FF- Musings of a Rebel(Chapter 2 Upd Pg5-Karna's Story)

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

woahh, superb part.Want to read more.Waiting for the next chapter.
Will read the story imagining Aham.Ha ha.I cant imagine anyone else in it.

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Amazing start Riti 👏
I liked ur way of telling the story of Karan in introspective way... he was shot and how he came to be hit by it when at one time shooting became his passion and possibly later his breadearning means.🤓
Its getting interesting 😛
Will be waiting for the next chapter

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Thanks Sania and Hemangi 😊 for wonderful comments as far as why is he shot... we will know this very late in the story...😊..it is just begining..😳

i updated character descriptions of my story😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

The character sketch sounds very intriguing and yes I m waiting for some KaDu & KaVu moments 😳 😆... and yes the mysterious fictional character Tara babu...though I have made two wild guesses about this character...lets see if my guess is right or not as your strory unfolds further.
Will waiting for the 2nd chapter and please do make a long one 😛

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Nandita

@Nandita_Siddian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Nice one riti.. 👏 ..story is really gripping...you have started from the end...its just superb... 👍🏼 ...waiting for the next chapter.. 😊

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riaalex

@riaalex

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

this is awesome.continue but i have a humble request please make a modern story of karn and vrishali rebirth love story. i have read a ff named gustakh dil recently but the author has stoped working on it one year back. iam dying hard to read the rest. its a humble request can you please finish it off and make me come out of this pain please i beg you please