Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45] - Page 26

Created

Last reply

Replies

304

Views

53.3k

Users

30

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

893213 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
I forgot to read interlude 1

Naina has a violent father

perhaps the saddest thing a child has to witness

This would guide her in the future

she would run if she was in danger


..


ah so it is Maan who thinks she is Sameer's angel

lovely

he was so different back then
i love the sarcasm and archenemy behavior from him.


It is an easy foil to show one self and still stay away

Sameer and Geet are so cute together

Sameer goes away to the US?

trying not to guess anything and enjoying as i go😃


Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
part 21 - naina & tweesha are sweet...all the time bickering...I liked her taking liberty to say anything b'coss of her birthday...lol..
geet noticed the change in naina...she was so happy...truly happy with the life...and both noticed her wearing bracelet...she guessed that she was with Sameer last night...
Sameer is so sweet that he called geet and explained her about naina being with him...geet has no prob with Sameer as long as he keeps naina happy...
I am liking the andy-geet verbal war thru mail...she knew that some andy hacked Sameer's email account...I liked his reply also...geet got furious with his hidden threat...
I had gut feeling that is this andy is maan...?...I wanted to write this in last comment but stopped myself...but after reading his reply, now I think he might be maan...? just guessing..
KittuPratzz thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
How did i miss this part??
Chapter 19 : Missed??

i skipped a part??
Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Interlude 1 - tweesha went for tennis match for few weeks and everything changed...aisa kya ho gaya...
omg...naina had a very terrible childhood...her father is like avi's sumeet of TL...she was just child who got scared of her father...seems he was the one behind naina's sudden disappearance...
andy has so many business, chain of restaurant, his mother in hospital b'ness and father started construction com...decided to concentrate on what his father started...why he hates his mother so much..
geet and Sameer were sweet bro & sis...loved their talk.
geet & andy continued their email chatting..i loved what the name he gave her...archenenmy..
so he liked One female, pari who dare to care for her without knowing about him, without seeing him...
he thinks pari is Sameer's angel, his girlfriend...and decoded to stay away from her..
interesting part
Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
part 22 -
andy loves only bikes...lol...?
loved small small moments bet Sameer & naina...how she wished doing small things which her childish heart craved...
naina rathore...
oh...her secret is out...her dad's b'ness partner saw them together...
scaring for the future events...imagining what happened to naina ...
please cont soon...cant wait more...
Ubiquitos thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
Read the all parts in one go.

Sameer is a lovely guy. From the beginning itself, it looked like they are meant to be. No awkwardness, no nervousness, no doubt, nothing. Just acceptance. I love how Sameer did things for Naina. And this Naina. She is really special. I love her. Straight forward, innocent with beautiful heart. Loved all their moments.

Geet is like a witness of their love story. Ever so protective about her friend yet understanding. I love her and Sameer's bond.

Tweesh had no clue. She would feel bad baad mein.

Andy. Didn't pay attention in earlier parts. But was a interesting character.
When they started chatting, I was like 'This is interesting. So, Is there gonna be somebody other than Maan?' And till the end I found his character interesting and bindass. Until somebody commented Andy is Maan. :-O :-O. He was so different back then. Bikes, booze, and all.
Loads of questions...
Edited by Ubiquitos - 10 years ago
Ubiquitos thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
I feel scared that there would be more than separation...after Naina's comment on that story and seeing how much they are affected by past in the present...

Great. You have done a wonderful job at creating three different love stories with lovely friendships and with webs all over...Actually after reading TPOD I am stumped...:-D

Can't wait...
ChandlerBing thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

It's all relative - 2

Few weeks ago...

"You're writing to Pari again?"

"Ya, sorry I couldn't stop appreciating her love for sarcasm"

Sameer laughed then.

"Strange, she's the sweetest person one could come across"

"Okay, I think you just mistook her to be an angel"

"She is as sweet as an angel, Andy. Trust me on that. I know her personally"

Andy just paused for a beat then as everything fell into place.

He remembered Sameer mentioned about a girl on his birthday. A girl whom he had met when he went for the basketball tournament, and a girl whom he goes to meet up some weekends...

Angel. That's what he had called her then.

