FF- Musings of a Rebel(Chapter 2 Upd Pg5-Karna's Story)

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hello45

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Good story. Great idea. Nice way of presentation. Very intriguing even though we know the story of Karn. Please update soon

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riti4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: hello45
Good story. Great idea. Nice way of presentation. Very intriguing even though we know the story of Karn. Please update soon

Thank you 😊 for liking my attempt ,will update soon😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Sorry for delay in next update.. Though many less readers are waiting...I shall surely post my next chapter tomorrow😊

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adithyan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

yaar Riti, u r making me sad with this update...Poor Karen is so shattered ...i know its only a beginning..many more heartbreaks to come😭

but u have done a fabulous job in creating this adaptation of our Karna

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riti4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: adithyan
yaar Riti, u r making me sad with this update...Poor Karen is so shattered ...i know its only a beginning..many more heartbreaks to come😭

but u have done a fabulous job in creating this adaptation of our Karna

Thanks adhi.. I saw this comment late n could not reply then... I have almost left this story.. but thinking of continuing again.. not sure on readers.. will share link if i do..😊

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rajasvi

@rajasvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

👏😛 You have made a great plot indeed..the chapter showed your fantastic flair for it..kudos to your efforts...keep writing..also I wanted to make a request...if you find time to write after this fic, write a fic on karna from ancient time too...would love to see your words in that..meanwhile, waiting for the next chapter 😃

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ðŸ˜‚ðŸ‘‘ Angarani The Karnali ...

@JyotsnaSharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

I am late latif but i see your story is so beautifully woven the kaliyugi mahabharat ...

I love the names you chose ajay is my favorite it suits than the big fat name duryodhan

Dharm Yudhishthir hmmm

Shika for panchali

Ok u are really good with names and writing as well simple words with purity i follow most of ur poems and stories they have a certain depth and simplicity to them

I pity Vasudha ... no i don't i hate her but her situation ...

Tara babu ??

Aww when karn was rejected ...

Gosh theif and ... myriad of those adjectives really Pierce the heart of the reader

Parshuram our ram ...

The way karn shooted ... i loved the whole storyline

Shooter karn bhai ... your dreams will not crush till Ajay is there

Special request there shud be a kaaj karnajay scene

I loved every line.

Thanks for pm keep pming .

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riti4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

@angrani- thanks dearie. I kind of forgotten this story coz of lack of interest in this show..but will try to revive it this weekend..hopefully few will come back to read..this place has been so vacant..

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@JyotsnaSharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: riti4u
@angrani- thanks dearie. I kind of forgotten this story coz of lack of interest in this show..but will try to revive it this weekend..hopefully few will come back to read..this place has been so vacant..

I will come I come late but I will definitely come ...

I loved the concept please keep working. .. on it

Update soon

Atleast for ur reader I love all ur works ...

Riti di :*