Chahat ke Dhun: A Musical Series (IshRa) Akhri Dhun pg 24 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
wah wah, mazaa aa gaya! Now, what else does Raman want to do? Can't wait..
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx buddy for liking my suggestion. yesterday i was listning radio nd suddenly a song came, dheere dheere gaao haule haulee gaao tere liye piya... yup this song is from zubeidaa. such a lovly song yaar. while listening this song my idiot mind again started to imagine ishra. so i thought to suggest u abt this song. plz giv me ur views on thhs song also.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

thanx buddy for liking my suggestion. yesterday i was listning radio nd suddenly a song came, dheere dheere gaao haule haulee gaao tere liye piya... yup this song is from zubeidaa. such a lovly song yaar. while listening this song my idiot mind again started to imagine ishra. so i thought to suggest u abt this song. plz giv me ur views on thhs song also.



lovely suggestion again gal...I hv heard dat song too...n I used to keep humming dat song...
bt I cant promise u of including the song in the series...my series is has almost reachd its end...so sorry darling...bt anywys thnks fr d suggestions. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dhun 14

Chahat Ke Dhun

"Ek minute Ishita. I am not done yet"

Ishita stopped in her tracks. By the time she turned back, Raman was already on the stage, his back facing her. She wondered what he was upto now.

Romi had dimmed the lights by then. The atmosphere was illuminated with the harmonious playing of the guitar.

Hai Saaz Tu, Tera Tarj Main
Tu Hai Dawa, Aur Marz Main

Dildar Tu, Khud Garz Main

With that he turned to face her, holding the guitar in his hands and singing

(Imagine that as Raman)

Hai Geet Tu, Tere Lafz Main
Tu Hai Dua, Aur Farz Main
Azaad Tu, Aur Karz Main

She was awestruck. She could not decide what touched her heart. Was it the effortless playing of the guitar or the words that left his mouth? Was it his new avatar or his eyes that conveyed that he genuinely meant each word he said? She was still in daze when a few happy tears ran on her alabaster cheeks.

Hai Shaam Tu, Tareef Main

He was in front of her in few steps and wiped the tears on her cheeks with the next line

Tu Chain Hai, Takleeef Main

He saw lovingly at her

Tujh Se Mila Toh Paa Liya, Har Cheez Main

He threw the guitar towards Mihir who continued playing it while Raman offered her his hand asking for a dance

Hai Khwaab Tu, Taabeer Main,

Maana Tujhe Taqdeer Main

She willingly gave her hand in his

and he sang the next line thanking her for accepting his hand

Tera Hua Iss Bheed Mein, Iss Bheed Mein

He took her to the stage

Hai Teri Meherbaani

The lights came back as he sang the next line

Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye

She was amazed at the perfect tuning of song and the lights. She had to admit that her husband was a PERFECT PLANNER.

He twirled her around

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

She landed in his arms now.

He slowly swayed along with her

Hai Tu Hi Toh Hai Wafa,
Tu Baarish Meri, Savera Mera

He turned around her, embraced her from back and swayed along

Main Tera Hoon Raasta,
Hai Kashti Teri, Kinara Mera

Now he went around her

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye

He stopped in front of her holding her hands in his

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

The song had ended, so had the music but the moment had not ended for the two lovebirds. They were lost in each other's eyes. Raman, mechanically lifted her hands to his lips and kissed them. Her eyes were all for him and a wide smile plastered on her lips. He could not help noticing her pink lips that were inviting him to lock them with his. Forgetting the surroundings he inched closer to her.

Mrs. Bhalla & Mrs.Iyer covered their mouth with one hand and their grandkids eyes with the other. Others had their mouth hung while Romi had his eyes glued to see what next. Everyone present had lost their sense except one who intervened timely stop his brother and lovely sister from embarrassment

"Bhai family show hai. Control" Mihir said immediately climbing onto the stage and placing a hand on Raman's shoulder.

Raman & Ishita jerked away. Raman ran his hand in his hairs with embarrassment. Ishita did not dare to meet anyone's eyes, so kept looking down, her cheeks flushed.

"Pehle hi patha hotha ke tumhara ye irada hai to lage hathon honeymoon suite bhi book kara lethe. Hotel wale discount bhi de dete. Itne chote family function keliye itna bada hall jo book karwaya hai!" Bala winked at Raman.

"Bala Ruhi aur Shravan bhi hain yahan pe. Bachhon ke samne ye kaisi batein kar rahe ho?" Raman said trying to save his skin.

"Bada jaldi yad aya ke yahan pe bachhe bhi hain. Shukr manao ke mai waqt pe agaya. Warna bachhe to uncensored trailer dekhne wale the Yeh Hai Mohabbatein' ka" Mihir teased Raman.

"Ok mere baap! Thank you" Raman joined his hands in front of him. Ishita was preparing to escape when Raman held her hand and turned towards the teasing duo "Ab kya tum donon stage khali karne ki kripa karoge? Mujhe Ishita se kuch kehna hai" he begged.

"Mujhe kuch kehna hai

Mujhe kuch kehna hai" Mihir sang annoying him more

He earned a deadly glare from Raman. Scared of his brother, he was about to make an exit when Bala stopped him. His evil intentions clear from his gesture "Ek shart pe hum stage se utrenge"

"Kya hai?" Raman asked annoyed.

