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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: HTA111

Fantastic awesome update

Nandu wants to make her own identity and not want any favours from manik and nyo gates her and will do anything to keep them apart hopefully this will prove her point for making herself

Continue soon and thanks for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Muskan_Dhamija

😉😊😊Thank god.. nandini was safe..and manan is togther now.. so happy😆

such.. a big...post ... thank u so much for lamba wala.. update...and each and ever... scene i luv u it...😊and the romance scene... i was just blushing..😳 but nindini ko rukna nhi chahye tha...😃😉 koi. Nhi ... keep it up..👏luv u.. alot mehak...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Ausom update

Buddy
Really love it A lot
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛



Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
PLZ POST THE NEXT PART
I M EAGERLY WAITING FOR IT SO POST IT SOON
KEEP SMILING
LOVE MUSKAN
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Osm story i just read all together n it just superb plz... post next pary soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya__kapoor

<font size="5">Osm story i just read all together n it just superb plz... post next pary soon</font>


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38


TUM HI HO

Part : 27

Next mrng

Manik n nandini reaches to where auditions going on
They r sitting in car
Nandini is looking tense

Manik holds nandini hand

Manik : why r u taking tension
Tum bhut acha gati ho
U will be selected

Nandini : Manik select hone ki dur ki bat hai
Main ga bhi paungi

Manik : nandini ...
Nandini ..

Hold her hand n kiss on it

Manik : look at me
Don't be nervous
I m wid u na

Nandini nods n than they hug n come out of the car

Scene change

They were sitting in waiting room n waiting her turn

Sound come next turn of nandini murti be ready

Nandini get up n start going n looking so nervous
Manik hold her arm n blink his eye

Manik. : all the best
I m wid u (pecking her forehead)

Nandini smiles n go

Nandini come on stage

Nandini : hello sir
Hello mam

Judges : hello

1st judge : u nandini murti

Nandini : yes mam

2nd judge : why u wan't to become singer

Nandini : because my passion is singing n I want to do be independent

2nd judge : gud
So start

Nandini start singing song
O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena

Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Yun hi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

Aa.. aa.. aa..

1st judge : aap yha kya kr rhi h

Nandini : sir.. ( get tensed )

1st judge : u r star.. ab tk kha thi aap Tumhane bhut acha gya

2nd judge : I. M sure u will be the finalist

Nandini : thank u sir
Thank u mam
(Smiles )

Both judge say together : u r selected

Nandini sadly coming outside

Manik : nandini kya hua

Nandini : voh manik...

Manik got tensed

Nandini : I m selected
(Shouts )

N hug manik

They both r so happy

Manik : I tell u na u will be selected

One man came ( Rohan )

Rohan : congress nandini
U sing very well
Day after tomorrow will be the final audition
Top 16 candidate will be selected
U also have to play guitar

So get ready

Nandini : but sir I don't know how to play guitar

Manik : nandini uski tension mat lo

Rohan : AGR u will be selected I will be yr trainer
I wish u will be selected becoz tum hai voh bat hai

Nandini : thank u sir

Rohan gone

Manik : nandini
Why he is taking so tension of u

Nandini : my monster Manik is jealousing

Manik : nandini isi BT nhi hai

I know tum meri ho

( come closer to nandini )

Nandini push manik n come little forward

Nandini : manik this public place

Manik hold nandini arm n start coming close to her

Manik : so wht

Nandini : Manik ...

Nandini again push manik n run outside

Manik : nandini nandini
Wait ...


Part : 28

#Tum__hi__ho

Manik n nandini reaches to manik house

Nandini : manik hum tumhare ghr kyo ae hai

Manik : u forgotten i have to teach u guitar

Nandini : haan manik
Manik main sik toh jaungi na

Manik : agr manik mahlotra sikhae toh animal bhi sikh jae

Nandini : manik u r comparing wid animal

Manik : nandini main toh mask kr rha tha
i know tum sikh jaugi

Manik : nandini u start the practise i will be come in 2 min

Nandini hold the guitar like veena

Manik comes n laugh on her

Manik : nandini tum seriouly guitar ko aise pakadh rhi thi

Nandini having tear

Nandini : manik mujhe toh guitar pakadhna bhi nhi ata
How i come to know how to play it (say sadly like 2 yr baby )

Manik : nandini...
(Removing her tear )
It's not a big deal
Tum bhi na emotinal ho jati ho
Nandini i can't see u in tear

Nandini : par manik ..

