SS; ABHORRENT BETRAYAL CHAP 26-28 Page 37 epilogue pg 38 complete

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THIS IS SOMETHING NEW THAT I HAVE HAD IN MY HEAD FRO A WHILE NOW. THOUGHT TO GIVE YOU A TEASER AND JUST SEE HOW YOU WOULD ALL TAKE A STORY OF THIS NATURE


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ISHITA RAN INTO HER ROOM AND CLOSED HER DOOR SLIDING DOWN AS SHE BROKE DOWN IN TEARS AND CRIED. SHE COULDN'T BELIEVE HER EYES, SHE COULDN'T UNDRSTAND HOW THEY WOULD SO SOMETHING LIKE THAT.

HE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE THE LOVE OF HER LIFE, HE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE THE ONE PERSON TO LOVE HER AND NEVER HURT HER. AND HER BESTFRIEND, HOW COULD SHE, HOW COULD THEY DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT.

IT FELT LIKE SOMEONE HAD SUCKED THE LIFE OUT OF HER AS SHE STRUGGLED TO BREATH THROUGH HER TEARS AND SOBS. AS SHE TRIED TO PROCESS WHAT THE WAS HAPPEINING THERE WAS A BANG ON THE DOOR

'ISHITA BETA PLEASE OPEN THE DOOR, WE NEED TO GET YOU READY, IT IS YOUR ENGAGEMENT DAY REMEMBER,'' SAID MRS. IYER

'OH HO MAMA SHE COULD BE IN THERE WITH...'' SAID MIHIKA LAUGHINGLY AS SHE TRIED TO TEASE HER SISTER

'HUH HAAN MAMA JUST A MINUTE I AM COMING...'' SAID ISHITA TRYING SO HARD NOT TO EXPRESS HER EMOTIONS IN HER VOICE

SHE GOT DOWN FROM WHERE SHE WAS SITTING AND WALKED OVER TO THE MIRROR WAS AND AS SHE CLEANED THE MAKEUP THAT HAD SMUDGED DUE TO THE TEARS, SHE MADE A VOW

THEY WERE GOING TO PAY, FOR EVERY PAIN AND HUMILIATION SHE FELT THEY WERE GOING TO PAY, SHE WAS GOING TO ENSURE THAT THEY FELT EXACTLY THEY WAY SHE DID FOR THIS ABHORRENT BETRAYAL

WHAT WOULD YOU DO WHEN THE TWO MOST IMPORTANT PEOPLE BETRAY YOU IN THE MOST UNIMAGINABLE WAY? WOULD YOU REVENGE OR WOULD YOU FORGIVE?

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CHAPTER 1 AND 2; https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4325499&TPN=4&#p124213689

CHAPTER 3-6; ABHORRENT BETRYAL

CHAPTER 7-10; Abhrrent Betrayal cahp 7-10

CHAPTER 11-12; ABHORRENT BETRAYAL CHAP 11-12

CHAPTER 13-14; Abhorrent Betryal 13-14

Chapter 15-17; Abhorrent Betrayal Chap 15-17

Chapter 18-19; Chapter 18-19

Chapter 20-22; https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp? TID=4325499&PID=125638764&#p125638764

Chapter 23;Chap 23

CHAPTER 24-25;; Chapter 24-25

CHAPTER 26-28; CHAP 26-28

EPILOGUE; Epilogue

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Divancraze thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start!
What happened to Ishu?
Please PM me
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nice teaser
excited to know wat happens in the story ahead

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nice start...ishita in revenge mode...
best freind and lover...sounds intresting. Marriage?...
Continue soon..


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interesting start
waiting to read more
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Interesting start yaar...
Waiting for first part..
Please pm me me when you update...😊😊
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Very interesting... Do pm me...
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Interesting start.. looking forward to where you take it😊
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Aisha fantastic start can feel the heat of this story continue please and PM me too. Have a wonderful weekend dear.😊
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Of course always excited to read your work!

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