Andy sat back as he looked at the undersigned name in the mail.

Pari.

Angel. Pari. Damn! Why did he not figure that out before?

-

Present...

Andy sat by the entrance of the train and saw the trees pass fast as it picked up the velocity.

He leaned against the door, as he let the wind brush his hair, and closed his eyes.

He tried to picture how his Archenemy would look like...

As he opened his eyes back and checked the mail again, those few lines she had written him which showed concern, yet was so subtle in showing that she cared, and concentrated on being her usual sarcastic self, something she seemed to share exclusively for him, he felt himself smile.

"Give it a rest"

He read the line again and felt himself give out a chuckle despite of himself.

How would that sound in her voice? He wondered but shook his head.

He had lost it.

Completely.

-

Few weeks later...

Driving in the rain had always been his favourite. The rush of the water against the skin, the wind blowing against your face, the speed, it gave him a kick.

But as he crossed the bike that was going relatively at a slower speed, with the biker wearing a smile, and a woman, possibly his girlfriend holding him from behind, her eyes closed, her face shining with the droplets of rain, Andy felt himself smile as he for the first time saw somebody forgoing speed, not rushing, yet finding peace and comfort...

-

He had lost his father when he were a child. He had lost his mother to difference of opinion. He had pushed her afar in his growing years, trying to be the grown up. He had been there for his siblings, trying to take his late father's shoes, in the process wherein he had forgotten he could do with some love towards him, some care showered upon...

And when somebody did show some care, however tiny it was, it mattered to him.

But something happened on one afternoon that changed everything...

It was a week for Sameer to leave for US, and on one afternoon he had came to him, and one look at his face, it was clear that everything was not alright.

"What's the matter?" he had asked then.

"She... I didn't hear from her for so many days. It's not normal Andy. Something's up. I got to leave to see if she's ok"

Andy need not be told whom he was talking about.

"You tried contacting anybody else? Any common friend?"

Sameer sat down as he buried his face in his palms.

"Yes. No luck. Nobody knows where she has disappeared to"

Something in Andy's gut twisted, as he felt his knuckles clench.

"She'll be fine" Andy said more to himself than to Sameer.

"You want me to come along with you?"

"No, it's ok" Sameer said "I need you to be here to take care of my family when I'm gone"

"You're not going to the Mars"

Sameer smiled despite of himself "Yeah but mother will freak out if she doesn't find me with just a week to the departure"

"I will take care of it" Andy paused, while Sameer nodded and was walking out of the room.

"Sameer?"

"Ya?"

"Make sure she's okay"

Sameer passed a reassuring smile to his best friend as he closed the door.

Andy caught his reflection on his late father's picture and felt ashamed of himself for being the kind of friend he was. Sameer was more than a brother to him, and in hell would he let something affect their friendship, let alone a girl.

If Andy's father was alive, Andy was sure, he would be disappointed at him.

"I will not pursue it father" he made a silent promise, and walked out of the room himself.

After that day he never opened the mail he used to contact with Pari.

It was a closed chapter to him now.

honeygrape thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Ayo he misunderstoood...i hate mu's... But that also exciites me in this story 😲😳
for one person she is angel and the other one archenemy... how can same person be both

oh i can just see that scene , Andy leaning against the door with closed eyes, wind blowing his hair , such a lovely scene...

After that day he never opened the mail he used to contact with Pari.

It was a closed chapter to him now.

i actually felt like some weight being put on my chest after reading this...no am not being dramatic...i felt so ... your writing makes people feel such strong emotions...aint you proud of that?? uff am toh very proud of being your fan 😃


Edited by honeygrape - 10 years ago
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

She disappeared before Sameer left?

What happened to Naina? Oh gosh, this is unnerving.
Sameer's angel=Pari. Brilliant deduction my dear Andy Watson!
I do like that about the depth of his character that he won't give up a friend for his own feelings.
Wonder if this would be the case in the present day scenario?
Gosh! How irresistibly exciting😆
My brain is travelling several avenues in this story and I am trying hard to control my wandering mind.
Loved it so much
🤗Thanks for updating.
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

3 years ago

Ink-Stained Pages: Aditi's Writing Index

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (90%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7 Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".