MG,FF Yodha the unknown warrior last part & note on 9-28 dec - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan kidnapped Geet because he want to spend some time with her Adi and pinky both r crying for each other nice update
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nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic Update

Maan been flirty with Geet and she been all shy
Now who is this evil woman and what she wants

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Posted: 9 years ago
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fabulous update dear, loved it naughty maan shy geet, who is that evil lady hope she died soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update loved it maan teasing geet lovely
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part 26

That lady have evil smile on her face ,yes she is wife of Brije ,geet uncle who is reason of all life ...pain . she called a man in room and say do this ...and she given some notes and money to that man ...so first target IS MR. Aditiya ...

Next day school office call adi in cabin ...he don't know about reason why he called in office like that but he went clammily because if don't do anything why should he is worried

A trustee of collage - mr aditiya we r sorry but, we have to know about this ,it's for school reputation

Adi get surprised with sudden demand ,he ask what sir I don't get your word, one callege teacher give complaint that u try to misbehave with her ...and u done this 2,3 time

Adi eyes turn red in anger ,so cheap allegation on his, when he have only pinky in his mind ,soul and heart how anyone say like this he never ever cross his limit in any sense so how ...

He closed his eyes in anger took deep breath ,and who the hell tale u all this sir , can I know her name and I need to meet her in front of u call her here in your office in front of u

Adi say it with clam but in hard tone ...

That trustee get scare for while who is doing all this on someone saying ...

Trustee look mr aditiya we don't need this all she is really scare with u we cannot call her here ,and come on...koi lady aise zhoot (false ,lie )

Aditya give smirk to that trustee ,siddha bol diygiye u don't want me on this job ye aise ghoma fhira ke ku baat kar rahe ho app and I am Aditya handa working here from so many days there is no one have courage to show finger on my characters so give me true reason ,or else get ready for its outcomes because after such cheap allegation , don't u think that I will sitting quite I want reason for such all this your so called drama Sir.

Now that person start to lost his patience and say I am not bounded to give any answer to u Mr. aditya so it is your suspend letter so u have to go Mr aditya

Ok so u all r prepared already itself ha , now I am going sir but mark my word I will come back and u a nd your school have to give all answer of my question because when I will come back I will come back with proof Mr. Trustee so be prepared for that ...with that adi strom out from that office he is hurt today it is like all his injury get nail by anyone ...n its hurt him so much

Other side in village pinky is lost in so much thought and other women which they calling ma looking to her ,she know after geet appearance pinky is disturbed something is bothering her but what ...

She went near pinky and say in soft voice bol do pinky jo man mai hai ye sab jo dil main rakhati ho wo acha nahi hai ...so please bol do kya souch rahi ho kya geet ka aana tumko acha nahi laga kya ...pinky imm turn to her and say aisa mat bolo she is so innocent and she is no ...reason

Ma - than tale me what happen

Pinky - ma kuch mere bite hui us din se hai jo muje bahot pareshan kar raha hai

Ma - kya hua bolo pinky

Pinky - wo us din hum logo ne geet ke cloth pe jo stain (blood dekha tha ) wo huamre wo char dino ke blood se alag tha na

Ma feel like a land escape from her feet ,why pinky asking such questions why ...

Ma - ek min pinky and she losed door of room and ask pinky ,pinky u know about that na u r married with aditya and that shiatan that ...may be trash your ...

Pinky - nahi ma adiji ne kuch nahi kiya tha and that Bas..., ma waha se blidding nahi hua tha nitche se wo to sirf body pe ...usne mere sare kapade nikal diye the and in some he touch me but then I saw a shadow of maan bhiya and I fainted

Ma feel like something is big missed in all this mess but now big question how she will clear this how ...she know truth till now all knowing that she totally abused from that devil kya truth hai she feel like her brain going to burst ,whom she will talk there is new use to talk with pinky because she don't have that much knowledge but I have to clear it to her also , when pinky don't get answer and saw all lost ma ,she called out ma ma where u lost kuch to bolo

Ma took deep breath and say pinky ruko I need some time than I will tale u all things just give me some time with that ma directly went to a women who is known as masshi ,who help in delivered a child in that basti (area ) that masshi also get shocked with ma talk ...

Masshi - hum logo ko jachana hoga ( we have to test it )but pinky karne degi kya vaideya (male doc ) ko

Ma - nahi maushi wo kabhi nahi maanegi ...kuch aur souchna hoga hum logo ko massiji

Ma ask with so much hope kya app nahi kar sakate hai

Masshi - main aise kabhi kiya nahi kya hum wo village ke pass naya firangi Hospital khoola hai waha jaye kya suna hai waha aurate ( womens ) hai Vaidya (Doc ) .

