Tortured Love - Falling for his Weakness (RagNa FF) Thread 1 Ended :)

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Hi Chicas,I Actually always wanted to do a Dark Love Story and Yay I'm finally doing it,So I hope you All enjoy as much As I Enjoy writing it .



One of the Most Brutal Mobster/Businessman,Preys & Tortures a College Student Physically and Emotionally,Slowly he falls for Her.,But With her there also comes along a secret, She's The Richest and Head Mobster Biological Daughter.




Chapters

Chapter 1 Page 6
Chapter 2 Page 9
Chapter 3 Page 14
Chapter 4 Page 23
Chapter 5 Page 29
Chapter 6 Page 33
Chapter 7 Page 39
Note pg 44
Chapter 8 Page 51
Chapter 9 Page 54
Chapter 10 Page 60
Chapter 11 PaGe 68
Chapter 12 Page 74
Chapter 13 Page 78
Chapter 14 Page 88
Chapter 15 Page 96
Chapter 16 Page 107
Chapter 17 Page 117
Chapter 18 Page 125
Chapter 19 Page 134
Chapter 20 Page 142




Prolouge Below😃




Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago

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Prolouge

She Saw herself being dragged down the Halls of the Mansion,Remembering the first time when she had entered,He flinged her in the middle of the Indoor Courtyard,She held her hands Wincing in pain seeing her Bangles cutting through her skin.
"Let's End this Now!" He said Angrily staring at her,She looked on with tears as her tears their Marriage Papers "This Is the End of you and the End of Our Contract Marriage!!" He then Grasped her tightly and angrily by her wrist and carried around the fire Undoing their Marriage,he jerked her away again and stared at her "Were Done!! I Got what I wanted from you and Now I'm finished with you,You were just Trash and A Toy!! Get your Bloody face out of my Mansion!!" He said Pointing at the Door.She smiled at him with tears,"You're Smiling why?? Do you want a last touch before you leave,I Promise I won't go hard on you." He said smirking at her,She turned her head away in digsust "Why so quiet?? Are you afraid??" She made her eyes meet his "You're right,I am trash,I was a toy,You Made me spend Nights with you,You made me sleep with you,You did things to me which Is Unforgivable,But Thank you...Thank you Monster Raghav" She said holding back her tears "What?? You're thankful,Why?? I have no pity on you,Your Body was Mine,I did What I wanted,I Owned you,so stop crying over that!" He said smirking at her "I'm sorry Monster Raghav,A man like you can never own me!! Still thank you for breaking everything off,Thank you for it all,Because I'll be away from you,I will live in Peace" She said with Hate in her eyes for him, "Peace?? Bullshit ,When you close your eyes you'll always see me,Feel me right there,There's no peace here!! There no happy ever after for you" He said chuckling "You're wrong,There will be Peace for me,Once..." He stops her "Once what?? What's on your freaking Mind!! Are you going to Take Revenge??!!" Baby you can't!! Look at you,I made you weak!!!!" He said annoyed by her.
"I am...I am Pregnant...Because of you,And Ill get My peace when I abort this child,as I cannot Raise A Brute" She said.
Raghav eyes widens hearing the news he stands there dumfounded,while Kalpi looks on at Him with determined eyes.




How was My Prolouge?? Comment leave them below...tell me some of your thought?? was it Good Or Bad??😊
Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago
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Character Sketch
Main


Kalpana Raghav Singhaina/ Begum Afsana Chopra.
Kalpana is 21 years of Age and Dreams to be Married to Prem The Love of her life,But Everything changes when she Meets a Lustful Mobster Raghav Singhaina.
Kalpi is Florist,she is the Lookalike of Her Mother Afia,She's Raghav's Wife and Dev Chopra's Daughter,She has the Upper hand Being the Leader of the Mobs.



Mobster Raghav Singhaina
Raghav is 31 years of Age,He's Every girls dream and Nightmare,Raghav is a Cheat,Player and a Arrogrant Person by Nature,He's Powerful & Dominant,Raghav lusts after Kalpi and Slowly Falls for her.


