Chahat ke Dhun: A Musical Series (IshRa) Akhri Dhun pg 24

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maanvir

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Frnds!

"I am no Nandu Bheede, But mere Dimag me bahut Keede hain" this is becoming my tag line now. Mere Dimag ke Keede ne aaj phir mujhe kaata. Aur is ka ilaaj sirf aur sirf YHM forum me hai. So I am here.

I started with an SS, then penned an RPF, went ahead with an OS. Thanks to u readers. Now I am here with something different. This is basically an SS on current track. Every update will be based on a song so I have called it a Musical Series.

IshRa have made me so crazy that everytime I listen to a song I imagine them there and I feel the lyrics fit them perfectly. This Musical Series is the result of my insanity. So please bear with me.

As it is a musical series, i will call each part as DHUN.

Dhun 1 - Kuch Is Tarah - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116051026

Dhun 2 - Dono Judke Juda - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116061578

Dhun 3 - Maine Socha Na Tha - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116068280

Dhun 4 - Kya bebasi, Kya majbooriyan - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116091349

Dhun 5 - Sawaar Loon - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116111617

Dhun 6 - Bhare Naina - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116115247

Dhun 7 - Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat me - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116177781

Dhun 8 - Tere Ishq Me - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116223847

Dhun 9 - Mere Humsafar Mere Paas Aa - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=9

Dhun 10 - Tauba Mai Vyah Karke Pachtaya - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116263472

Dhun 11 - Kya Karen Kya Na Karen - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116297725

Dhun 12(A) - Atrangi Tarkeebein - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116443802

Dhun 12(B) - Atrangi Tarkeebein - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116483501

Dhun 13 (A, B, C) - Chahat ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=17

Dhun 13 (D) - Chahat ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=18

Dhun 13 (E,F,G,H) - Chahat Ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=19

Dhun 13 (I,J) - Chahat Ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=20

Dhun 13 (K) - Chahat Ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=21

Dhun 13 (L) - Chahat Ke Dhun - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4226671/chahat-ke-dhun-a-musical-series-ishra-akhri-dhun-pg-24?pn=22

Dhun 14 - Teri Meherbani - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116866949

Dhun 15 - Hum Apke Dil Me Rehte Hain - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116871021

Dhun 16 - Yeh Hai Mohabbatein - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116972270

Let me know what u think of this concept.

As always Complaints and Compliments both appreciated.

If u wud lyk to read my previous work, here are the links

IshRa SS: Juda Hoke Bhi Tu Mujhme Kahin Baki Hai

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4214013/juda-hoke-bhi-tu-epilogue-pg-11

RPF: HE needs a break

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4225152/he-needs-a-break-rpf

An IshRaRu OS: My Dad's SOUND sleep

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4225365/my-dads-sound-sleep-an-ishraru-os

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maanvir

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Dhun 1

Kuch Is Tarah

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjk-nmsXYhw

She had been crying and he was restless. Raman Kumar Bhalla, the smart CEO didn't know what to do. He had seen her crying before. He reacted differently every time. He had been indifferent in the beginning (adoption cancellation), abused her later (Prateek engagement fiasco), then left her shattered (Param molestation). He hated her then and such response was obvious.

He had seen her crying again. He became her strength (Amma accident). She cried yet again and his response Tragedy me Comedy (license revoke). He had befriended her and his response was of a friend in need.

But today was very different. Why you wonder? It's not hate or friendship anymore. He loves her, she is his life now. He doesn't know what to do. He sends his mother to her thinking that a woman can ease her pain. He was wrong, she hasn't stopped crying yet.

She was sitting on his bed, holding her knees and sobbing uncontrollably. He couldn't take it anymore. He went near her and kept a hand on her shoulder. She jerked it off. She was so scared.

"Ishita...Mai hoon" he told her softly. For a moment she stopped, looked at him and started crying again.

"Mujhe ganda lag raha hai. Wo log mujhe choone ki koshish kar rahe the" she kept blabbering.

He sat next to her and took her in his arms. "Shhh...shhh...kuch nahi hua hai tumhe"

Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aanso tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de

He wiped her tears but could not stop a tear falling from his eye.

She looked at him. "Raman mujhe dar lag raha hai"

"Mai hoon tumhare sath"

He remembered the times she stood for him may it be Ruhi custody case, Adi's court case, Presidentship of New-Delhi entrepreneurship or Asia Business head. He was not always there for her.

Tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hai
Haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai

But this time he promised to stay. He promised to take away all her pain.

Jo bhi ghum hain yeh tere unhein tu mera pataa de

"Agar aap us waqt nahi aate to kya hota Raman" she said and cried again.

Mujhko toh tere chehre pe yeh gum nahin janchta

Jaayaz nahin lagta mujhe gum se tera rishta

"Kuch nahi hua hai Ishita. Now stop crying. Tumhare chehre pe ansoo achhe nahi lagte" he wiped her tears again.

