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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
read all the parts in a go!!!! amazing seriously. i love ur fff. keep writing.😊
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awesome update dea...
read all part in one go
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Yur story is too good dear..
N yur last update wow...superb. .
But ohh god...plzz no misunderstanding between manan...I hope manik will explain everything to nandini. ..
Continue soon
Take care😊
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#54

Originally posted by: shubhshash

Yur story is too good dear..

N yur last update wow...superb. .
But ohh god...plzz no misunderstanding between manan...I hope manik will explain everything to nandini. ..
Continue soon
Take care😊


Thanx...
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This is an awesome story ... really amazing ...
you have written very beautifully

i am reading your story on instagram ... and its beautiful

any ways Thanks for the pm ... i will pm u the comments after reading every chappy on insta
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey already reads it. ...n love ur dis story
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tysm fr pm me...i know i'm so late...sorry...
its a lovely story...plz continue...
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thanx for PM😊
sorry for late reply...
amazing
beautifully penned...
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Tum hi ho

Part : 36

Nandini is coming out from studio n manik also come out
N shout

Manik : nandini...
nandini...

Manik run n hold nandini hand but nandini thrown his hand n shouts

Nandini : leave me manik

Manik get shocked too nandini behaviour

Manik calmly ask : kya hua

Tear come out frm nandini eyes

Nandini : why u do this
Why manik
Manik tumhai mujh pr itna bhi trust nhi thi that...
That I will win this competition on my own
Why manik
Why

Manik try to clear this but nandini again thrown his hand

Manik : nandini mujhe yeh krna padha
Ek bar suno

Nandini : manik I don't want to listen anything
Manik ab sune ko kya bacha hai
U broken my trust

Manik : nandini agr main yeh sb nhi krta toh voh meera jit jati
She given money to organiser

Nandini : manik toh u done the same thing

Manik : pr nandini

Nandini : manik why u do this

Nandini turn

Manik : nandini plz don't go

Nandini ran n rain also start
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo

Manik shouts

Manik : nandini...
Nandini...

Manik bent n start crying n other hand nandini sit on bench n crying remembering that vedio

Nandini reaches home standing in front of of mirror
The image of manik giving money to organiser comes on mirror
Nandini throw the vase on it n shouts

Nandini : manik why u do this
Why u don't trust me
Not trusted on my talent

Bg song

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
likh di judaai

On the othr hand manik reaches at home n calls cabir ask him to reach at his home

Cabir comes to manik home

Manik thinking I have to do something

Cabir : manik kya hua tune mujhe itne urgently kyo bolaya
Everything is all right

Manik : nthng is right

Manik tll everthing to cabir n also tll him to show the true face of organiser in front of all public

Cabir : toh manik yeh bat bhi nandini ko btani chiye thi

Manik : nandini abhi kuch nhi sunegi

Next mrng nandini getting ready n looking very disturbed

nandini having serious headache she come out to take the medicine from the table n newspaper is kept along with it
she noctice the name manik in newspaper headline
she kept the water on table n take read it

the rockstar manik mahlotra show the true colour of the organiser
she read the whole news
n tears start rolling from her eyes
nandini say
i was wrong manik do this to reveal the truth
i m sorry manik

i need to talk to manik right now
she take the phn to call manik
but this i should go to his house n talk to him
nandini take her hand bag n come out from the house

manik handling the press but waiting for nandini
cabir comes n say manik u go inside i will handle this

manik comes inside n sits on couch n looking at door n take out the phn from pocket n think to call nandini but not call




#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 37

nandini reaches to manik house presss see nandini n start asking question frm nandini but cabir handle them n nandini go inside n see manik is busy in phn n nandini call rings it's manik call manik listen nandini ringtone n see nandini standing at door n manik gets up n nandini having tear in eyes run towards manik n hug him

nandini : i m sorry manik

manik break the hug

nandini again n again saying sorry

manik : nandini listen

nandini : manik maine tum pr trust nhi kiya
maine kyo nhi socha ki tum aisa kr nhi skte
(having tear in eyes )

manik hold her face

manik : nandini ush time u were in a shock to hear that
tum kya koe bhi hota ushai yhi lgta i have done wrong thing

nandini : but manik

manik wipe her tear

manik : ab aur kuch nhi
just earse this incident from yr mind k
koe bhi misunderstanding in our relationship can't create any problem k

nandini : manik tum itne ache kyo hn

manik : kyoki tum extra ordinary achi ho
now smile

nandini smiles little bit

nandini : manik i m sorry

nandini fall in manik arm

manik : nandini ...
nandini...