Head Mobster Dev Chopra
Dev Is much very in love with his Late wife Afia,and Vows always to Protect their Daughter who is the Lookalike of her,Dev Is strict,Mean,and A Ruthless Mobster,He is the Father of Saif,Zain and Kalpi (Afsana) He hates the Singhaina's and His son Raghav.



Saif Chopra
Saif is Kalpi's elder Brother who vows to Protect her from all evil,He tries with his brother to Give Raghav Pain for Raping their Sister,He keeps Kalpi away from Raghav.



Zain Chopra
Zain along with his brother Gives Pain to Raghav,Vows to Protect his Sister.

Shaad Siddiqui
Shaad is 29 years of age,He's a Bussiness Man and doesn't want to be Part of the Mob,Shaad Makes all the girls Swoon with his Looks.
Shaad Develops a Strong Connection with Afsana(Kalpi) which makes him Over-protective of her,Noticed by her father Dev Wishes to Plan their Marriage,Shaad Sees Kalpi as a Rose with Thorns,He Protects and shares everything with her,Though he hates Raghav he keeps His secret.
Mahima Singh
Mahi is 26 years of Age,She helps Raghav in his Motive but to only Falls for him.


Zoya Siddiqui
Zoya is 17 years of age,She is the Little sister of Shaad and Adores Her Bhabhijaan(Kalpi) Zoya hates whenever Raghav is around Kalpi and does every little thing to seperate them.
She wishes to be like Kalpi a florist.
Meher
Meher is 20 years of Age and is Kalpi's Sidekick,Friend,Confidant and Maidservant.
Meher knows every little secret of Kalpi and Helps her with everything.

Supporting
Meemsaab Neetu Singhaina.
Neetu is fun-loving and sweetest person from the entire Singhaina Family.
Neetu is Kalpi's Pillar in the Singhania Mansion,Neetu Loves Kalpi as her own,She Hates her son after finding out his doings,she's was best of friends With the Late Afiya Chopra.

Ishita
Neetu's Confident.

Aryan Singhaina
Aryan is the worlds biggest Player who still lusts after Kalpi and still wishes to have her.

Kajal Chopra
Kajal is the Mother of Twins Suhana and Paakhi and the Step-Mom of Saif,Zain and Afsana (Kalpi).
Kajal hates Kalpi for challenging her.

Paakhi Chopra
Paakhi is Kalpi's College Friend,Suhana's Twin and Kajal's daughter.


Suhana Chopra
Suhana Loves Raghav and Hates Kalpi,she instigates Raghav against her



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Kamla Jadhav

Prem Jadhav
Prem is Kalpi's Ex-Boyfriend and Friend.




Sahil Kapoor
Kalpi's Adoptive Father


Gauri Kapoor
Kalpi's Adoptive Mother


Sammy Singhaina
Sophie Singhaina

Young Dev Chopra

Afiya Chopra
Afiya was Born and Raised In Pakistan,she fell in love with Dev and crossed the Borders,Marrying him and Making a family with him.
She is the Lady of the House and MOB Even after her death having her thrid child.
Afiya on her deathbed made her last wish -For Dev to Protect her baby her Afsana.


More Character willl be added as the Story progress





Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago
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Very interesting prologue!!! Can't wait to read the story. Continue soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome but finish secret love affair and beinteha mohabbat
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Very unique prologue. Please continue with the story.

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Very interesting prologue. Please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Guys🤗 and Sunny I'll update this And Secret tomorrow Morning,Beintehaa in the night😃 😳
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Always wanted u to start this story and finally u did thank u so much . Please continue
Edited by Taniyagoel - 10 years ago
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Yay 1 more ff...I can't w8 now...
Hate this raghav ,he is sooo cheap here...
Continue soon, wanna see how the story vl move forward...thnxxx 4 pms

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