Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 10 years ago

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24. Blood ties:

Oh my very painful one. So much one has to suffer because of Other's crooked and orthodox mentality. Very brutal way of showing dominance and authority.

What I feel more sad and angry about is the helplessness she's facing in her situation... the cruelty she has undergone yet is expected to be mum and numbly endure it... blood ties indeed... of bondage and pain.

She's getting married... oh no can't imagine her plight.

Just wondering when will she be off these blood ties ... or will she always be held within and suffocated with the ties put around her.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

25. The End:

You say it's the end ... but is it?? there's still so much left to know. I'm happy to know what happened to them to part ways but then I'm sad that everything's lost.

She did stand for her Mom this time what the child Naina couldn't. I don't know how right her decision is but yes to each his own. Each one reacts and makes different decisions in life. I'm just depressed that it had to be so for Sameer and Naina.

She made a decision for both of them ... choosing separation over enduring and being burdened with his death on her conscience.

Escapism yes... but I still can't blame her nor can I blame him... I'm only scared to know what he does next. His confession is met with such harshness and everything just crumbles like ashes.

The end is sad yet I hold a kindle of hope within me about something that even I Don't know... And credit goes to you Shika for keeping me and all your readers hooked on and yet craving for more...

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prema_ks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Thank you Shika for this wonderful story.

Will add more words later.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

js read most of the last few updates nw! Wt an amazing story! sad painful end! Naina chose 2 end her life! she loved Sameer! this Andy guy seems mysterious! is he MAan?? he n Pari;s notes were superb! the communication ended!