Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Dear Kunchu,

This story seems to be really nice!

So one thing must be said... you are good in supernatural eh?

I liked the way you have described the minute details...

And Aunt Jenny... hmm...

Not bad... truly...

Really liked the entire set up of the characters and ppl out there...

And yes... Ryan too... he's nice...

About his stuff... the 19 years and 8 months... awesome connection...

I can smell something here... hihi...

Keep up the awesome work...

Loads of Luv,

Shree

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Wonderful Part!
So aunt Jenny approved Ryan as paying guest!
That was nice part!
Loved the minute details about Zara from Ryans point of view.
So Lucian was waiting for Zara specially Zara for that long time???
And he said another guardian Angel? Means there were others in Earth too.
I am more curious about the treaty!
And loved the little moments Zara and Ryan shared not to forget his protective actio and the power he streamed into the Pearl!
Really nice.
Continue soon!
And its in wattpad , Woww!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

So with this I officially make an entry here...fiction, especially woven around an impossible love caught between the danglings of superlative bests and worsts is always a treat to reader. And this is surely no less than one! I really don't remember as ro when I began reading stuffs on the very genre but yeah as of now this is one of my favorite to pick and choose from. As I told you before myth from any corner of the world surely gives you thrill compared to no other. And here we have one such in the offering!!

Ryan the gaurdian angel who somehow is cursed to choose a side and Zara a mere mortal dwelling in the oblivion makes it for this heavy churning of the relatively calm ocean. Also there is no saying where this entire event will lead too. And honestly it was a welcomed change to begun from a point of view of a man, rather an angel who has no idea abput the reality that slowly creeping up. His relation with Zara in his own personified absentia is something that caught my attention. Its not really easy to write that notch withoit letting the melonchaly seep in...but it showed no such sign of it and that is what was brilliant!!

So the battle is already going on in the respective frontiers; now question is how long will the reason can be or would be hidden? The second chapter too was pretty amazing! I thought Ryan would take time to come out...so that was pretty fast. Anyways that surely would now mess things up and I am glad that he is a tenant at Jenny's...a smooth, quick, clean and precise transition there!!!

I must applaud you for selecting the names! Especially Micheal amd Lucian. In the myth Micheal was the Archangel who cursed Satan to be locked in Hell while Lucian was his son who had tried avenging the humiliation by shedding true blood! Hmmm...I believe we have sweet surprises coming up!! :D

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Cont Sooon
Thsnks fot the PM

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904129

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awsumm Update Heli Di..😊 As Im a fan of Supernatural(The Series) this surely gives me the thrill of Michael, Lucifer, God And The Archangels! Even The Deamons..(Satan's Supporters) U have beaitifully woven the relationship of a Mortal Zara and an Archangel Ryan who is her guardian angel! I love their bond...!! ❤️❤️ Plus the impossible love-story too wud be Treat!! 😉 I love the fact that After Zara, even Jenny has started trusting him.. Afterall he is a charming angel! 😳 And I like Jenny, she is a woman of few words but still loves Zara.. And I love how Zara calls him My Angel..!! ❤️ The part where she asks ki how does he knoes that she sleeps in Maths Class was cutee..❤️ Ryan got trapped there for a second..😆 The last part where he created a protective sheild around the house and created a power flow in Zara's pendent was beautiful..❤️ So here cums Satan! And he is all hands on for Zara..But why?? Thanxx fr pm..Continue Soonz..

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Delusional Minx

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awesome update
loved it
beautifully written
do continue soon
thanks for pm

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Wow di...

It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Awesome...

The whole chapter is superb..

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm..

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

di no words from me!!!!!!awesome update...

the terrace scene i cant imagine...zara like a hero...awe!!!!

ryan...angel...so cute...

loved it so much...

waiting for next next updates...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

here comes a treat from my Heli
like all the fictions u create magic with ...
this one is also taking me on a joy ride

as I said early also I loved th way u shaped jenny' s character

infact all the characters are created so beautifully
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the connection of Ryan with Zara right from childhood ws written so beautifully

the treaty of gods is yet a mystery

bt let's wait and watch

continue soon Heli

love
Birdie

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