Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Finally am hereee!😳

Sorry, it took a while to comment.. anyhooo coming back to the update!

Such a well-written update👍🏼

Ahh I love how you mention their childhood.. and minute details like her wobbly handwriting when she was a little girl😳 that was so well written!

And then of course, the curt Jenny! Hehe, she proper interviewed him.. but of course he passed and he is in!😃

Hehe he couldn't help sneaking back into her room even after they said goodnight😳 I like the little scene by the bed too.. the little pearl necklace sigh!

Ah so Lucian knows😕 Their lives are obviously in danger now.. do write more soon! Waiting to see Zara and Ryan's relationship develop further.😳

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

well, it was another god chapter indeed.

Ryan got an official entry in Zara's house and it was so easy! being an Angel he knows how to convince people and he just played his little trick there.so easy,na? hehe..😆

And Zara's addressing him 'my Angel ' definitely she is right,though she is oblivious to it...and being her guardian Angel his long 19 years and eight months...it was beautifully described... seeing the little devil growing up...i really loved to see her through his eyes.

finally he made a protective shield for her, and Lucian is going to make his first move...it's getting interesting jaani!!

keep writing😊

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

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unres! I am sooo sorry it took me this long!

Anyway I am back now! I must say I am loving the pace of the story very very much... so much happened in this chapter.

First of all.. love their lessons at night hehee.

And then that Kade.. I knew he was trouble when you introduced him!

I loved how Jenny knew that Ryan was troubled and that something was bothering him..

Oh oh oh and u mentioned HP!!!! I was like aaahhh HP HP HP!!🤪

"Something that happens just for some unknown reason. Who wants a reason?" this line is so true!!

And then the scene at the pub.. the little one between Zara and Ryan was so

I knew they were gonna get into trouble! And u know when he left her alone for a little while .. I was like hmm he's just worrying for nothing.. it's just for a while. But then she ended up getting hurt. He killed a man!! I did NOT expect that 😲😲

And then he had to leave her.. that part made me a little emotional I hope he gets back to her soon!

This is going really well KK! Continue sooon🤗

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow di...

It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Awesome...

The whole chapter is superb..

Beautiful...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Wonderfully Written...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for PM

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

This chapter thirlled me to the core.
Woah ! What a fantastic piece of writing.
I could only think of Ryan and Zara ! My anticipation! How will everything go Now? as it wouldn't surely go the way it was going.
Really feeling bad for Ryan...the guardian angel ? Skip it! Angels crying??

Do continue soon!
Thanks for the PM.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Me hates you! How could you do this to Ryan?? A gaurdian angel was crying...God he is now having human emotions which will only aggrevate the pain! Oh I so hte you!!

And why do I smell something fishy in that Kate?? And hell Lucian too is close! Oh why? My Ryan!!

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Awsumm Update Heli Di..😊 Lucy!!! 🤣🤣 She is so intrested in knowing what is happening between Ryan-Zara ki detention me chali gyi..🤣 But I really adore Lucy-Ryan-Zara's frndship! So they are going for clubbing!! Sum ppl tried to force Zara.. Why am I sensing Satan's hand in this?? Awwiee! Felt really bad for Ryan! 😭 Eve took care of Zara! And why do I feel sumthing is wrong wid this Kade? Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!