Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Shree speaks : Hi my dear Heli...

Arma speaks : Or Kunchu 😉

You know what I mean...

Shree speaks : I really loved this update... truly...

The emotions, actions... and you make everything look so lucid and understandable...

Usually I don't read such stories cause I never end up understanding them...

Hehe... too much of a realist!

But this is a sweet exception!

You know am having exams thus I can't exactly write the bada bada comment which I want to... 😭

Anyways... toh chalo...

Ryan... you have portrayed him beautifully...

I really love this character... however in this update I missed one thing... Zara's POV on Ryan...

I dunno why... hehe...

ANd yes... the end was beautifully written... the sparks amidst the two 😳

Shree speaks : Actually I don't feel THAT bad that Ryan killed them...

Arma speaks : It was perfect... those goons might have left her in a state that no justice could ever heal back... doesn't Michael want to think about that... or perhaps he was waiting that no... let the pretty goon do something bad then it's fine to kill? Death deemed that goon right...

Shree speaks : Hmm... point noted... but then Michael too understands what's beyond normal stuff... he obviously has a heart... a golden one... and will definitely think as to why what happened... justice goes above everything na!

Arma glares...

Shree speaks : And yes... the update was almost too beautiful...

Arma speaks : Except ek part...

I dunno why I felt Ryan's emotions too fast... 😕

Shree (glaring at Arma) : Wait! It was simply beautiful... the way he spoke to Michael, Eve... it touched my heart... 😳

Arma's mind (emotional kahiki... heh...) : I still felt that the emotions needed more time to develop *shrugs shoulders*

Shree speaks : Whatever *rolls eyes* I loved the way Ryan wished to be with Zara And yeah... Jenny relatively has a small yet effective role!

Luv ya,

Shree...

Adios Kunchu...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Not only the angel but even me felt moist in my eyes

this was a very crucial part I guess
zara and Ryan lied to jenny so this was sort of their punishment I guess...

I really don't trust this kade

loved the cute little moments which showed that Ryan has started liking the human lifestyle
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Ryan got carried away by his sudden rage... and committed this crime of killing a mortal...

I guess this was all a plot by Lucian himself to get Ryan away from Zara
let's wait and watch though

please don't take Ryan away from Zara

pretty please heli

continue soon

love
Birdie

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

i knew it!!! you gonna make it your way na... guardian angel and pain!!! you made him feel it!! that my KUNNN!! yeah!!

Lucy's new muse seems fishy, and Ryan felt a threat!! and then that attack...what are you planning???

do continue jaani, i know it'll be more interesting... it's only the beginning , with that tears in the angel's eyes...hihi

do continue ... & thanks for pm.

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Chap 2, 3 4...
Yeah..I know I m late..Sorry.!
The terrace scene..I was like what is happening..never thought you would bring Ryan out this soon..
She is his little devil and now he is her Angel..wah..!
Love the small little things like her childish behaviour, the alarm thing and his talking to her though she won't hear it..!
Jenny and her relation is so different and loveable.
She is the next one..I din't get this..

The connection between Ryan and Zara from her birth to childhood and till now was so beautiful..loved the little details you have brought out of childhood..👍🏼
I was a bit sceptical about Ryan's entry in the house, thought Jenny won't allow, mentioned her nature. But then he got it..!
He made a protective shield for her but guess Lucian is about to make a move..hope this shield helps her.
About the treaty..curious..!

Ryan and Zara lied to Jenny to go to pub..After reading the whole update feeling like they shouldn't have done that.
He killed a man..did not expected this..thought he will beat them up but kill..!! now he has to pay for it..
Aww..!! Tears in angel's eyes..please don't take him away from Zara..😔
Waiting to know what happens now..
Cont soon and thanks for pm.

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Wow . This is an amazing FF .

I always loved to read such fantasy and magical stories. They take us to a different level and makes us think hard if all the magic really exists.

and well it does exist in your story if not in the real world. I read it in one go and was amazed at the way you have described things and the way you have written it.

This one takes me to a higher and a different level of imagination.

Continue soon.

pls send me pms for the further updates of this story.😊

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

God they are falling for each other. Thats not a News still thinking about it is all oh so dreamy! Woww!
Even the pain is nothing in front of him, all he was thinking is to go back to Zara.
I liked eve and the way she was conclusing things. She had to tell him that he is crossing his limit but love has it all withing them ! Till how long they would maintaing this line of control?

Waiting for next!

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Heyloo KK!🤗

😭 Was feeling so bad for Ryan.. he got hurt because he is in love with her And yeah Eve knows.. of course she would! It's so obvious hehe.

And yayy they agreed to send him back😳

Saw the caring streak of Jenny today... I must admit I am loving her character a lot!

And poor Zara.. ek toh her parents were killed in an accident *sniff* and she is falling in love with him too.. and he is just an angel.

The love he has for her is just.. *speechless*

And hmmm... does Kade have some other motive?

Loved the update KK.. update sooon😳

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 32

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Awesome update Di

loved it

Ryan is in so much pain..

Zara is worried for him. n she's in love with him..

Eve is taking care!

Jenny.. loved her concern! so sweet

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 I was feeling so bad for Poor Ryan! 😭 He litreally begged to be not to taken away from Zara!! He really cares about her.. But then whipped wid a Zypher.. Thrice! Lord.. That must have hurt!! But syill Ryan is contended that he will go back to Zara.. Seems like Zara too is getting accustomed to her.. Poor gurl got so scared hearing abour his accident..😔 Eve is right! The lines have been crossed.. Zara is falling for him and Ryan too is giving in!! This Kade seems suspicious.. Thanxx fr pm! Continue Soon.

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