FF- Musings of a Rebel(Chapter 2 Upd Pg5-Karna's Story) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start Riti. So mom abandoned baby and someone picked and is familiar to mom. Interesting go ahead
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting Start Riti 😛
Looking forward for the next part

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start, want to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for this really encouraging response 😊
🤗to all who liked and commented..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1 Reflections...

He was short of breath ... His heart beat losing out each second..

Eyes plunging into world of darkness as He sat back holding his life in his hand and watching it slowly making an escape..

While lying on road with a bullet hit just right beside his heart... Karan realised that there is not much time left for him.. A smile crept on his lips inspite of excruciating pain somewhere inside... he was finally at peace... In those few moments left ..he felt like going back in time... going back to that small village few miles away from City of Delhi where it all began... How he always used to find peace in his Radha Ma's lap after a tiring day at work..

Karan was like any other regular boy who to support his family started earning from a very young age. His first dream was crushed when his father told him that they don't have money to send him to school for higher education.He was really intelligent and one of the toppers of his class. Everyone in his school used to tell his father that you really have a bright child, he should go to college in Delhi. But his father could just hold back tears and tell them don't give him those dreams which can never be reality... Karan though realized this reality pretty soon as He himself decided to drop out and help his father in supporting a family of 6- An old grandfather, his parents and two little brothers.

He used to work at a licensed shop where small pistols and rifles were made. These were supplied to Defence dealers and also some private security companies. His passion with shooting took a birth there only but he was still miles away from realising the same.His manager had recently started business of making expensive air rifles and Karan had soon gained specialisation in that.

One day his manager asked him to deliver an urgent order in India's famous shooting academy where all rich and well known used to play this as a sport or just as a passtime. Yes indeed it was expensive passtime he could never imagine anyone taking this as a hobby. As he arrived in what seemed like a huge arena , he was spellbound by sheer size of the auditorium. He saw few shooters aiming at a target so far away as they concentrated on their aim.

For a little while he was lost in the play going around him , as one by one shooters had displayed their excellence. A Senior member of Team holding the practice sessions spotted this young boy curiously looking at shooter who was aiming at a distance.. Karan was so sure that this shooter will miss his target as his hands were not there where it should be and his disappointment was quite visible on his face. As shooter missed his target, He accidently said I knew it.. Surprised by his casual utterance, onlookers and shooter himself looked at this youngster dressed in ragged clothes standing amidst them .

Shooter looked at him and mockingly said "Stay within your limits lad.. this is not a child's play.."

Was it confidence that day or perhaps he followed his heart... but he picked one rifle from the lot he brought and shot at target from a distance even miles far from where shooter was standing... stunning everyone around..

Indeed Target was hit...

That day was just a beginning... A beginning of a dream... which soon took him to an unseen and unimagined path where he became to be known as a Sharp Shooter Karan Bhai...one who never missed his target...

Edited by riti4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Main Protagonist and Narrator from here on - Karan or very lovingly known as Karan Bhai, a sharp shooter ,his story starts from innocent young dream and finally ends in devastating nightmare. Why he became a sharp shooter ,a gangster and why is he shot ? All these questions you will get answers in the coming chapters.
Symbolically he is Karna of Mahabharat, my narrator, through this protagonist i want to present all characteristics that Karna had. His being a shooter is just a symbolical metaphor but apart from this you will find him Karna from inside ..
Vasudha, the mother (Kunti of the story) - Her name got inspiration from Earth as Kunti is also known as Pritha , She is another important character of my story. She is the woman of the prologue setting tone of the entire story of Karan.
Indeed she will be the one forming backbone of climax.
Symbolically she represents Kunti ,a mother who is questioned for her decision and lack of empathy for her first born. We shall try to take a look at her situations and what drove her to those decisions which often are opposite motherly characteristic specially with respect to Karna.
ACP Shyam forms only righteous one. ( We cannot have any like Krishna but we need one person who can probably form the crux of Story that will unfold) This character I will be revealing slowly😊
Arjun as Arjun himself from Mahabharat- Another important character in this story . He will be biggest enemy of Karan and yes his long lost brother as well. Arjun forms an important part of Karan's journey .
Symbolically Arjun is Arjun of Mahabharat. We shall see how Karna evolves as person who first hates this man from core of his heart and when he comes in face to face with truth of his brother..what delimma he faces ... his biggest enemy is none other than his own blood...
Ajay as Duryodhana - Ajay means unconquerable one and I found this name given for Duryodhana. He forms another important character of this story.
His friendship with Karan is very important in this story and for all KaDu lovers , I will try my best to put that on...But yes he is someone who is on wrong path... and ultimately someone who takes Karan to the path he never imagined..
Vaishali- as Vrushali from Mahabharat- forms a support and love of Karan in my story.. She has strong character and speaks mind of her own... She often is someone who is showing Karan a mirror of his deeds whenever required.
Other Characters that forms important part of the story and will be revealed in coming chapters.
Dev as Bheeshma
Dharm as Yudhisthir
Bheem as Bheem
Agnishikha or Shikha as Draupadi ,wife of dharm
Tara Babu (a fictional character but important one, his role you will know later)
I see lot of confusion among readers so I will be giving an author's side note along the story. I know you all know Mahabharat story but this story is depicting Mahabharat in Kalyug times so story is in my hands and since narrative is of Karna , I would be slowly unveiling all your questions through subsequent chapters.
I will try to give lengthy updates to this from next chapter onwards so lets begin our Karan's story...😊
Edited by riti4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful chapter Riti... the prologue was amazing. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KURT15

Beautiful chapter Riti... the prologue was amazing. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Thanks Geetha😊.. lets see if I manage to bring all these characters in this new age..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting start but omg he was shot with bullet in very prologue?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patrarekha

very interesting start but omg he was shot with bullet in very prologue?


Thanks for liking Jhum ..this is beginning of narrative from karna.. So it had to from end 😊..yes he is shot...why? By whom? What lead to it... are things we shall slowly discover..I wud be giving longer updates from next chapter n with each chapter will associate a side note😊

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