Is pyar ko kya naam doon- A sandhir ss(link to thread 2 added)

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
Wow.. Interesting concept!!
Rd, an attorney...
Sanyukta is accused of killing Sameer..
Wowie.. Nice job by sanyu...
Waiting to read more from you...
Do continue soon
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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
Happy n a prosperous new year <3

Same 2 u 😊

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: anuja78
wow..
chalo finally sameer ka murder kar diya... hehehe
anyways I too love mysteries ...

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: vidhichaudhury
Awesome prologue.loved it.update soon pls.
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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shalbi

seems to b interesting...
happy about the fact that sameer is dead😆
Continue soon and dont forget to p.m me

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal
amazing...thanks for the pm😉😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: mrdodokk
wow sounds amazing and definitely a rare plot...
love to read it...
conti soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
Whoa..
Unique Story Line..
Do update ASAP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: suumi
interesting concept...
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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Part - 1

I came back to home after meeting with
miss.aggarwal for the 1st time ... she is so
strange ... isn't she?? I mean why on this earth anyone will confess about his crime and that too when the person knew that the punishment for murder is death .. oh god what type of girl this is .. why she is doing this .. doesn't she love her life ... doesn't she want to live with her family ..
i mean having a family is such a good feeling .. agar meri family mere sath hoti to mein aisa bevakoofi wala kaam kabhi nhi karta ... but she was different from any other girl ... but afterall she is a girl,a girl sees so many dreams for her wedding from childhood then what made her kill her own fiance ... and what her eyes speeks ... her eyes were so mysterious ... her eyes speaks something which her words can't ... i have to solve this mystery ... i will ask her eyerything tomorrow ... moreover there are 15 days remaining for her hearing

I had my dinner and laid on my king size
bed ... sometimes i hate my large home because I am alone here ... no one is with me ...

I was laying on my bed but sleep was far away from me .. i was tosing sides on bed .. i closed my eyes and i could see only that girl's face ... ugghh .. i am hating it ... a girl can't snatch my peace ... i have to meet her tomorrow and solve her mystery ...

i some how slept and woke up late,so i had my breakfast ... noo noo its brunch ... no time left for having lunch i picked my stuff and went to meet ms.mystrey ... oops ms.sanyukta ... the mystery girl ...

I went to her .. but no effect ... she just
ignored me .. i was hell irritated .. but i can't do any thing .. i have to do my duty ... i kept going to her for one week .. but no effect on her ..

then one fine day,we actually talked but a little bit ... i went to her prison

She was sitting resting her back on wall ... i went near her and sat in front of her ... i don't know she just ignored me or did not noticed me ... i shruged her shoulder and she came back from her dream land ..
uugghhh these girls,why they thinks too
much ... i started asking my questions .. but my questions were like a drop of water on a big stone ... which means no effect on her ... suddenly she fainted ... i picked her in my arms ... her weight was around 40-45 which means that she is too weak ... i was tensed for her .. i can't understand,just for a criminal i am doing this .. i took her to doctor of jail ...

Doctor examined her and then i got to
know that she is actually weak ... the lady jailor told me that she had not eaten anything from last 3 days and before that too she used to have a little food ... my heart became heavy,i was feeling pain in my heart ... i was feeling pity on her ..

Doctor gave her injection and she came
into sences after sometime ...I offered choclates to her .. i knew choclates are girl's best friends ... her face lighten up but only one or two percent ... i showed her food ...

'Agar ye choclate chahiye to tumhein ye khana khana pdega'- i said with a smile on my face ..

'Okkk'- she said making a face

She ate a little food

'Ab do mere choclates'- she said

'Aise nhi,choclates to sirf friends gift kar sakte h,strangers nhi .. so friends??" - i said streching my hands towards her

She did handshake with me and that touch of her hand sent current in my body ..

'Friends'- she spoke with a little smile on her face ..

I too smiled

'Par sirf 1 week k liye,q k uske bad to mujhe death ki punishment milegi na'- she said with a straight face

'Par i will not let u die friend,u tell me the whole story,i will save u'- i said seriously

'But i don't want to live, u may go now'- she said This made me sad ..

