Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Awsumm Update Heli Di..😊 So Ryan wud only be able to protect Zara till she turns 20! But hows it possible? Wont Lucifer get her then? Ryan went to Miachel for Answers but before he cud get them Lucifer's men tried to break into his protection. He killed 3 of them but the 4th one managed to break in and wud harm Zara if Eve wasnt there! Eve Died..😔 Thats Sad! She was really a good frnd to Ryan. Zara saw it all! Aww..Their first kiss..❤️ Lets See Ab kya Syappe hote hain!! Thanxx fr pm.. Continuee Soon Di.

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Aliya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Awesome, i love it. Really different concept.
Keep writing

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Awesome update Di

loved it

Eve-Ryan.. nice convo.. their friendship is really beautiful.. Eve helped Ryan everytime.. till her last breath.. Ryan lost his best friend😭😔 *cry*

Ryan will protect Zara only till 20 years.. why.. he went to seek answers from Mike.. but din't get them..

Ryan was really angry..

Lucian's minions got into the house trying to get Zara..

Eve saved her.. n died..

Ryan reached in time..

ohh.. Zara saw it.. she came to know that he is really an angel..

their first kiss..

aww.. so beautifull..

but now what will happen??

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Wow superb
just amazing love it
awesome update n thanx

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

''we'll see heaven together.i promise i will never leave you alone.'' emotions and scenes well knit and a beautiful update.thanks for the pm.😊

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Kk meri Kitabi Kidaa😛🤗

Nooo you killed Eve .. no no nooo

I skipped to the middle.. as always😛 Soo... Zara's 20th birthday is approaching.. which means they'll be separated? Nooo!!

And that attack in the classroom was so unexpected... But thankfully Ryan and Eve could both protect them.. hmmm wonder what would have happened otherwise😕

And what what what? Zara saw him!! She saw that he was an angel... I can imagine what went through her mind at that time.. thinking that he had just been hanging around with her because he was her protector.

And then... the first kiss.. hayeee😳😳😳 The much needed assurance to her that he really did care for her, that he really did love her.😳 Beautiful part

Beautiful update KK... 🤗

Do update sooonnn!

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Oh wow that was amazing di
Superb
Love it

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

What was... 😲😲😲😲 .Rubbing my eyes...😲😲😲😲
Kunn?? you... you just... you penned down the first kiss???😲😲😲

Anyways... It was amazing, beautiful, awesome!!👏

lucian and gods had a deal, Ryan lost his friend... Zara is a sparegoat...and finally that kiss!!! you killed it!!

Do continue...

Keep writing.

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kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

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904129

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Awsum Update Di..😊 Poor Ryan and Zara..😔 Both are Hurt! Ohooo.. Ryan tried to sacrifice his life in the The Eternal Flame Of Life..😭 He was hurt when Zara accused him of not loving her.. Thankfully Michael came to Rescue.. Ryan has broken all his immortal vows surely. Thanxx fr pm.. Continue Soonz!

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