manik hold nandini in her arm
n comes in his room and put nandini on bed n call doc.

fab 5 n navya also reach there

mukti : wht happen to
nandini

manik : we r talking suddenly she fall

doc. arrive n do check up

manik : wht happen doc.

doc. : kuch nhi bs stress se chkr aa gye h
u gave her this medicine n yeh kuch test hai krva lena

manik : ya sure doc.
but nandini ko hosh kb aega

doc. : 3 - 4 hour maine unhai injection diya h

doc. goes

mukti : manik tu tension mt le nandini will be alright

manik : hmm...

they all go out accept manik

manik sit beside nandini holding her hand

manik : nandini
why u take so much of tension

after 3 hour
nandini gets up n manik is in a sleep
he is looking so cute in a sleep she smiling manik also gets
he rubs his eyes n say

manik : tum kb uthi

nandini : just abhi

manik : how r u ?

nandini : bs little bit having pain in head

manik : nandini tum apni health bilkul khyl nhi rkti

nandini : manik i m feeling so guilty for yesterday

manik : i told u na forget that
k
from now we will never discuss that

nandini : ok ok baba
sorry

manik : u do some rest

nandini : pr manik aaj mukti ka sangeet hai
i have do the preparation

manik : oh madam aapke bina bhi sb ho jaega

nandini : pr manik

manik : i don't want to listen anything aur haan doc. ne kuch test ke liye bola kl hum vha jaege

nandini : pr manik i am f9

manik : nandini
k i m going to mukti house
k u rest

nandini : ok

manik go n nandini ly on bed

now it's 5 pm

manik comes to his room n nandini reading newspaper

manik : how r u now

nandini : manik now i m perfectly f9

manik : let's go
get redy

nandini thinks i m sorry manik i m lying to u that now also i having pain in head but if tll u will take tension of me

manik : kha kho gye
if u r not ok we will not go

nandini get up from the bed

nandini : no
no manik i m f9 but manik meri dress toh ghr pr hai

manik : if manik is here no need to take tension

i brought a dress for u

manik gave her dress its langha choli

nandini : thank u manik it so preety

manik : chlo chlo go inside n get ready

nandini go inside
n manik take his cloth out
n manik goes out




#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 38

nandini is standing in front of mirror n try to tying the strips of choli from back n manik comes in n hold the strip n touch it back n tie it than kiss on her back n turns nandini n pull her closer to him n manik hold nandini face nandini close her eyes manik come close to nandini face
navya knocks the door

navya : nandini...
nandini...

manik : isse kaise pata chl jata that we r

nandini : manik...

nandini open the door

navya : vha nandini tum toh ready ho kaisi ho

nandini : i m f9

navya : tumhne airing toh phne hi nhi idr ao hum phna dete hai

on the other hand manik calls rings up it's mukti

mukti : guyz tum kb tk aoege i m waiting for u

manik : mukti chill we r coming

mukti : nandini kaisi hai

manik : now she is f9
k bye i m getting ready

mukti : come fast

manik : nandini chle ?

nandini : ya
chle navya

they all reaches to mukti house n go to mukti

nandini : mukti u r looking so preety

mukti : thank u nandini
n howz u now

nandini : i m perfect now
Sorry main sangeet ki preparation nhi kra pae

mukti : nandini...
plz don't say like that k
tum yha ae ho u r f9 this more imp.

nandini : hmmm...

nandini : chle navya alai

mukti : where u guyz going

alai : just wait n watch

the song start
Tu le aa de menu golden jhumke
Main kanna vich pana choom choom ke
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chitiyan kalaaiyan ve

nandini start the dace n after that alai n navya join her n after all boyz also join them
n navya also insist abhi n mukti to dance
all dance in last manik n nandini dacing together
nandini suddenly stop dancing

manik : r u ok

nandini nods yes but she was not feeling well she was having pain in head
she go upstair in mukti's room washroom

nandini saying to herself wht happening to me
she was taking long long breath
she wash her face wid water

manik knocks

manik : nandini r u ok

nandini : ya manik i m f9
i m just coming

nandini comes out n now she looking better

nandini : chle manik

they both come down

cabir : tum dono hr jagha start ho jate ho

manik : cabir

nandini : manik
ghr chle
i m not feeling well

manik : ya why not

nandini : guyz sorry we have to go

mukti : nandini it's ok yr health is more imp.
k

manik : bye guyz

they both r setting in car
nandini is looking not well

manik hold her hand n say nandini u will be f9

nandini smiles a lit bit


manik : tomorrow we will go to doc. for test

nandini :ok

next mrng

manik n nandini reaches to hospital for test

doc. comes n do test of nandini
doc. : come n take report tomorrow

manik : ok doc.