Ma think for a while , n nodded hu ye ho sakata hai par(But ) kya maan beta jane dega hum logo ko , usko manana hoga tumko , massi say with serious tone ,pinky ke zindgi ka sawal hai ...

Other side in jungle our maaneet who lost in each other away from all this maan kissing her like he first time kissing her ...when he found themselves breathless he stop their kiss and look to all red face of her chuhiya ...who all lost in his passion ...her eyes r closed and she trying to gain her breath

After few second she open her eyes and saw her billa looking to her with so much love and a naughty grin ...like saying that look I stole that which is mine she turn red n shyness , but next moment she winded her eyes and start to bubber ye apne kay kar diya aise nahi karte in 4 dino main app pagal ho gaye ho kya ab amin pinky Bhabhi aur unko kya bolungi ke app ne muje yaha and she put her finger on her own lips

Maan look her with so much amazement like she can talk without taking a breath and what she is saying is she going to tale all about their personal moment he give shock look and mummer softly maan ask her iska kuch bol nahi sakate sab bol degi unko ...

He put his plam on her lips to quite her and say geet suno geet ,humare bitch main jo hua wo huamri baate hai wo kisiko nahi boli jati

Geet give look to him and pointed to his plam ,maan took away that plam and look to her

Geet - pinky Bhabhi ko bhi nahi

Maan - pinky Bhabhi ko bhi anhi he say with sacrificed tone

Geet - lakin apne ye ku kiya nahi karate na aisa in dino main

Maan - geet itna chalata hai ,hum poora nahi kar sakate hai

Geet - iska kya matlab hai ...

Maan closed his eyes and took deep breath ,but he know he have to say her ...he say with soft tone ...matlab ye hai geet hum poori tarah se apna milan nahi kar sakate hai in 4 dino main samje gai na

He give look to her ...and geet think for a while and turn other side to hide her shyness and embarrassment , maan so much enjoying this shy shy geet he took her in his arm and rest his chin on her shoulder and say ku geet u know na poora milan ,ya fhir main uske baare main bhi sab kuch bol du

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

teaser

of next part

Hmmm Hmm, Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Hey Hey Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Chaaya Hai Nashaa, Meri Aankhon Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

[Mere Dil Mein Hain Armaan Kayee Kayee

Meri Chaahat Hai Abhi Nayee Nayee ]2

Reh Jayee Na Pyaasa Pyaar Mera

Meri Baahon Mein Bhar De Yaar Mera

Itna Sa Karam Tu Kar Mujh Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

Hmmm, Aa Haa Aaa

Aa Haa Aa, Aye Hey Hey

[Abhi Labon Ko Labon Ne Chua Nahin

Armaan Koi Pura Hua Nahin ]2

Abhi Aas Ka Gulshan Khilna Hai

Abhi Do Jismon Ko Milna Hai

Dekhoonga Abhi Main Woh Manzhar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aaya Hai Nazar 2Hmmm Hmm, Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Hey Hey Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Chaaya Hai Nashaa, Meri Aankhon Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

[Mere Dil Mein Hain Armaan Kayee Kayee

Meri Chaahat Hai Abhi Nayee Nayee ]2

Reh Jayee Na Pyaasa Pyaar Mera

Meri Baahon Mein Bhar De Yaar Mera

Itna Sa Karam Tu Kar Mujh Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

Hmmm, Aa Haa Aaa

Aa Haa Aa, Aye Hey Hey

[Abhi Labon Ko Labon Ne Chua Nahin

Armaan Koi Pura Hua Nahin ]2

Abhi Aas Ka Gulshan Khilna Hai

Abhi Do Jismon Ko Milna Hai

Dekhoonga Abhi Main Woh Manzhar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aaya Hai Nazar 2

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
new part
who is that woman
poor pinky
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-24
who's that lady that maan introduced to geet as his wife? & what punishment she was talking about?
Geet was so happy to see pinky in front of her but fainted in the end.

Part-25
geet is having her monthly period so she isn't allowed to be near maan but how can he stay away from her so he kidnap her😆
here pinky is missing adi & adi who is living somewhere else too is dying to meet his wife & brother.
now who is this villian lady who want to pread venom in all these 4 life's?

Part-26
they fired adi on false allegation. He was so angry but he will be back to them for taking the revenge of his insult.
So Brij's wife is the one who is behind all the miseries of these 4.
I didn't got what pinky & that aldy whom she called ma were talking about.

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