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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Amazing as always.. U know each and every story of yours is unique and we readers have 'fevicol wala pakka jod" with every story
This wasn't the exception.
The longer and 2-3 chapters at a time is your USP ;)

About these finale chapters... I loved Raman's break down (for a change) bcz mard ko b dard hota hai he also need to vent out his emotions
I had changed my opinion for shlok
But still not for shaggy ;)
In epilogue I expected their marriage and some romance :(
Not that I didn't like what i got. I love that too.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this
Keep writing in future too

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Read it all luv da whole story n concept luv it

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chami sanjeewani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

i read this story long time ago.but i read it again in one go.it's really beautiful.thanks for these amazing story.

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RitaDivan

@RitaDivan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Hey 😊

This made me cry a lot! A complete emotional rollercoaster .. Wht turn of events .. Now I even miss it ended this soon ... But as they say all good thing come to an end! But this has a happy ever after ending so I'm content!

What a love trangle it was! Well kind of twice (shlok-Ishu-Shagun) & (Raman-Ishu-Shagun) ... At the end I felt sad for Shagun .. I'm not justyfying what she did to Ishu! It was a complete betrayal ... But just to think neither shlok nor Raman loved her for real ... It's something!

I felt she was just used ... well she didn't help either the way she behaved ... Ishu was the girl to fall in love with ...

Atleast at the end it would have been at peace if she really found love ... But it seems she still is single .. That kinda made me little sad! Normally I hate Shagun but don't know why in this I just felt pity in the end!

Raman and Ishu really needed that happiee ending after all that they have gone tru ! Love the new friendship they have found! I really love Abimanyu in here he is perfect! Even I love shlok .

I really have to appreciate your way of narrating a story is awsome, you keep your plot always super interesting! That we never want them to end and we get greedy and want more ... Atleast i do want more to read always 😆

Thanks for this beautiful story! <3 🤗

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Nupur...

@Nupur...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

awesome story... completed reading it a long time ago but couldn't comment as I was busy in reading ur other story "being mrs.Ravan Kumar" as soon as I completed Reading it I came

it's an amazing story ishita's character was too good
loved all the ishra scenes
shloks and ishu relationship was too cute
I loved the epilogue way too much
u are an amazing writer

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