Manik stand at the back of nandini n put the guitar on her hand sets her finger n start moving her finger by his hand
Both lost in it

Nandini : manik if u will be not wid than i can't do even small thing

Manik holding her hand

Manik : i m always there for u
Okay

Like this manik teaches nandini guitar for two days



N now the day of audition is come

Manik : today i m so worried about u

Nandini : aaj i have no tension
Becoz u teach me

N nandini smiles

( they were standing at back stage )

Sound come
Nandini murti come on the stage n start singing also playing guitar


1st judge : kya tumhne training li hai khi se

Nandini : no mam
infact mujhe toh two days phle tk guitar bajna bhi nhi ata tha
But someone has taught me in two days

1st judge : oh really well played
Nandini : thank u mam

2nd judge : even i also impress
But tumhai result ka wait krna padhega after all the candidate played than the result will be annoced

Nandini come out

Manik : wao nandini
U sing n play the guitar osmly

Two girls came
Sir autograph plz

Manik give the autograph

Nandini is smiling

Manik : jb tumhsai se log autograph mange na tbh i will be more happy

Nandini smiles

Rohan come

Rohan : wao nandini u played guitar so nicely

Nandini : thank u sir

Sound come
All candidate come on the stage

Manik : nandini go fast

Nandini go to stage n manik walking in corridor in tension than he go to back stage

The host is annoucing the result nandini join hands praying to god

Host : n the last name is

Nandini : plz plz god

Manik also prayng for her

Host : nandini chawla ...

Nandini having tear
Manik also get shoched

Judge : there is a confusion

It's not nandini chawla
It's nandini murti

Host : sorry guyz the last name is nandini murti

Nandini n manik gets happy
After that nandini run to manik n hug him

Nandini : manik manik
I m so happy
Yeah...

Manik is smiling on seeing nandini happy

Nandini : this is only starting
Manik
Age...(said tensely)

Manik : i know u will win all the things like this
Like today u done it

Nandini smiles n hug him again

nandini : jb tk tum mere sth ho tb i can do anything

Part : 29

Tum__hi__ho

Nandini is meeting other contestants

Meera is selfish n rich girl n emotionaless girl

Meera : u r manik girl frnd na

Nandini ingnore her

Meera : manik rockstar ki gf itni boring just see her dress
I know manik is only using her

Nandini : just shut up
Manik is not only my bf
He is my life
i know manik
so u better don't interfare in it..

meera make faces n go from there

abhay( other contestant ): hello nandini

nandini : hi

they shake hands

abay is a nice n supportive guy

host : guyz today u will meet yr trainers
u all go to practice room yr trainer r waiting there

manik call rings

manik : hello
nandini

nandini : missing me na

manik : no (manik start giving accuses to tease her) voh nandini i called u becoz i want ask u reach there safely or not n wht r u dng

nandini : manik yha aa kr main kya karungi
offcorse my practices start from today
i know manik u missing me
but manik we have too

manik : i want to be there wid u
nandini : manik u also have do yr work na
i am f9 n don't take tension of me
manik i have to go i will be free at 6
bye manik
love u
n cuts the call

manik : acha nandini listen
hello nandini

Rohan (nandini's n abhay's trainer )

Rohan : hello my students

nandini : hello.. sir i m glad that u r training us...

Rohan : next week there is 1st round u have to sing 2 song k

than top 10 will be selected n i want my both student will selected
so guyz ready

nandini : ya

abhay :ya sure

Rohan : so guyz i want that we go to some open place
music practice achi hogi
n switched off yr phn i don't want any disturbance

nandini call manik but his phn coming not reachable she want to inform him that she will be late..

