh btao pln kb aur kaise bna

Manik : nandini...
U know meri goa main song recording hai n u also going with me becoz i don't want to leave u alone n also i can't leave without u

Nandini : manik sb yha hai toh shi n kuch dino ki toh bt thi

Manik : nandini..
Tum bs mere sth chl rhi

Nandini : okay ab tumhne sb tyri kr hi li hai
Toh wht can i do now

Manik : so come on nandini we r getting late

They sit in car
At evening manik is driving the car n nandini shout

Nandini : manik... stop

Manik : nandini kya hua

Nandini : i want to eat ice cream

Manik : tumhne toh mujhe dara hi diya
K u wait here i bring the ice cream

Nandini : k come fast

Manik go n nandini also come out from the car n give a smile to manik n manik also give back smile to her n than he brings the ice cream

Manik give ice cream to nandini n she eating ice cream like child n manik looking at her n smiling n they standing with support of car

Bg song

Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Nandini : thank u manik for giving me such a beautifull life

Manik : n thank u nandini for making my life beautiful

Their ice cream r finished n but ice cream remain on her lips manik come close to her n suck it from her lips n than she cube manik face n fuses her lips with him first manik was taken a back but than he also respond n start kissing her widely n without breaking the kiss he take her in her arm n than he break the kiss n he ly her backsit of car n come top of her n entwined his hand with her n kiss on her forehead n than on eyes n nandini is moaning her name n than he kiss on her collar bone.. n than he slide down her kurti sleeves n kiss on her bare shoulder but suddenly the reality hit his mind that they r not at their home they r on public road n in car.. so he immidiatly get up from her n nandini also get up n she is blushing very hard ..

I m sorry.. i didn't realize.."manik about say more but nandini cutted his word n say "sh.. i can undertand.. "

...

After sometime they reaches goa..

So here is next parts hope u all like n plz.. do comment.. n i want to tell that goa.. trip going to be romantic n dhamaka.. n emotinal.. too...
Keep smiling
Love Mehak




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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing...
beautifully penned ...
Manan ... Goa...
thanx for PM😊

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