FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Nice update but felt really bad for Zain I wish Aaliyah showed some mercy

Naina
Thank you so much
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

A bit disappointed with the last update...many people missed the humor ...I agree she was harsh ...but its Zain ...he can stand upto her ...

Anyways ...another not so great update ..a regular filler chapter ..

Dedication: Akanksha..😳, this ones for you dear. I met her thanks to harshus favourite, she joined the reading pretty late, but I was amazed in a day or two she read almost 65 chapters ...and what a keen story reader. My very dear friend who waits for every update as eagerly as a kid waits for a candy, just about no one has told me the shades of this story as well as she has...a potential writer in making, whenever she decides to that. As simple is your personality ...and as beautiful is your name ...you are a gem...a friend very close to me ...

I never told you, my first story heroines name was Akansha ...i loved that name ...i still do...loads of love and stay happy and cheerful always

Love

Sim

P.S: Tommorows update will be late ... am adding a new chapter seeing u all depressed


Chapter 14

Pyaar Inkaar

As they reached home...his La rushed inside ...

Zain bolo samman kaha hai ...mai kapde lekar aati hu ...

He looked up ...not wanting to tell her where he sleeps ...

Aree bolo na ...Alisha le aayegi ...bolo...Aaliyas anger had peaked ...since Aalisha had cursed her non stop ...the entire way calling her chudail and what not ...

Zain gulped down ...La...who servant quarters mai hai ...

Tum waha kya kar rahe ho ...

Aree who mere kamre mai davai chidkhi thi toh Abdul chacha ne saman rakha hoga apne paas ..

Mai abhi aayi ....as Aaliahsa walked away ...Aaliya looked at him ...

Tum vakai besharam ho...

He looked down ...

Haa kapde tum utarvao ...aur besharam mai hu ...

Kisne kaha tha waha tikkar khade rehne koh ...bhaag nahi sakte the ...

Tum ne kaha khade raho ...toh mai raha ...tumhara kaha nahi thukra sakta na Da ...phir chaiye tum kuch bhi bolo...his eyes had a softness which ate Aaliya ...she phased it out with her bitterness now

Zain yeh bholi shaqal banna band karo...acchi kahani sunayi Aaliahsa koh ...ab toh accha laga hoga mujhe kos rehi thi ...puree raste...

Sorry ...

Tum nahi mai sorry hu ..ki tum mere zindagi mai aaye ...jeena dushvaar karke rakha hai ...tang aa gayi hu tumse ...

He looked up and smiled ...

Aur yeh tumhari hasi ...iska toh mai who ilaaz karungi ki kabhi hasoge hi nahi ...

Da...I love you ...aur hasi tumhare le special hai ...khaas meri taraf se...

aur mujhe pata hai tum ab tak andar islye nahi gayi kyunki tumhe mujhe aise dekh kar kuch kuch hota hai ...

pehle bhi swimming pool ke paas aksar tehlti hu aati thi tum ...yeh paitre purane hai ...

Waise ...meri aaj ki sazaa khatam ho gayi ...ya mai aise hi ghumu ghar par bhi ...he held her hand ...

I don't mind you see...and pulled her towards him ...streaking her hair and face with his fingers ...she could smell his musky odor mixing with a bit of weird heat ...a built-up to let him kiss her ...

Kya hua ...Da...tumhari saanse tez ho rahi hai ...bahut tez...she moved back...

Hmm...lagata hai mere pyaar ka asar chooth raha hai un dhadkano par ...

As La walked in...and Zain left her hand ... Rhea walked out towards the house...she didn't want to break in front of him ...but she was severly hurt ...he didn't even blink ...the scratches on his body ...bleeded in Aaliays heart

For him it was still love ...all her hatred had been gulped down ...and all he could feel or make her feel was love...

she went inside her room and sobbed for 10 mins ...when she heard a knock...

She wiped her tears and turned her back...