Rohan : chlo guyz we r getting late

they all go to park n start practicing

now time is 6 pm
manik reaches to pick nandini

manik go inside but nandini is not there

he ask to watch man n watch say he dosen't know

manik calls nandini
but nandini phn switched off
manik thinks ( may bhi ghr jakr so gye ho )
he go her home but nandini is not there

on the other hand nandini classses not get over
nandini is getting worry about manik
n thinking (manik will be waiting for me
kya karu )

Rohan : nandini where u lost

nandini : sir i was not feeling well

Rohan : k f9 next classes will be after 2 days so prepare yr songs in 2 days k

nandini : k

manik comes to his to check nandini

his phn rings

manik : kha thi main tumhara kbse phn try kr rha hn

nandini : manik relax
manik have tried yr phn to tell that practice khi aur ho rhi hai but yr phn is coming not reachable

manik : u know main kitna dr gya tha

nandini : manik i m f9 k
i m coming

manik : no i m coming tll me where r u

nandini tells the place n manik comes to pick her

Manik hug nandini

Manik : i can't leave without u even for one sec.

nandini : manik me also...

after that they reaches to manik house

manik :nandini howz yr practice

Nandini : it's too boring without u

manik pulls her towards him
n holding her waist say

manik : really nandini

nandini blushes

nandini : manik...

Part : 30

Tum__hi__ho

Manik about to kiss her on lips but nandini put her hand on her lips
n manik kiss on it

Nandini pull manik n turn to move but manik try to stop her by holding her arm but nandini slips n manik fall on her they both have eyelock than manik come close to her try to kiss
her


her but mukti knocks the door
n mukti shout

mukti : Manik open the door


manik get up n open the door
nandini also get up

Manik : kya hai...

Mukti : oh nandini bhi yha hai
sorry to disturb u guyz
i want to tll that my marriage date is fixed..

Nandini : oh great when

Mukti : after 1 month

Manik hug mukti n nandini also hug mukti

Mukti : so guyz i have to organise the party where all relative of abhi n my family come n we annouce our marriage but ek problem decorations walo last movement pr mna kr diya ane se maine sbko bta diya all r coming to help me organising the party n kya tum dono help karoge mr & miss person

Manik : yeh kissi bt kar rhi ho mukti why not

nandini : ya offcouse we will

Mukti : i know guys u never say wrong i m just pulling leg
vaise nandini howz yr competition going on

nandini : osm

Manik : so let's go guyz

they all go to mukti house
everybody waiting for them

they all start doing the decorations

Nandini putting the light on wall standing on ladder n manik is helping her

Manik : nandini come down
i will do it

nandini : Manik i want to do it
ek help kardo voh vha jo light padhi h voh leao

Manik goes to pick that light

nandini leg slip n

manik watch her n shout
nandini...n start running

Nandini also shout aaa...

n nandini about to fall down but manik on time catches her

nandini hold her collar n hide her face

Cabir : nandini is safe now manik

manik put nandini down

manik : i tll u na nandini i will do it
agr tum gir jati toh
why u always force me to be angry (angerly)

nandini didn't say anything n go upstair

cabir : naraj kr diya na ab

manik also go upstair

nandini standing at corner n having tear

manik put his hand on shoulder

manik : i m sorry nandini

nandini : manik why u r saying i was wrong na

Manik : nandini...
sorry na baba
i got tense that time

nandini : i know manik u care for me
but

manik : listen
i promise i will never shout on u
this is last time

nandini : pr manik

manik put his finger on lips

manik : shee...

manik take her in his arm n kiss her on hair

bg music

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

So here is update hope u all like it
Thank u
Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update dear..
Nandni ne pass kr liya singing ...round.
Thanks for posting
Thanks for pm.
Stay blessed. .











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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome superb update

Manik is happy that his Nandu Has taken such step to prove herself and make her own identity which should not be suppressed by his fame

Continue soon and thanks for pm
Edited by HTA111 - 9 years ago

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