'Okk by, but i promise i will save u, kuch bhi ho jaye death ki punishment se to bacha loonga tumhein,kam se kam saza hogi,just wait and watch'- i said
confidently

'U just wait and watch,i will die'- there was a hateness in her voice ..

I came out of jail ... i decided that now i will not let this girl die .. she is too innocent man,how could she die like this ...

I came back to my house... i sat on my couch .. my thoughts were filled with that girl only .. i just have to save this girl
anyhow ...

***

Only two days were left for hearing of her
case ... i was tensed for her ... i was becoming restless day by day .. i just wanted to save this girl ... so i decided that i will strictly ask her ... i went to her ... i got some choclates for her ... as she just love choclates but she didn't eat much,may be she is having no intrest in eating
her favourite things ... the one thing she wanted is death death & death ... why this girl wants to die ... can't she live her life for her family,for her friends,for me ... wait wait did i just said me??? No no randhir concentrate she is a criminal ... but she is so innocent,she is so cute,she will look cuter when she will smile ...
oh randhir u have to concentrate on ur work ..

while thinking,i reached her place .. i mean her prison ...

'Aj pehle to pyar se baat krunga,ache
se,aur agar nhi bataya usne to mujhe strictly puchna pdega usse'- i thought

I took a long breath and went near her .. she was sitting looking at a corner ... she was not looking at that corner .. i think she was in deep thought ...

'Umm sanyukta'- i said softly

She was still thinking something

'Sanyukta'- i said bit louder

Again she did not responded ...I shaked
her shoulder softly and she came out of hervthoughts.

'Haan randhir'- she said

Me- kahan khoyi hui ho

Sanyu- khin nhi ..

Me- r u alright?

Sanyu - yea wo bas aise hi kuch soch rhi
thi

Me- okk .. i got something for u

Sanyu - what ...She was not so excited ... she sounded so low

Me- ur favourite dairy milk...

Sanyu - thank u (slowly)

She took the choclate from my hands but i took it back

Me- tumhein ek game khelni hogi mere sath phir tumhein ye choco milega

Sanyu - fine i don't want choco

Me- sanyu plz na bbt simple game h .. mein tumhein bht simple se question puchunga aur tumhein answer krna h .. aur tumhein answer karna h ... har answer k liye tunhein ek bite milega choclate ka

Sanyu - i don't want choclate

I think use pta chal gya mere plan k bare mein ... but still m randhir singh shekhawat .. i convinced her .. i started asking questions with speed taki wo jaldi
jaldi mein mere que ka ans dede ... i know m intelligent and all ... par kabhi proud hi nhi kia

'So lets start'- i said excitedly

'Karo shuru'- she said normally

She was answering and i was giving choclate bite for her every answer

'Favourite place'
'Goa'
'Favourite food'
'Indian'
'Favourite color'
'Royal blue'
'Dream'
'Engenering'
'Love'
'Machines'
'Priority'
'Fam... she stoped

'Randhir enough i don't want more choclate,kafi h itna'- she said controlling her tears

i understood she was about to say family,but why she stopped,it was just a simple question,she just failed my plan, i need to know whats cooking up in her
mind .. so i spoke

'Hey what happen haar gyivtum'- i said in a teasing way

'Sanyukta aggarwal kisi se nhi harti'- there was a spark on her face .. which gave a bright smile on my face ..

yes i was smilling without any reason .. but then her teary eyes remind me that only one day left for her hearing .. i have to save her ..

Finally keeping my heart aside,i spoke again- 'fine sanyukta,2 din baad hearing h tumhare case ki , sirf 1 din bacha h , plz tell me everything ,i wanted to save u'

'But i dont want u to save me'- she said looking away ..

I had enough of this girl ,she behaves like this from the day i meet her ,i got up from my place and asked her making an angry face

'i had enough of urs sanyukta,tell me whats the matter'

She simply rolled her eyes and ignored
me,i held her shoulders and pinned her to wall ,there was no one around us ... i pushed her so hard that she winced in pain

'aahhh randhir plz leave me,dard ho raha h' she said and closed
her eyes.

She was looking so innocent that i could not stop my self from staring at
her,my heart was beeting at fastest speed,i was so lost in her that i lost my grip on her and within seconds i came in my senses,I smilled at my stupidity

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Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago

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