Sun meri guzarish ise chehre se hataa de

He pleaded her to stop crying. He comforted her and made her lie down.

As he sat there caressing her head he wished all her pain came to him.

Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de

Aanso tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de

He waited till she was fast asleep. He softly pecked her forehead making sure not to disturb her and walked towards the couch with the satisfaction of being successful in taking away her pain.

As his lips curved in satisfaction a huge tear of realisation escaped his eye. The bliss of satisfaction was gone and the pain of realisation hit him hard.

---------- Dhun abhi baki hai------------

Do share ur thoughts after reading.

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PRACHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow this was brilliant
n emotional
n d song its beautiful

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Bful update

a new concept...

loved it

Thnks 4 pm

keep pming the updates

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 11 years ago

Bhagwan kare yeh keera timhe hamesha katte rahe...beautiful start...thank u fr ..continue soo

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Anu0517

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice update...

Emotional...

Thanks for PM..

Continue soon...

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Shimla Akkineni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice. Very emotional. Next part update soon. If possible pm me.

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful!👏 Thanks for the PM!😊
Great job! I like this idea a lot and I can't wait to see where you are going to take it!😃
Please do update soon.😉

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maanvir

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Dhun 2

Dono Judke Juda

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGVfpRJg28Q

The smile of satisfaction was replaced into a pain of realisation.

"Kis haq se mai tumhare dard tumse le sakta hun? Jabke tumhare har dard ki wajah mai hun. Mera parivar, mere bachhe, mera ateet aaj tak tumhari har dukh ki wajah bane hain" he did a self-talk.

"Sach hai ki mai tumse pyar karta hun. Bepanaah pyar. Magar mera pyar tumhe aur dukh pahunchayega. Mai apni khushi keliye tumhe gham nahi de sakta. Mai chaahkar bhi tumhe nahi paa sakta"

Hai dil ko teri aarzoo
Par main tujhe naa paa sakun
Hai dil ko teri justaju
Par main tujhe naa paa sakun

He walked towards her. Even after all the pain she suffered her face glow in the dark hour of the night, just as she came into his dark life a like a bright morning. "Par mai to tumhari zindagi me andheri raat ki tarah hun"

Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa

How he wished he could linger his lips on her glowing cheeks. Alas! His lips could only pray for her happiness but not feel her.

Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa

Madno...Mashuko...Dilbaro

He recalled the events of the day. How he wanted to spend time with her. He wanted to make this day special for her. He wanted to confess his feelings and dreamt of a beautiful future.

Kayi khwaab dil tujhko le kar sajaaye

How did he forget that fate was always cruel for him? Kismat saali kutti cheez hai, Kabhi bhi palat sakti hai

The fear of hurting her and losing her were equally painful. He had to let go either of them.

Par khauf yeh bhi kahin par sataaye
Ghar yeh bhi tootey toh phir hoga kya re
Mujhe raas aati hai khushiyaan kahan re

He decided the latter would be right to do. "Mere hisse ke gham tumhe sehne ki kya zaroorat hai? Kismat meri dagabaaz hai, isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai"

Kyon dil ko dukhana bewajah saajna ve
Kyon dil ko dukhana bewajah
Phir aansu bahaana ik dafa
Phir aansu bahaana ik dafa

Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa

"Tum hi to meri saanson me har dhadkan me ho. Meri har khushi tum se hai"

Tu hi to har pal bandha hai
Lamhon ki inn zanjeeron mein
Tu hi to har dum raha hai
Khwaabon ki har taabeeron mein
Tu hi to har din dikha hai
Dhundli ujli tasveeron mein
Tere hi to hai khusboo mujh mein haan saajnaa ve
Tere hi to hai khusboo mujh mein haan
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah

"Mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakta par tumhare sath bhi nahi reh sakta. Mai har kadam par tumhara sath doonga par tumhare paas nahi reh sakta. Ajeeb kashmakash hai. Lekin tumhari khushi keliye mujhe ye rishta thodna hoga"

Haan tera saaya toh main hoon
Par sang tere naa reh sakun
Haan iss safar mein toh main hoon
Par sang tere naa ruk sakun
Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa

He walked back to the couch.

This time the smile of satisfaction, that had transformed into pain of realisation, made him to take a firm decision.

With that the events of the day took a toll on him and slipped into deep slumber. As a pair of eyes closed, another pair of eyes opened.

What was in store for her? Satisfaction? Realisation? Decision? or something else.

Keep tuned kyunki Dhun abhi baki hai

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I can't tell you how much I love this song and now I love it more. Because it reminds me of IshRa. Tel me how u found this update.

Suggestions are welcome. Complaints and Compliments both appreciated.😊