FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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nashfa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Awesome Update sim

poor zain he's suffering a lot

But i can understand aliya's pain

I am loving the precap

Continue soon

Riya

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran
you deserve it ...you are one of the most keen ones too...
Thank you for the lovely words and wishes
yes Zain is weird ...and you may or may not know what he is upto ...till a few more updates
though those lines are good ...my fav was ...tumhe jalane ke liye istamal kar sakte hai ...choote hi aaj lag jaati hai ...epic 😆
loads of love
SIM

Yeah that line was actually epic

Our Zainu baba is too smart he was trying to kill two birds with one stone😉

Dosron ki nazar main saza magar apne lye maza😆

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

I don't mind you see...and pulled her towards him ...streaking her hair and face with his fingers ...she could smell his musky odor mixing with a bit of weird heat ...a built-up to let him kiss her ...

It was hot SIM😳

OMG Aaliya's determination to sent him back its horrifying but Zain abdullah's determination is no less

These lines when she said to Rehman Tabhi toh ...who bahut accha hai ...par mera dil bahut bura ...usse jaana hoga ...

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Great update. Poor zaya but im glad zain took things in his stride instead of breaking down. Aliya was mad at the lie he told la but it was kinda funny lol But once they got home reality hit, aliya is so confused and zains determination is making her resolve break. Even rehman is on zains side and aliya is in her own pain as well as she feels zains pain. Will she break and come with him coz no matter what zain aint leaving. Cant wait for the next chapter.

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sanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

chapter was wonderful lil funny more emotional 😉 BT loved it n these lines omg
tum na ek kitaab jaroor likhna ..1000
tarekhe satanae ke...superhit hogi ..aur
haa pehli coopy mai hi kharidunga
...mujh par hi aajma rahi ho na ... I just love it
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Tom-and-Jerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Ishita

can i call you Ishu ...sure dear..no need to ask..😊
ho na bag na ...ani toh kay kami ahe ...aata bhagha ...kashi yete tyacha javal ...lajun lajun ...achaa update lavkar lavkar then ..hum bhi pdhenge lajun lajun ..☺️
hope you are felling better yeah feeling better than before..😊
loads of love
Sim

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Tom-and-Jerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

awesome update sim!!!!!!!... beautifully written👏👏👏👏👏..aww aliya❤️ she still cares for him ...ohh god zainuu ..kiti besharam aahe ha mulga☺️ ..loving him more nd more..intresting precape ...super exicited 😛..continue soonish..waiting 😳

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: Priya_arora
amazing update..
loved it
aww..m loving zain more n more
he is so sweet
omg precap
will she agree to go with him??
eager to know hw
do cont soon !!

Priya

Thank you so much

Lets see if she agrees then how she ends up going with him

loads of love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Riya5666
Nice update Sim! Obviously, u write very well...
And actually the humour was seen, but I actually did not feel like it... There was a smile on my lips during those funny dialogues... But the shock of Aaliya doing this to Zain overpowered it all...

Like even when Zain had hated her, he couldn't see her in pain... He had saved her in that hotel... But Aaliya, she is just going to heights! Idk, i just still cnt accept it I guess. And even though I am loving Zain more n more... I just want him to go from there... Leave Aaliya for a while on her own... She needs to articulate her thoughts... She needs to know that Zain has suffered MORE than ENOUGH! His pain is definitely more than Aaliya's... At least that is what i feel... Cuz aaliya at least got out her pain by crying... He does not even cry... buries all his pain in his heart... It is very hurting to see Zain smiling after all this she has done to him...

Pleaaasseee continue soon SIM!
Nowadays it bcums torturing to even wait for one stupid day for your updates... I feel like just logging in and getting an update of Beintehaa Ishq...

Pleaasee continue soon... pleaseee...

Riya

I know sweets ..you all are attached to zaya ...and sometimes it not ur fault..when I write a chapter i have a certain notion of how you all will react ...i was excited for the mirror image chapter ...and no one noticed it ...whereas few of the chapters i didnt like u all loved it ...

yes i understand ur feelings for Zain ...and as the story moves ahead ...you might able to figure out why he is still sticking around ...

yes both have suffered equally and zain even more ...but its a process ...a very slow one ...

Intially i was supposed to write only 15-20 chapters ...but I am currently in my 15th ..ans still many more to go ...I have tried to dilute out few harsh ones ...and you waiting for the update is me waiting to read your comments ...i wait ...sometimes waking in the middle if night to see ur words ...the excitement is equal on both sides

loads of love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: HarshikaAnuraj
Seriously sim...you should take up writing more seriously...how can you make such a beautiful story? la toh la hi hai...she cant see zain besahara...i think u have just converted the purani aliya into alisha.. It at least looks like that...i just wanted to tell that i might not comment always but i will be following your story...your ff is something which compels me to open IF even during exams.

Ishita

well writing is just my passion ...research is my first love ...

Thank you so much ...you know words like this make me write ...

I value these words ...so if I made your day ...do give me a feed back ...

That is a big complement ...I know you all are very busy yet take the time out ...good luck for your exams

loads of love

Sim