MG,FF Yodha the unknown warrior last part & note on 9-28 dec - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yaar ine dinno ke baad iske update read kar rahi hoon...thoda confuse hoon so I am reading some last updates also...

comments uske baad...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 25

After This four day restriction , and before some time union in every sense soul and body.Maan cannot think anything properly. he is so restless, it's not about only physical but it's his need peace of his soul ,because after long gap they both meet each other and now he cannot stay away from her for second also. He is in deep thought at last he take decision and entered in geet's room with slow step . On the other side with so much efforts at last geet slept peacefully. Maan look at geet face and he put something on geet nose. Geet open her eyes for a while but next moment she lost her conscious ,and when she gain her conscious ...she is near of one beautiful water fall

Geet mummer zharna (water fall) she so much lost in beauty of waterfall fall she forget her thought that how she reach in this ,and on the other side someone was lost in he ,yes its maan who drinking geet beauty with his eyes only , now he found his solace. When he with his geet ,this few hour separation made him so much restless ,now poor maan heart started to bit on regular way. Maan eagerly waiting for her sole( chuiya) attention where she was lost in her own world

At last maan took initiative to bring the geet's thought, his finger slowly brushed on geet soft , tender skin. Geet gasp loudly with fear. Now she come back reality, Usko kona utha ke laya hai ,maan ya koi aur she mummer veer baba bacha lena ,and with fear she turn to see who is that person ,but when she found maan standing there she took deep breath and mummer app ho ...

But next moment her eyes widened with shock why you brought me here like this, now what didi, maaji will think about me, that I am with you app ne( aisa ku kiya ,abhi didi ,wo maaji kya souchagi , main aise aapke pass) You know they had restricted me that I can't come near you, untill next 4 days. Than why did you brought me here , This is not good, see veer baba he had become mad, I am with him and he (ye acha nahi hai),veer baba dekho to ye billa pagal hua hai kya ...abhi hum pass ake bhi kya) and before she could complete the sentence . maan grab her by her shoulder and put his palm on geet's lips . and with that touch geet forget to breath and blink her eyes for a moment. his palm on her lips make her feel like she first time touched by him her maan ,her billa.

Maan is enjoying her this state and mummer softly , how much she blabber and what you was saying that You are with me and I what geet ? (kitna bak bak karati ho geet, aur kya bol rahi thi hum pass ake ...kya) with that question geet cheek turned red into shyness.

Aganin maan is back to his flirty nature. he removed his palm on geet mouth and asked why can I come near to you, are your having your monthlllyyy... Maan smirked (bolo geet hum ku nahi pass aa sakte ...kya tum bimar ho kya)

Making poor girl turned into beetroot red ,she turn other side so she hide her embarrassment, she wanted to run away and hide somewhere where he can never find her.

Maan ohhh so baba ki pari ko kuch pata nahi hai na ,mere sidhe se sawal ka jawab bhi nahi hai ohhh (my baba's angel doesn't know anything, why can't you answer my easy question or should I explain more)

That broke geet silence ,she turn and show her finger to maan and say ,don't bring veer baba in the middle of the conversation, I know woh me,,,,woh,,,me You can't touch me for four days, yeah that thing happen do you got it) ko beetch main mat lana .i know wo main wo, koi muje 4 din tak nahi choo sakta ...wahi hua hai mere sath samje app

She looking so cute with her anger ,maan again pull her near to him ,par dekho main to tumko chu liya aur chum bhi liya ( but look I touch u and kiss u also ) and before geet stop him or react anything , maan make her lost her sense in soul searing beautiful kiss.

Other side away from this two love birds ,one soul crying in agony ,of her faith that she thrown away from her soul mate like this ,yes she is pinky , whose all wound become fresh, after meeting with geet,

At some time someone wake for his sleep with jerk and called out pinky, maan stoppp stoppp ruko ruko but when he open his eyes no one there. He is surrounded by darkness and loneliness ,a drop of tear fall from his eyes

Yes he is adi living in city near of his village, after that day he never went to visit his house or meet anyone ,but between he went to their secret place in one aim ,thought that maybe he can meet anyone pinky ,maan or geet. but he is not that much lucky ,so much year passed out he become teacher now in small school its special school for girl its first school of girl, which is now aim of his life.

In that small village one women who have smirk on her face, with evil smirk ohh so geet met the maan , and what about pinky and adi

That person answer, pinky with maan itself and aditiya bhiaya in town ...

That lady throw bag of gold coin to that person and say evily , I want each and every news about them, I will make happiness shouldn't come near in their life (unki life main khushi dur tak nahi honi chiye) and she laugh loudly

That person went from there ...

Precap

Geet - chi chi babji ye kya hai

Maan gap her like she get two horn on her head

shock laga daro mat main hi hu
I know update without mistake from me
ye bada shock hi hai
but how this happen na
so dears its filtered or checked by pixi_nightingal
so thanks her that she save u all from my English torucher 😆😆

Edited by Mahikipari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
What should I comment...
Mahi Di ...
itna chota sa update tha ...O:-)
But kuch to likhungi hi...
Sabse pehle to Maan Geet ko kidnap kiya taki Geet keep saath time spend karsake ...
Adi become teacher and still wants to meet Geet Maan and Pinky ...
Hope Pinky Adi se milne keep liye ready ho jaye ...
I know ..that Brij's wife was That evil lady in last lines...
me thinking who will Kill her ...
???
Waiting for next update ...
Edited by nitika20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: nitika20

What should I comment...
Mahi Di ...
itna chota sa update tha ...O:-)
But kuch to likhungi hi...
Sabse pehle to Maan Geet ko kidnap kiya taki Geet keep saath time spend karsake ...
Adi become teacher and still wants to meet Geet Maan and Pinky ...
Hope Pinky Adi se milne keep liye ready ho jaye ...
I know ..that Brij's wife was That evil lady in last lines...
me thinking who will Kill her ...
???
Waiting for next update ...

I know ye chotasa hai but dhaayn se pado
ismain bahot kuch hai
iske baad ki aane wale tuffan ki surwat dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
you update
chhota hai but badiya hai

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
hi mommy.
ur update after so many days.
maan kidnapped geet because he wants to spens some time alone with her.
geet is lost in nature beauty nd didnt saw maan.
maan kissed geet.
pinky nd adi both are missing each other.
brij wife is disgusting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan


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I know ye chotasa hai but dhaayn se pado
ismain bahot kuch hai

iske baad ki aane wale tuffan ki surwat dear


Nahi Aur toofan nahi.. warna mein kho jaungi ...
Hmmm ... aisa kya miss ho gaya mujhse ...
dobara padhne keep baad bhi nahi maloom chala ...
waise ..
abhi ap ho kaha .. ghar ya office ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: nitika20


Nahi Aur toofan nahi.. warna mein kho jaungi ...
Hmmm ... aisa kya miss ho gaya mujhse ...
dobara padhne keep baad bhi nahi maloom chala ...
waise ..
abhi ap ho kaha .. ghar ya office ?

office main😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Mahimaan


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office main😆


Office me hokar Net use kar rahi ho =-O
Boss ne pakad liya toh !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Fantastic update
maan took geet away to spend time with her
geet is lost in nature
brij's wife is disgusting

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