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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aria waiting for first part. ..Update soon. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb. Awesome. But plz complete secret love affair n beinteha mohabbat. Plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Whoaa!
Totally intrestngg one! 😃
But I hope kalpi wont abort the child and said those words jus to threaten raghav 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting, I really hope Kalpi stands up to Raghav, hope she leaves before he recovers from the news she gave him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note;-Guys Thank You so much for your Positivity on this FF,I'm Happy to see Many Likes,I'm truly grateful.🤗



Warning;- In this Story there are alot of Dark Scenes and Behavior,Raghav's Character is a of a Beast,So those who doesn't want to read I understand,So I'm going to show How a Cold hearted Beast like man becomes a Loyal Caring Man, ...so It goes on.
I Apologize if this Chapter was Boring


Chapter 1

Before the Incident...
At The Crack of Dawn Kalpana Kapoor was getting dressed for the Last days of College,She took up her yellow dress and stood infront of the Mirror "What about Yellow??To Flashy??" She said talking to Prem on Loud speaker "Yeah...You look good in Pink,go with pink" He replied,she smiled happily and turned dropping herself on her bed landing on her stomach "Hmmm,You seem to like me in Pink?? Why not yellow??","What Kind of Boyfriend will I be If I lied" Prem said chuckling "A very bad one,Prem It's getting Late I'll see you in 15 Mintues,Bye Love you " Kalpi ended the Call Blushing,She sat on the bed touching her Heart shape Chain and Biting her lips closing her eyes"Bappa,Please let these 3 months pass fast,so Momma and Papa can finalize My Marriage to Prem"
Kalpi quickly rushed downstairs,See took a quick drink of Tea
"Beta...Sit and Eat with your Mom and I" Sahil said reading the Newpapers "No Papa,I can't I'll be late,I'll see you later..Bye" Kalpi kissed Gauri and Sahil,and walked outside,Fixing her bag,she got a text and lost herself into her phone,While a Black Mercedes Benz Park Across the Street Was focused on her,Kalpi then made her exit walking down the Street greeting her Neighbours.
"Shall I leave Now Sir??" The Chauffeur asked "No...Follow her" He said,The Car followed Kalpi being Cautious,They watched on as she entered the Bus and Left "Sir,Choti Begum has left,Shall We go now?? She will be heading to College now" The Chauffer said "She's grown beautifully Just like her mother,She's the Spilting Image of Afia,No...Let's go".

Kalpi came off the Boss Looking around for Prem "I should Focus,Results first then Prem" Kalpi said Heading into the College.
All the Girls Shrieked and Trampled over to Raghav Singhaina's Black Benz,Having his Body guards Protecting him,He walked out Looking Ever so handsome in His Killer looks and Smile,He smirked seeing all the Girls Fawning over him, "He's so handsome,I wish I was lucky as Suhana" A girl said adoring him,He chuckled hearing them and made his way into the College.
Kalpi stood by the board with her eyes close Praying and Hoping she did well,Raghav passed behind her keeping his eyes on his phone,Kalpi opened her eyes "Bappa I promise If I pass,I'll stop stealing Momma's Earrings," Kalpi took a deep breath and nervously looking at her results,Prem stood behind her smiling,Kalpi's eyes widens "Bappa..why isn't my name here?? Did I fail?".
Prem-kalpi..
Kalpi slowly turned and watched Prem sadly "Did I fail?? I won't go to Paris??"
Prem embraced Kalpi tightly and caress her head.
Raghav Quietly followed Suhana as she walked into a Quiet Room "I came to see you here and No response??" He said Watching her,Suhana scoffs "What do you mean?? You slept with That wh**e and Now you're playing the Perfect Boyfriend?? Get out!!" Suhana said turning away,Raghav grasped unto her head and Pulled her close "Why are you giving me Attitude!!??" He then Kissed her angrily,he then jerked her away "I'll see you outside,Doesn't College over early today??" Raghav said smirking then he left,Suhana wiped her mouth and fretts
After a while Raghav stood outside leaning on his car talking on the Phone "Suhana is behaving like a Bitch again,She knows Our relationship is noting " He chuckles "She found out about Zara,Preeti and Sonu"
Kalpi walked out the College Dejected Holding a Envelope in her hands "Bappa,Please give me good luck today" Kalpi slowly opened her Envelope,her eyes widens,she jumps up and shrieks "Bappa..Thank you" Kalpi jumped around happily,Hearing the Noise Raghav's eyes Falls on Kalpi,He looks at her in a daze wondering why he could'nt stop staring at her,He watched as her long hair hits against her Face and her smile and Eyes made him Nervous Restless and Mesmerized,He found himself Checking her out,He eyed her from head to toe,Watching as her Cotton dress fitted perfectly on her curvy body,He couldn't Resists and walks up to her watches her Lustfully and Fascinated while her eyes was glued to her Envelope.
"Hello" Raghav said in a seductive voice,Kalpi stood there startled,she watches him in the corner of her eyes and slowly looks up at him. "Pardon?" Kalpi looked at him confused,He smirked at her "Hello,I'm Raghav and You are??" He said winking at her,"Oh...I'm sorry I don't Speak to strangers" Kalpi said making her exit,Raghav scoffs and Blocks her Path "I'm speaking,When I talk you Listen and Obey,Now tell me your Name" Raghav said Sternly Kalpi watches him "I'm sorry,I don't know you and Don't Plan too,Excuse Me" Kalpi said Leaving him there Shocked and Speechless "You Don't Plan too! I'll Give you a reason to know Me then" Raghav said Smirking,Suhana walked up to him Waving her hands "Raghav...Hello, Raghav!!" Raghav looked at her and Smiled "I like this college,I'll help your Fellow Students with Business and All","Oh Really Raghav thanks" Suhana said Hugging Raghav who was busy planning his meeting with Kalpi.

