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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guyzz!I am Kulsoomand I am new here,I am also a crazy DEKian and ManVeerian like all of you and so I have written a one-shot.It's not on manveer,it is featuring Jay's point of view,This one-shot starts after Vijay made her realize her mistakes in the last episode,I was just wondering that at the time when Manyata and Udayveer reunited,what happened with jay?
SO I have written this one shot.Please comment and if you like it then please click like,
And I promise that I also have written a one-shot on manveer in my diary and if I get atleast 10 likes,I will post it here so pleeaaase like and review !

So here we go!!


REFLECTION

Vijay's words were still echoing in her mind making her restless.Tears were constantly falling down her cheeks as she shook her head again and agian.She stopped pacing back and forth and walked towards her vanity table and looked at herself in the mirror.Tears were stil falling down her cheeks,she looked at her eyes,the mascara had malted and in resullt,was now flowing down her cheeks mixed with her tears.

"Manyata ne hamesha tumhe apni cchoti bahen ka darge dia,magr tum use uksaati rahi!"She shook her head again as Vija's words eched inside her head.

"Hum..Devgadh ki RajMata Mrinaini Devi ki poti,Devgadh ke Maaraj Brijraj aur Manharani Komal ki dusri cchoti beti,He--her-high--ness...her highness Yuvrani Manyata Kumari ki cchoti bahen aur Devgadh ki woh rajkumaari Jaynandini jo apni hi riyaasat ke liye tabaahi thi,jo iss khitaab ki haqdaar hi nahin thi,jo in rishton ke bhi qaabil nahin thi,jiss ne kabhi apne purkhon ki gaddi aur apni riyaasat ke baare main kabhi socha bhi nahin..hum woh dhokebaaz hain jo aaj is mahel mein akaile hain,bina kisi ke bharose ke."
"Hum ne Uday ko hamesha apna piyar samjha jabke woh to kisi aur ka tha,Uday aur Manyata ka rishta toh aasmanon par hi likh dia gaya tha to koi toh kia,hum ne soch bhi kaise lia ke hum jiji aur Uday ka jod tod dengay.Humari woh mustaqil koshish,jo humne Uday ko Manyata se dur rakhne mein ki...usne hamein kia dia?Hum jiji ki zindagi ko jahannum banane mein inte andhay ho gayye the ke hum ne ek baar bhi ankhein kkhol kar ye nahi dekha ke hamare iss tarah karne se sirf aur sirf Uday aur jiji ka ek dusre ke liye pyaar aur bhi badh gaya aur unka jod aur bhi pakka hogaya.Hum Jaigadh ki Maharani banne ke liye itna taras gayye thay,ke humein laga ke humein Uday,jo sirf aur sirg humein pasand tha,uss se mohabbat ho gayyi hai.
"Hum jiji se unka khitab ccheennay main itna magan ho gayye thay ke hum ne ek khoon karne ke baare main soch liya aur kar bhi diya..liken zindagi ko jiji se itna pyaar tha aur Uday ka jiji se pyaar bahut taaqatwar tha,is liye jiji ek baar phir bach gayyi." She now looked at her eyes,the tears had stopped but the guilt inside her was still alive.She couldn't bear it anymore and lowered her head and looked down,eyes closed."Agar tumhar andar ego nahin hota na to tum is waqt Jay ko saza dene ke bajaye Manyata ko rokne ki koshish karte.."Her eyes snapped open as she suddenly came back to her senses when Vijay's sentence echoed in her head.She quickly shook her head and thought in a hurry:"Jiji iss tarah hamein cchod kar nahin jaa saktin,huein unse maafi mangni hai!"She looked in the mirror at her relection.Swollen eyes..Nose and cheeks red because of constat crying and messed up hair,a girl of eighteen stood there,this was the girl who fought for power to rule and crossed the limits just to get a throne on which she didn't even have rights.No!She was going to change her reflection in the reflection of a person who put her ego aside and asked to be forgiven.She no longer wanted attention,power,bowed heads in front of her...she just wanted Mayata back,she had lost her jiji onc,she was not going to lose her jiji again.She thought and rushed out of her room and ran as fast as she could in Manyata's room's direction.She pushed open the doors of Manyata's room and in a hurry,went through her closet."Just clothes!"She thought in dissapointment and looked inside the drawers of the bed's side-tables.She was just about to leave when she caught a sight of her desired object,lying in her precious jiji's bed.She picked up the crown and walked outside of the room.She walked on the carpet smiling to herself,after alot of time she felt satisfied with her mission because she knew that this time, she was walking with her eyes open.She reached the staircase which led down,she looked at the sight ahead of her.Vijay and Unnati were smiling as Manyata and Uday were together at last.
She smiled and moved her hand which held the crown behind her back.Just as Manyata and Uday were about to hug when she cried out "JIJI!"
please like and review !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As I Told Previously That Ur OS Would Be Lovely... 😊 And I'm Glad That U Proved Me Right... 😊 Well Must I Like Ur OS Very Much... 😊 And Seriously U Wrote Correct That There Should Be Some OS For Jay That What She Thought... What Was Her Condition At That Time She Realized About Her Gravest Mistakes That She Was Wrong A Completely Wrong... And Loved The Way How U Try To Portrait Jay's Feeling... 😊 Keep Up Ur Good Work... 😊 And Do Post More Ur OSs.. Want To Read Another Brilliant Writter Writing Styles... 😊 And Thanks For The PM... 😊 And Sorry For Being Late... 😔
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Great work keep it up waiting for ur more work now
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great os dear...👍🏼
Jay is a very strong character and you did an amazing job highlighting her and her feelings...
looking forward to more of your works and do add me to your pm list 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

As I Told Previously That Ur OS Would Be Lovely... 😊 And I'm Glad That U Proved Me Right... 😊 Well Must I Like Ur OS Very Much... 😊 And Seriously U Wrote Correct That There Should Be Some OS For Jay That What She Thought... What Was Her Condition At That Time She Realized About Her Gravest Mistakes That She Was Wrong A Completely Wrong... And Loved The Way How U Try To Portrait Jay's Feeling... 😊 Keep Up Ur Good Work... 😊 And Do Post More Ur OSs.. Want To Read Another Brilliant Writter Writing Styles... 😊 And Thanks For The PM... 😊 And Sorry For Being Late... 😔


Thanxx alot for liking and commenting,Feel so hnored!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wqadf

Great work keep it up waiting for ur more work now


Thankyou sooo much ;)
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awesome OS
really love it ❤️
hope to read ur story on manveer
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THANX alot
😊😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was amaaazing dude! <3
Your writing style is exceptionally good :)
Keep up the excellent work and hope you start a FF or a SS soon! ^_^

P.s. - Plz don't forget to pm me when you do,cuz I sure wouldn't wanna miss out on something so good :p
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That was amaaazing dude! <3Thanxx alot 😊
Your writing style is exceptionally good :)Thank you😊!
Keep up the excellent work and hope you start a FF or a SS soon! ^_^I have,I'll Pm u it's link right away!😊😉

P.s. - Plz don't forget to pm me when you do,cuz I sure wouldn't wanna miss out on something so good :pOfcourse I won't 😃
Thankyou so much for ur precious comment😊

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