MG,FF Yodha the unknown warrior last part & note on 9-28 dec - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice update mahi
Geet is nervous bt maan by his gestures tld her dat he is wit her😃
Maaneet reachd their house nd was welcmd by a middle agd lady nd maan tld others abt their marriage nd also geet might go back 2 village
Pinky is alive nd safe wit maan nd geet is happy 2 c her bt she faintd😲
Waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on new thread

Amazing update Pinky is with maan geet faint in pinky's arms 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan took Geet at his home . Where a lady called her bahu and welcome her. Then Geet met with pinky and she was shocked as well as emotional and suddenly she fainted in Pinky's arm. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread mahi 👏
Maan took Geet to his home.
Geet met pinky their both become emotional after seeing each other.
Geet fainted in pinky arms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nahi loved this update geet was welcomed in her new house wid all the rituals aur maan has to tell her abt this lady who welcomed them aur geet met wid her pinky bhabhi aur fainted waiting for the next one eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update ...
Maaneet Going to Maan's home ..
and who was that elderly woman ...??
Geet met with pinky...
and she is happy to see her okk ..
Geet will go back to her village ... thats not fare :-[..
Why Geet faint while talking about Adi...???
waiting for next part ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
kyun maan geet ko wapas bhejna chahte ho uss gande logon k beech...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much for the lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

part 25

pinky scare like hell when geet fainted in her arm its nightmare for her she cried geet utho kya hua ,ma dekho maan dekho isko kya hua please ,ma and maan run to her side ,maan put her on bed ,ma sparkle some water on her face but no response ,but ma found something near her side ...maan who calling geet by taking her plam on his hand ...he also get tense what happen to her suddenly

ma closed her eyes and called out maan for some time went out please ...ma say him ,maan don't want to go out but ma strin face he once look to geet and went out he so much tense but he know without any reason ma can not say like this ...

other side inside ma pointed pinky to red doat on bed ...pinky give look to ma ,

ma- ok apni niklo first we will bath her than we will see ok

pinky nodded in yes both ladies somehow took geet in bathroom n clien her ...geet body showing passion of maan and both ladies get that maaneet become one in all sense

they brought her out and change in dry cloth ,pinky again called softly geet ,geet n geeet open her eyes she feel pain in abdomen n her legs r paining like hell, n its struk her she got her monthly ,she feel emressed , her face turn more red when she saw her changing dress .

big question in her mind who change her she look to pinky n get she fainted in pinky arm ,she give look to pinky

pinky do not worry me and ma change your dress ,did u eat something from morning

geet mummer softly kal se kuch nahi khaya hai

pinky - heard that n what maan ne khane ko kuch nahi diya

poor geet get what he mummer so loudly ,she nodded in no

pinky took deep sine ,ma I bring food for her here only

ma - nodded in yes

pinky open door of room and maan start to ask so many question

wo thik to hai na ,hosh aaya kya usko ,jaldi bolo didi ,he ask so many question in one breath

pinky just roll her eyes and snap him ,kal se bhooka rakhte waqt samaje main nahi aaya kya with that pinky went to other room and poor maan entered in room ...,ma glare him , he so much want to go near geet ,she looking so much pale

But in front of ma its not looking good so he stand away from her ...

Just than pinky entered in room with plate of food ,pinky bend little to geet ear n mummer abhi u have to stay in this room till next 4 days

Poor red red cheek geet nodded in yes ,in all this one soul so confused with all this ladies action reaction

At last he took deep breath n ask kya hua hai ma

Ma - with strin voice ,kal se kuch jada hi khila diya tume use isiliye ye haal hai beta

Maan - get tont in ma words , bhool gaya hum log

Ma - hum ya fhir tum maan sirf tum ha

Maan - bhool ho gai ma he mummer softly

Ma - galati ho gai ha ,kaan pakdo tumare maan

Maan give disbelief look to ma ,like she saying in unknown language

Other side pinky and geet giggle on maan ,amaan give warning look to them and both try to control their laugf

Maan -please ma ,wo dono chidengi mujko

Ma- maan jo bola hai wo karo samje tum ,poor maan hold his ear and mummer sorry

And all busted in laugh

Maan start to glare them ,at last all some how control their laugh

Ma - maan geet staying hear in this room for next 4 days

Maan suddenly no ...aise kaise poor geet in shy bend her head ,maanji kya bol rahe hai

Ma - kya bola maan tumne

Maan - ma wo meri biwi hai ,she is my wife

Ma wo hume bhi pata hai maan but u can not stay with her for few some days

Maan cried like child , but ku ma

Pinky - maan u remember hum logo ne geet ka konsa function mandir ke pass kiya tha ...

Its so tough to say this girly things

Maan thought for while n he get what they try to say him ...poor boy turn red and quirkily run from there murmuring sorry

Ma cup geet face and say bahot pyyar karta hai tumse beta ,usko kabhi dard mat dena ,geet nodded in yes , she is surprice with this lady who is so down to earth and so kind

precap

geet and pinky talk

can maan stay away from geet for this few days ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new thread
lovely update

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
geet fainted in pinky arms , maan got worried
geet got her monthly cycles...
Loved the update !

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