Arshi FF:- Cruel Fate - Chapter 16 (PG 135) Updated Mar 7-16 - Page 72

jus read this n i luv all d twist n turn

What a surprise for Khushi

Loved the cute brother sister convo
Waiting to know khushi past

awesome update pinky🤗
arnav calling karan bhai.. so cute😳 & also apologies for his past behaviour with khushi...
karan aceepting his appology as he knows arnav has now changed & loves khushi more than himself..
khushi calling arnav to inform him abt his children deeds... karan asking arnav to keep phone on speaker.. & surprise surprise.. arnav follows d order given to him😲😲
means he trully accepted karan
liked hw u included kids scene.. kids worried abt arshita gng to her inlaws house after marriage...😆
karan-arnav going to airport to recv karan's family...
but doesnt introduce arnav as khushi's husband as kavya doesnt know anything abt khushi yet...
karan's family going to shantivan... though karan's wife knows abt khushi...
kids get together well...😃
arnav teases kavya...😉😳
karan waiting for khushi to cum... kavya waiting for dhruv..
but dhruv & khushi went to temple...
dhruv returned back.. but khushi still outside on phone..
khushi gossiping abt sallu miyya with her frnd.. liked d fact how u added d detail abt sallu's hnr case gng on ...
but wait.. khushi fainted...& before fainting she said karan bhai... 😕 means she recognised her brother...😲
but wat abt kavya..
hw wil she react after this revelation abt khushi being her elder sis...😕
wil she accept khushi wholeheartedly..😕
i know hw khushi is & adding her craziness all love her & accept her... but still there is curiosity..
too much curious for next part ...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
sorry for late comment...

Superb story and updates dear loved it please update soon

Hey bangram finally completed reading all chaps .
Very interesting story with all positive characters except one (dadi)
Really enjoyed reading this
From arnav khushi's passionate love for each other "to "aarav and jr asr mischiefs loved every bit of ur story.
When i read about karan i thought u will introduce a negative character her
But that too was positive one hehehe
Happy happy family isint it
Waiting for next part
Update soon pls
And pm me

WAITING WAITING AND WAITING .😕

Chapter 16(Teaser)

"Amma, tell Karan bhai to give me my doll back." Cried 6 year old Khushi hugging her mom's 8 month pregnant belly.

"Karan"

"You know what this monkey did, She told my friends that I watch Powerpuff girls" whined 12 year old Karan.

"YOU DO"

"I DON'T"

Sukanya Sharma closed her ears, "Alright , Now you both stop fighting. Karan, You are a big boy now. If you sister made a mistake, you should forgive her and Khushi, You should not embarrass your brother like that infront of his friends. Say Sorry to each other."

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Already finished half of Maha update. Will post this story first.

Nice teaser
Update chap soon pls