All the Body guards Bowed as The Head Mobster Dev Chopra Walked by,He went into An Empty hall,He mad his Eyes Meet the Largest and Spotless Photo in that Hall,Afia's Photo,
"Afia,My Dearest Afia,Our Daughter I saw her today,She's...You,She looks just Like you,People would say she's your Lookalike,Afia I promised you That I'll protect her,I promised you I'll keep her away from the Mob's that she would never be involve in this,That she'll have a life of happiness,I'll live up to that Promise,That I'll Keep Our Daughter safe"
Dev Made his way to his Chambers Greeted by Kajal "Dev ji I was wondering since Our Marriage We haven't had a Party so I was wondering...If...","Sure..why not,We'll have it to welcome you and Your daughters" Dev says making his way to his seat "Our..Daughters Dev ji" Kajal said Staring at Dev,she then left.
"Why Was Kajal in here,Ammi was the Only one allowed now you're letting her in here!!" Dev Looked up at His two son,who were very much angry at him. "Zain,,Saif...Kajal is your Mother now,She has been here taking care of you","I'm sorry Dad,I only have one mother and she's in my heart"Saif said and left with Zain,Dev sat back and sigh looking at Afia's Photo "There right"

Kalpi sat in the canteen happily watching her envelope,Prem sat next to her wrapping his hands around her shoulders
Prem-My Kalpi is Looking Bright as a Bulb.
Kalpi-Thanks to you,Thank you Prem.
Saying that Kalpi Pecked prem on his cheeks
Prem-I do deserved that.
Kalpi smiled and held his hands "Why did you call me here??"
Prem-Actually,Mr Chopra...
Kalpi's eyes widens "Cho...Chopra as is Mobster Dev Chopra???
Prem-Yeah,Kalpi be calm.
Kalpi-Prem How can I be calm when A Mobster whats to Kill us!
Prem shooked her "Kalpi..chill,His Wife Kajal ji is Having a Party and They Invited My Mom and I,so I was Planning to invite my Loving beauitful Girlfriend."
Kalpi smiled "Really? Am I that Beauitful??Okay since you said those Nice things I'll go with you"

On his way home Ignoring Suhana's Talking Raghav mind was clouded with Kalpi's Image and Body, "Who is she to Reject me" He thought "I'm sure I'm in her thoughts Now" He thought and smirked.
"Why are you smiling? are you planning something??" Suhana asked curiosuly,Raghav hugged her and smiled "I am,something Amazing!!"
Kalpi walked home recalling Raghav "Who is he?? Why does he wants to know my name,Anyways he sounds Awful,I pray Bappa please don't let me meet him again"

How was my first Chappy??I haven't made Rags mean yet... will update character sketch after my second Chappy😛


Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Its awesome
Rag is so lustful n kalpi such a pure soul waiting for update
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Going by the Chapter, Raghav does look very mean. This seems like a revenge drama whr the guy wants to take revenge on the girl but ends up falling for her.. Or its like the story whr the guy wants the girl's body and haves his way leaving her to die.. Anyways, I definitely want PMs for this..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Its awesome. Plz update secret love affair and beinteha mohabbat also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
OMG this rags is a womanizer. He slept with how many girls while going with Suhana.. What an arrogant and conceded man. And prem and kalpi huh! 🥱 I m interested in seeing how rags gets a hold of kalpi and what he does. One more chappy please yaar 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
It was awesome update. Loved it. So prem and kalpi a pair. Not bad ,but I don't think they will stand together for long as rag is there

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