Maaneet os ~ Pehli Nazar Mein ~ 12th April 2015

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~ HIDDEN LOVE ~


Geet was sitting on chair in front of mirror tying her necklace . She was looking beautiful in orange coloured embrodied suit . Whole house was decorated with lights , flowers and what not. Guests were busy talking . Today was Geet's sangeet . She was not happy with the marriage but couldn't spoke her heart to her family about her love Maan . Her family has fixed her marriage with Arjun Punj ( her childhood friend)..



She tied her necklace and now was slipping bangles in her wrist with sadden face . Suddenly she noticed a shadow behind curtains . She got up with scared face clutching her dupatta in her hands and moved towards curtain . She opened the window and pulled the curtains and there appeared Maan looking breath taking in his simple purple kurta and white lowers . He jumped inside breathing heavily..


" aap yaha..what are u doing here ?? " Geet asked closing the window securely..

Maan made himself comfortable on her bed , lying with legs hanging , both hands behind his head and then replied smilingly " to meet u Mishti "..

" meri shaadi ke baad bhi aise hi milne aaoge " taunted Geet raising her eyes..

" uff Mishti..tum itna pareshan kyu ho rahi hu..main hu na sab theek kar donga aur phikar not tumhari shaadi sirf mujhse hogi " promised Maan pulling her beside himself . He too changed his position facing her, his head supported by his right elbow..



" but mera idea bhi toh acha hai bhaag kar shaadi karne ka " cutely said Geet positioning herself in same manner as Maan..

" Geet jaan..Maan Singh Khurana koi bhi kaam chupkar nahi karta" said Maan with atitude widening his chest..

" okk okk theek hai par aapka plan kaam karega " meekly asked Geet..

" jaan plan sirf kaam nahi karega balki bhaagega " replied Maan with strong voice kissing her left cheek making her blush..


" acha now u go " ordered Geet standing up from bed..

" okk baba..jaa raha hu but soon I will take u with me " charmingly said Maan . He stood up and walked towards door instead of window..

" arey yaha kaha jaa rahe hu " hurriedly asked Geet not understanding his reason of going towards door..

" apne in-laws se milne..unhe bhi pata chalne chaiye apne son-in-law ke baare mein " winked Maan opening door and soon disappeared from her eyesight..

Geet fastly slided balcony door and stood on railing looking towards garden where her sangeet was going on . Soon she located Maan who was touching her father's feet . Her father confusingly blessed him trying to recognise him but then shrugged off . Maan gave Geet his lop-sided smile going towards her mother and tooking blessing from her . Her mother blessed him whole heartly . Maan did a bhangra step with her relatives who were dancing and then giving a flying kiss to her making her shy he exited from her house . Geet happily got inside her room remembering their love story..

*****

Maan took out some time from his busy schedule to attend his friend's ( Karan ) marriage . He reached Karan's house 2 days before marriage . All welcomed him warmly . Karan showed him room to rest . Next day it was Karan's sangeet . Maan wore black sherwani looking dashing as usually and come downstairs . He sat with his friends enjoying the evening when someone caught his attention . He looked at his desired object . There was a girl standing alone wearing olive colour anarkali. Dark brown hazels , cute chubby cheeks and soft pink lips looking like doll . He was totally smitten by her beauty and then something clicked his mind . He smirked excusing himself and walked towards her and purposely collided with her imbalancing her but she composed herself quickly..

" I am sorry " sweetly apologised Geet without any of her mistake and her sweet voice rosed his heartbeat..



" I am not ji " teasingly said Maan winking at her and making her shy..



She ran from there and Maan blushed messing his hair realising his feelings for her . LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT !!! After that day , Maan didn't left any chance to tease her and making her shy with his smiles , winking and romantic comments towards . They became so closed with each other in these days . Geet many timestried to deny her feelings for him but no use . Onthe day of return , Maan offered her lift and confessed his love to her and she too confessed . He dropped her and then their meetings started drowing more in their love..



One day Geet told him about her marriage fixed with Arjun and Maan that day promised her no matter what he will be the only one to marry her..

*****

Geet sat beside groom on mandap dressed in bridal lehenga . She had cried a lot before coming here seeing no sign of Maan anywhere . Groom clutched her hand for pheras and the touch reminded him of Maan . She looked towards groom whose face was covered with flowers . She instantly smiled realising his plan . They completed all the rituals and then proceeded towards elders to took blessings . After taking blessings , Maan lifted flowers from his face and many gasps should be heard . Dadimaa came forward and blessed them and made Geet's family understood about their love and they too accepted . offcourse Who will not to have a sil like Maan..

*****

After an year , Geet entered Maan's cabin with a shy smile on her face . Maan lifted his head from his file hearing door noise . He confusingly stood up from his chair " Shouldn't be she in her cabin at this time ? " ..



Geet has joined office after their marriage and their life was going smootly with their love and cute nok-jhoks..

" you here at this time " asked Maan standing in front of her..

" wo I wanted to tell u something " replied Geet hugging him keeping her face on his chest..



" hmm..bolo " said Maan tracing her face with his fingers..

" u are going to be dad " told Geet in his ears smilingly..

" really " asked Maan not sure if he heard correctly . Geet nodded for yes . Maan hugged her tightly . Nothing can be better than this . His Mishti is carrying their baby . Life can'tbe beautiful than this..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So sweet cute os di
loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the story so much!
Simple n cute😳

But mujhe ek doubt bhi hai😕

Are u reposting this one??
Q k I've already read this somewhere!!😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb os di,
I think I hv read it before ,


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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os ...
loved it ...
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simple nd cute story simran lovd it👏
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Superb OS
love at first sight
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@ spoorthi28 & mskfan - I have written this os for maaneet 4th anniversary thread you must have read it there
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cute sa sweet sa os...
really loved it...

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