MG,FF Yodha the unknown warrior last part & note on 9-28 dec

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part 24 on page 1
part 25 on page 4
part 26 on page 8
LAST PART ON PAGE 9
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part 24

Geet walking with maan ,she is like dari hui chotisi ladki which have so much fear for facing unknown people and maan get her fear , he walking with her like protecting her , and all looking them like shock , geet indeed looking like bride , new married Bride , maan love brought so much glow on her face which is ,giving a beautiful touch to her natural beauty . other side maan have mix emotions. its his world different from outer world can geet going to miss judge him or and upon all she have to face a past. A dark past of their life ,he took deep breath ,n walk to his house

Its small small house ,not very beautiful build but its sufficient for live , but nature ,a jungle added another beautifulness in them which is missing in village or city maan stop in frnont of door of house n knock on it ,till now all people surrounded around them ,after few second door get open and a middle age women come with pooja thal ,maan get shock with this he open his mouth for say something but that lady show her hand ...meri bahu ka swagat karna hai baki baate uske baad ,samje tum ...

Maan nodded like small boy n geet get surprised with maan behavior , so many question's running in her mind who is this lady and how she commanding maan ...n all questions her face is worth watching n maan enjoying his chiya face , full of surprised ,fear and confusion , he so much want to took her in his room and lock her with him , but his all dreams going to become only dreams because of ...

Maaneet come out of thought with sound of that lady ,maan usko ander lao ,apni godhi main uthake , n poor geet turn red with thought , in his arm in front of all she almost closed her eyes in shyness when ,maan took her in his hand n entered in house ,beti yaha apna ,haat laga do ...she heard again that lady that lady real puzzal for geet now

its not so big ...so many standing outside of house

Maan - humari backpan main hi shadi ho gai thi , bas baad main kuch aisa hua ,that seprated us from each other , n may be after some day she have to return back to her home ...with that geet look to maan with teary eyes ,yes how she forget it she have to go back ..,ye to nasib se kuch hasin pal mile hai than she have to face reality ,may be more worse ...

Maan get her mind and squeezed her hand ,little like don't be sad ,I am with u geet

Atomospere become serious with maan talk

Lady - hu wo baad ki baad main dekh lenge now ,ye bato kya tum punishment main ke liye tayyar ho ,and usko kya bologe

Maan - with pale face no punishment please n usko ,I don't think muje kuch bolna hoga ,she will get wo pehachan legi geet ko

Lady nodded in yes , n say javo mil aavo usase , but punishment to milegi maan samje lo ye baat samje

Maan nodded in yes and call ,geet chalo ,hume kisi se ashirwad lena hai

Geet who is in thought that who is here who recognized me

Maan took her to next house which small ,he entered inside n went to one room and called , didi dekho kon aaya hai ,

They heard a voice kya hai maan tang mat karo javo yaha se

Di main Mazak nahi kar raha app dekho to sahi , and that lady turn to maaneet side , a lady around 22 ...she once look to maaneet ,

Emotions start to change from her face ,shock ,happiness , ect ect

She run to geet and hug her tightly n kiss her forehead and mummer Bhabhi ,geet Bhabhi ,meri geet

Geet feel like she know this touch ,but kon hai ye ,she don't know who is she

That lady mummer nahi pehchana muje geet main tumari pinki bh..

But she stop for while n say pinky ...

Geet eyes winded in shock and happiness , she in dream also never expected pinky in front of her ,but its true ,geet try to touch her , like looking she is real or dream tear falling from both eyes its so much for them , geet mummer such main app ho ,app thik ho apko kuch nahi hua ,muje pata tha ,app thik ho , apko kuch nahi ho sakata and she hug tightly to pinky n cried ,kaha thi app sab bigad gaya , bhiya wo bhiya adi bhiya , and before geet complete her sentence she

Fainted in pinky arm

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Past face off

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new thread
wonderful update
pinky is with maan
maan intruduce geet as his wife to a old lady
geet faint in pinky's arm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update. . pinky is wid maan. geet faint awsum
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Interesting Update

Maan brings Geet now to his home and she is welcomed by the elderly lady and the lady also tells Maan to take Geet next door .
Maan also says that in few days Geet will return to her home
he than takes her next door and she meets Pinky but I think out of shock she must have fainted too

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread...
nice update...
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i am back after my vacation. sorry old updates ka comment nahi depayi. mahi. sorry yaar. how ru? after a long time. maan brought geet to his place where he is staying. what a surprise , pinky is alive and geet met her. yeh kya geet behosh hogayi pinky ko dekhkar😲
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congrats on the new thread! splendid update! superbly written! MAan introduces Geet as his wife! Geet fainted! update soon
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interesting update. Maan taking Gee to his house, an old lady to their welcoming. Geet has to go back to her house in a few days. so now Pinky lives with Maan. I think Geet got shocked of seeing Pinky there that's why she fainted.

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