Da...andar aao ya bahar hi khada rahu...

She didn't answer ...mujhe pata hai ..tumhe mujhse aise harakat karke ...chain nahi hoga...ro rahi thi na tum...

Nahi...

Da..jhoot bol rahi ho...aree kapde hi utarvane the ...toh bol deti purane pehan kar jaata na mai...kitni acchi shirt thi ...

She was amazed ...he didn't speak angrily ...nor hated her ...he was complaining about his new shirt ...

Chale jao yaha se...

La...bye bolne ruki hai ...aur sorry mere vajah se tumhe taane sunne pade ...usse aur kya keh pata ...isliye jhooth bola ...

He walked out as she stopped pinching her hand ...nothing worked ...nothing ...

At night when he walked in with her medicines ...she looked away ...he smiled ...

Da...har penalty ke saath kuch treat bhi milni chaiye na...mujhe kuch gift nahi dogi...

Zain ...jao yaha se ...

Theek hai ...accha mujhe kamreme andar aane ke liye mana kiya kyunki tumhe darr hai ki mai itna hot hu ki tum apne aap koh control nahi kar paaogi, hai na ...he was smiling ...

She looked back ...her eyes piercing him ...he was so cold ...and nothing affected him ...

Arre baap re ...mendak ki ankhon ki tarah ho gayi hai tumahri aankehin ...accha yaha aao ...aur davai le lo ...

Waha rakho aur jao...

Ab kya mere haat laga hua paani bhi zeher hai ...maana saap ne kata tha ...par abhi itna zehrela nahi hua hu ...he was laughing ...

Yeh accha hai ...pehle haat mat lago..kamre se nikalo ...aur ab pani aur davai bhi aise zameen par rakhvao ...

tum na ek kitaab jaroor likhna ..1000 tarekhe satanae ke...superhit hogi ..aur haa pehli coopy mai hi kharidunga ...mujh par hi aajma rahi ho na ...

Ho gaya ...

Nahi baaki hai ...

Da...please ek baar andar aane do ...ek huggie chaiye...Rhea wali huggie ...chaho toh kal phir khada ho jaunga waha ...bina kapdo ke...

She started crying and looked away ...

matlab haa ya na...aao ya nahi ...

Nahi ...

Maine kal do tickets laye hai ...Raj mandir cinema hai ..na ...bahut suna tha ...chalogi ...mere saath,

please mana mat karna ...please ...yaha rakh raha hu ...agar aaogi toh khushi hogi varna fad dena ...

She didn't speak ...theek hai jaata hu ...good night ...aur bhale kitna jalil kao...par tumse pyaar karta rahunga, tum bhalle muh bhi nahi dekho tab bhi ...and walked out ...

Aaliya got up and took the tickets ..kissing them ...thinking how can she stay angry at him ...she just couldn't ...after what horrid thing she did to him ..she had already melted ...She went to Rehmaans room ...

He was studying a book...

Dad...aaj maine kuch galat kiya...

Zain ke saath ...

Haa...

Beech Palace mai sab ke samne kapde utarvaye ...zalil kiya usse ...haina ..

She looked up shocked ...usne bataya ...

Nahi Aalisha ka phone aaya tha ...who police complaint karna chahti thi ...zain ki baat bhi nahi sun rahi thi ...

I am sorry dad ...

Mujhse nahi usse kaho...

Nahi keh sakti ...

Theek hai main ahi bolunga tumhare beech ...

Mujhse kya chaiye ...

Yeh davai ...hai ...usse kharoch aay hai ...lagane de dijiye ...

He shook his head ...Aaliya ...mat karo aisa ...who sab kuch chup chaap she raha hai ...par agar tumne nahi band kiya yeh sab toh tum usse kho dogi...who bahut accha hai ...

Tabhi toh ...who bahut accha hai ...par mera dil bahut bura ...usse jaana hoga ...