manik is looking tense

nandini : manik don't worry i m f9 mujhe kuch nhi hoga k

manik : nandini main tension agr tum kuch hogya i will be

nandini put hand on her lips

nandini : manik plz never ever say like this

manik kiss on nandini forehead
manik drop nandini at home

manik : nandini get ready at 6
i will pick u up

nandini : okay

#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 39

nandini selecting dress for mehndi function of mukti
she select the red anarkali suit n go to wash room

manik comes inside

manik : nandini...
nandini...
where r u come fast we r getting late

nandini : wait manik i m just coming

nandini come outside

nandini : chle manik

manik looking nandini

manik : something is missing

nandini : wht

manik : come here

manik drag nandini at front of mirror

manik take earing from dressing n put it on nandini ear
manik : now u r looking perfect

nandini blushes

nandini : manik chle

manik : ya

they both reaches mandhi function venue

navya : nandini chlo tum bhi mehndi lgvalo
manik main nandini kuch dr ke liye tumse dur le ja rhi

nandini go wid navya

girls r putting mehndi on mukti hand
nandini : wao so nice

mukti : thanx nandini
kamla di nandini ko bhi lagao
come sit here nandini

nandini sit n kamla start putting mehndi on nandini hand

mukti : kamla manik ka naam jarur likhna

nandini smiles

alai comes n take the hand of mukti n start singing song
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai
O hariyali banno
Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan
Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi
Angnaayi, angnaayi
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

all dances on this song

manik drag nandini to the corner

nandini : manik wht r u doing my mehndi will be spoil

manik : nandini i want too see yr mehndi

nandini show her hand in front of manik

manik :beautiful

nandini smiles

nandini : manik...

manik : hmm..

nandini : chlo find yr name in it

manik start finding his name

manik : where where

nandini : u can't find it ( sadly)

manik : where where

nandini make faces

manik : here it is

nandini smiles

nandini : wao manik u find it
i thought

manik come closer to nandini

manik : wht u thought

nandini : manik i thought

manik : wht u thought nandini

nandini : i thought to go n u will not stop me

nandini push manik n ran

manik : nAndini...

manik also run after her

nandini : u can't catch me

manik : now i show u nandini

nandini is running but suddenly nandini stop n about to fall manik shouts n run to catch nandini

manik : nandini...

nandini fall in manik arm
everybody reach there

nandini : manik

manik put nandini on couch
give her water

manik is looking very tense
nandini hold manik hand n say

nandini : manik i m f9

all guest gone

mukti : pr hua kya tha

nandini : voh i was running
ek dm chkr ae n than manik catches me

manik : it's all my fault

nandini : manik...
i m f9 and it's not yr fault

manik go n cabir also go after him

nandini : manik...

mukti : rhne do nandini

nandini : i m sorry mukti meri vjha se tumhari function spoil ho gya

mukti : ya ab tumhne neri party spoil ki hai pay toh krna padhega

all shocked

mukti : mere ghr ruk kr

nandini smiles

mukti : chlo nandini mere room main ajao n navya n alai tum bhi k

navya help nandini to get up

they all come in mukti room

on nandini phn manik msg arrived

manik : sorry nandini main ush vqt aise hi chla gya

nandini smiles

nandini send it's k n i m at mukti house

manik : gud nite n tc

nandini : gud nite

all girls talk upto late night

navya : chlo guyz ab so jana chiye
vaise bhi kl bhut km hai na mukti

mukti blushes

they all sleep

next mrng manik calls rings up

manik pick up the call in half sleep

manik : hello

doc. : manik come fast i have to tll u some thing serious about nandini report

manik come out of her sleep n gets tensed

manik : wht ??

doc. : u


Plz... guyz.. tell me.. if i continue posting or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...update was good...
I hope nandini is fyn...I guess she has sme serious disease...
But I knw she will be fyn...
Bye tc...stay blessed😊

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