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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

Hello Guyzz!😃

I need to make one thing clear,This SS is about Jay,it is Jay's story!ManVeer is in it but the heroine is Jay and her Hero is Fawad Khan,hope u guyzz don't have a problem with it,if u do then lzz choose another hero for Jay:

Option 4. KSG?
Option 2. Karan Wahi??
Option 3. Parth Samthan?
Option 4. Mohit Sehgal?
Option 5. Arjun Bijlani?
Option 6. Abhinav Shukla??.

  • PS.ManVeer's wedding,Vijati's engagement and ManVeer will also be in it so please don't stop reading the SS because I just told u that it is not a ManVeer one!!😳😊😉


Fawad Khan,WOW!And what is Vijati??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Zair si baat hai u will be like WOW,
Vijati is Vijay and Unnati,silly!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hello Guyzz!😃
I saw that I have 8 likes now,so I am updating the 2nd part of the SS
Hope u all like it!
~Reflection~

And just as she said that,their hands stopped in mid-air.Manyata slowly turned around with a worried expression.Vijay,Unnati and Uday were also looking at her,confused.She just looked at the four of them with an expressionless face as she descended the stairs and then she went and stood in front of Manyata.She did what she never ever even thought she would.She asked her for forgiveness she bowed her head in front of her and then when Manyata hugged her,there was this strange feeling.It was like she had found something that had been snatched away from her,something that she had lost.She didn't know why,but at that moment,she felt like Manyata completed her...

~Reflection~

"Humein maaf kar deejiye Mom,Please forgive me,Dad!"She said to Brijraj and Komal as the family hug broke."Uhh..Jay,let's just fo..."
"Beta Jay,aaj iss khushi ke mauqe par hum sab,sab kucch bhula kar,beete dinon mein jo kucch hua,woh sab bhul kar nayi shuruaat karte hain,ab aap please yeh sorry waghaira ko cchod kar khushi manaye!"Brijraj had started saying but DS's voice hit everyone's ears.They all turned around and were shocked to see DS standing,but soon happiness and relief took the shock's place and All the youngsters took blessings from her and Brijraj,Menka and Komal went and hugged her."Toh..Rajmata,ab aap hi bataaye ke hum aakhir iss pariwaar ke k ho jaane ka jashn kaise manayein?"Dr.Saheb spoke up."Dr.Saheb,it's obvious!Manyata aur Uday ki shaadi aur Vijay and Unnati ki Sagaai se!"DS said and smiled calmly as utter shock took place on the three elders' faces."Yeh kia keh rahi hain aap,MaSaaheb?"The three asked at the same time."Kyun?Kia aap log nahi chahte,ke Devgadh aur Jaigadh jald az jald ek hojayyein?"She continued.Manyata and Uday were enjoying everyone's faces and Unnati was looking at her feet and Vijay was trying to look just as shocked as the elders.
"Nahi MaSaheb aisa nahi hai,Manyata aur Uday ttheek hain par Vijay aur Unnati?"Menka asked.She just watched them as DS continued.Everything was alright,Manyata and Uday were together,Vijay and Unnati would be soon engaged,there was peace and happiness in their home,everyone had forgiven her,DS had forgiven her,but there was this lonely feeling.Even having so many people around her,she felt alone.It was like something was missing from her life.But what?Even she herself couldnt understand that...

~Reflection~

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Ur a brilliant written
who express every emotions in perfect word
keep it and good luck for ur ss
thnx for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: wqadf

Ur a brilliant writter Thank you!😊

who express every emotions in perfect word Thanxx alot!😊
keep it and good luck for ur ssThank you!😊
thnx for pm U r welcome😊!


Thank you very much,sis!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
not that late this time 😆
Amazing chapter princess.. suberb 😊
pls teach me how to write this beautifully😆
thanks for pm and pls continue soon karo 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: simi.k.

not that late this time 😆Yeah,congratzz,late lateef!😊😛
Amazing chapter princess.. suberb 😊Thanxx alot😊!
pls teach me how to write this beautifully😆☺️Simi,koi apne hi teacher ko teach karta hai?😲😊😉!
thanks for pm and pls continue soon karo 😆


U r most welcome Simi and Thanxx alot for the great comment!😊
It will be updated next friday!😛😉
And hey..
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
thanks tht everyone forgiven her. maybe she's missing her love? awsome👏⭐️ and thanks 4 pm😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ekra101

thanks tht everyone forgiven her. maybe she's missing her love? awsome👏⭐️ and thanks 4 pm😃


Yeahh..And maybe..Thank yu so much,Ekra,for ur comment,u r welcome!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Woww Sis U Updated... 😊
Yipppeee...😊
Well Chap 2 Was Indeed Amazing...😊
Loved The Family Reunion... 😊
DS's Consicious State... And Woww ManVeer Marriage And Unnati -Vijay Engagement. Wowww...😊

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