Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you Kittu for the banner🤗

So I've never out rightly told what this story is about, and I realized i should now, before people would pull their hair out of scalp wondering who these characters are.

I write a fiction called Web Of Love for those who are aware. Since the story is turning out to be monstrously long and the past that is involved requires to be attended separately, I decided to write a short story with two leads, which are a part of the past of the leads of Web of Love, and who would play a major role for the leads of Web of Love to turn out to the way they are today. So, yes you might find the leads of WOL in here, but they are in supporting characters in this story, they aren't the leads here. I think I made it clear now.

Anyway, now welcome aboard🤗


Also, for those of you who wish to have faces for their characters, Click here

Index:


Prologue - Page One

Chapter One - A Losing Battle

Chapter Two - Dance like no one's watching you

Chapter Three- Shahid Kapoor and the Stalkers

Chapter Four - A Moment it all takes...

Chapter Five - Who are you?

Chapter Six - The Broken Promise

Chapter Seven - Winds Of Change

Chapter Eight - Challenges

Chapter Nine - Stolen Moments

Chapter Ten - Tremble

Chapter Eleven - New Beginnings

Chapter Twelve - Distractions

Chapter Thirteen - Escapist

Chapter Fourteen - Amidst the showers

Chapter Fifteen - Maradona

Chapter Sixteen - Goodbyes

Chapter Seventeen - Angel

Chapter Eighteen - Unnamed

Chapter Nineteen - Missed

Chapter Twenty - Pari

Chapter Twenty One - Nuisance


Chapter Twenty Two - It's all relative - 1

Chapter Twenty Three - It's all relative - 2

Chapter Twenty Four - Of Blood ties

Last Chapter (Chapter Twenty Five) - The End
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am scrolling down but could not get it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me scratching head, ye kaun bawla manus hai jo ye sab likh raha hai iss diary me...

first meeting me fida on angle...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj



me scratching head, ye kaun bawla manus hai jo ye sab likh raha hai iss diary me...

first meeting me fida on angle...


😆🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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who's dis angel n man????
diary mein toh kuch raaz khol de shiku dear ...story toh story evn here u r giving nothing away😆...oh yes when it comes to ur stories, m an impatient soul😆
anyways i luvd d prologue😛
waiting fr more torn pages 😉
Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... loved the whole description.
From the fun filled time spend between few friends soaking in the rain & observing the minute gestures & actions from a afar this narrative person intrigues me with his vision & detailing. Also the manner in which he observes & finds beauty in it all speaks so much of his own being.
The whole description of the girl in carnation pink dress was so beautiful, & had me completely flowing with the narration. It was so well written that I myself wanted a peek to the whole scene to be played before me. 😳
Waiting for more... 😃
P.S.: Finally started ...hoping will be done reading all before you update... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely prologue
Who is this man who is writing the diary
And he is full too fida on this angel in first meeting only
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for part 1 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update took me back to the rivalry between the two basketball giant teams the New York Knicks and the Chicago Bulls when Michael was still playing. This is going back a few years but it fits your story so indulge me.. the only difference here is I am talking about the coach not the captain. Coaches make decisions in the NBA not captains..
Both coaches were awesome and you should have seen the fan craze even for the coaches. I remember going to watch a watch with hubby and the excitement in the stadium was palpable. The coach for Chicago was Phil Jackson. This guy (as much as I hated his guts then) was a Zen master. There was something magical he could do to the team with his words. Chicago Bulls were on fire when he was their coach and he still has the record for the winning-est coach in basketball here.
I loved the strategy here. Strong defense makes for an easy offense. By having the others guard them in a "sadist" fashion😆, it will be easier to score.
This page of the diary was muaah... for the captain with the brain and the guts to go down fighting...
There was a poem like this too... I'll have to dig up my diary to find it...
Thanks for this update.🤗
Awesome writing as usual...
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
excellent...
liked this spirit...
cont soon dear...

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