She walked out closing the door...when Rehman walked to Zains room...he was sitting on the bed and starring at his hand ...

Beta ...haath par kya hua ...

who tel lag gaya tha ...

Davai lagai ...

haa haa ...

Accha yeh lo...

Kya hai chachu ...

Davai ...

Kisliye

Kharoch aayi hai na ...

He looked up...Aaliya ne bataya ...with a smile that would have killed Rehman

Nahi ...Aalisha ne, aur dava mai laaya ...Aaliya had told him not to tell

...his face fell...kyu saha ...kyu maante ho uski har baat ...

Chachu kabhi koi apne khuda koh bhi naa bolta hai kya ...

Zain ...mujhe darr lag raha hai ...

He held his hand ...mujhe bhi ...aur haa aapki nafrat aaj samaj mai aayi ...

He looked at him puzzled...phir bhi bhaut pyaar se rakha aapne ...gale lag sakta hu ...jaise apne dad koh lagta tha ...Rehmaan hugged him ...

Zain ..bete ho tum mere ...aur who beti...dono bas ek doosre koh chot pahucha rahe ho ...tum toh baat maan lo ...laut jao apne ghar ...

Biwi koh chodkar jao toh bhi kaho jao ...ab toh uske saath hi rehna hai ...agar who paas bulayegi tab bhi agar thukrayegi tab bhi ...

Rehman hugged him as Aaliya stood in the balcony watching him ...he would not go no matter what she tried ...

Tere daman ki ek dor se bandha hu ...

Gaur se dekh, teri band palkhon mai bhi...

...bas mai hi mai basa hu ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Will Aaliya agree to go with Zain ...if yes ...how 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww lovely update
hope she goes with him

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Aww lovely update

hope she goes with him

Thank you so much
first comment makes me happy
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
I see a silent smiling_baby has read the update and silently smiled and moved ahead
Sorry I m in a cracky mood
Love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update..
loved it
aww..m loving zain more n more
he is so sweet
omg precap
will she agree to go with him??
eager to know hw
do cont soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Sim! Obviously, u write very well...
And actually the humour was seen, but I actually did not feel like it... There was a smile on my lips during those funny dialogues... But the shock of Aaliya doing this to Zain overpowered it all...

Like even when Zain had hated her, he couldn't see her in pain... He had saved her in that hotel... But Aaliya, she is just going to heights! Idk, i just still cnt accept it I guess. And even though I am loving Zain more n more... I just want him to go from there... Leave Aaliya for a while on her own... She needs to articulate her thoughts... She needs to know that Zain has suffered MORE than ENOUGH! His pain is definitely more than Aaliya's... At least that is what i feel... Cuz aaliya at least got out her pain by crying... He does not even cry... buries all his pain in his heart... It is very hurting to see Zain smiling after all this she has done to him...


Pleaaasseee continue soon SIM!
Nowadays it bcums torturing to even wait for one stupid day for your updates... I feel like just logging in and getting an update of Beintehaa Ishq...

Pleaasee continue soon... pleaseee...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously sim...you should take up writing more seriously...how can you make such a beautiful story? la toh la hi hai...she cant see zain besahara...i think u have just converted the purani aliya into alisha.. It at least looks like that...i just wanted to tell that i might not comment always but i will be following your story...your ff is something which compels me to open IF even during exams.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I rarely used to come online..bt ya..i always make my goodmorning by reading this itself..i really love ur story..it is just aesome..some tym it will be emotional some tym funny..u are really a good writer..nt only good..very very very much good writer..
Keep it up


-Mariya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 13
Aaliya thought that Zain had a facial before going out with Alisha😆
And Alisha's compliment:
cutie...chalet phirte machine gun ho tum ...killer ahhh,and his shy reply
It was hilarious 🤣
what Aaliya have done with him it was too much But at the and when he laid his head on his La's shoulder and winked at Aaliya it was awesome
& Sorry for late comment

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