"Ye Musical Concert hai. Hai na Mihir?" Bala asked dramatically and Mihir agreed.

"Oh mujhe to patha hi nahi tha. Thanks for the kind information" Raman commented sarcastically "Ab aage?" he said gritting his teeth

"To tumhe job hi kehna hai wo tumhe gaake bolna hoga" Bala challenged him

"Wah Bala! Kya idea hai. I like it" Mihir supported him.

"Ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho. Dono abhi utarte ho ya..."

"No...no...no...no...challenge to tumhe accept karna hi padega. Kahin Punjabi Madrasiyon se dar to nahi gaye" Bala knew to hit the right buttons.

"Bhai ab to apko challenge accept karna hi padega. Baat hamare pind ki hai. Come on Bhai you can do it"

"Come on Bhai dikha do" Romi screamed from his place. Simmi whistled.

"Shava puttar shava. In madrasiyon ko dikha de ke hum kisise nahi darte. Chak de phatte" Mrs.Bhalla did a bhangra.

"Hum bhi dekhte hain ke Raman kaise gake bolta hai" it seemed Mrs.Iyer had taken the challenge seriously.

"Come on Papa! You can do it" Ruhi joined the cheer league.

"To Raman kya kehte ho? Challenge accepted?" Bala questioned.

Ishita was continuously begging her jiju to stop with her eyes. But now the matter had changed into a war. So there was no looking back.

Raman removed his over-coat, raised the sleeves upto his elbow as if getting ready for arm-wrestling and said

"Challenge Accepted"

Stay tuned Dhun Abhi Baki Hai

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So how was the Dhun?😛


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Posted: 11 years ago

@aarohi26...this dhun is for u darling...i hope u vl like it

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Dhun 15

Hum Apke Dil Me Rehte Hain

"Challenge Accepted"

Wooo the cheering, the clapping and whistling could be heard. It was making Ishita nervous. She pleaded Raman with her eyes that all this was not needed. The determined look in his eyes did not help but made her all the more nervous. She was fiddling with the corner of her Saree when suddenly Raman kneeled in front of her and started singing

Pehle Kabhi Na Humne Kaha
Lo Aaj Sanam Ye Kahte Hain

Wooo...another round of cheering and whistling...Ishita looked at Raman who was singing with all honesty

Pehle Kabhi Na Humne Kaha
Lo Aaj Sanam Ye Kahte Hain

He held her hand in his and continued

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain
Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

Elephant size butterflies in her stomach were giving her goosebumps. He had finally confessed and her heart started thudding louder and louder.

He repeated the lines still in same position

Pehle Kabhi Na Humne Kaha
Lo Aaj Sanam Ye Kahte Hain
Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

It was more like asking her I Love You. Do You Love Me Too?

She nodded her head assenting and added

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

Yeyyy! She could hear Ruhi jumping in victory.

He stood up. Cupped his hands for making a prayer and looked up saying

Sach Ho Gayi Dua

Apna Milan Hua

She brought her hand forward asking for a promise

Ab Na Kabhi Rahna Juda

Milke Chalo Wada Karo

He kept his hand on hers promising looking into her eyes

Chhup Jau Aankho Mein
Bas Jau Saanson Mein
Dhadkan Ki Hai Sada

Her eyes showed the fear of separation. She kept a hand on her heart and said

Ek Pal Kabhi Jo Dur Hue
Dard Hajaro Sahte Hai

He grabbed her hand kept on his heart and sang

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

She reciprocated his feelings by repeating his actions and lines

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

He cupped her cheeks reassuring that he would never leave her

Honge Kabhi Hum Na Juda
Rag Rag Mein Lahu Banke Bahte Hain

She hugged him saying

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

He hugged her back

Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain

Hurr hurr hurr Toshiji beamed victoriously as IshRa broke the hug. Everyone clapped and cheered loudly.

Raman took out the bracelet from his pocket "Ishita aaj ise apne hathon se pehnakar deal pakka seal kar do"

Ishita's expressions changed "Nahi Raman! Ye bracelet bahut manhoos hai. Jab se khareeda hai kuch na kuch bura hua hai"

"Nahi Ishita. Ye bracelet manhoos nahi bilkul tumhari tarah ziddi hai"

"Kuchh bhi?"

"Sach keh raha hun. Jab tum meri zindagi me ayi to mai tumhe khud se door karna chahta tha. Par jitna bhi door karta tum utne paas ati. Tumhe jitna todne ki koshish karta tum utna mazboot banti. Phir na chahte hue bhi jab tumhe apni zindagi me le aya phir bhi door rahne ki koshish ki. Jab chaha aur apnane ki koshish ki to meri majbooriyon ne tumse door kiya. Magar ab wada hai mai tumhe kabhi apne se door nahi jane doonga. Aur jab tak meri sansein chalengi ye bracelet mere hath me hoga. Isliye mai chahta hunke tum mujhe ise apne hathon se pehnao. Aur is baar no compromise, no complications"

Raman's honesty touched her. She silently took the bracelet and tied it around his wrist.

She smiled.

"Deal to Pakka hogaya. Ab contract bhi sign kar lein?"

"Contract?" She asked raising her eyes in confusion.

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god thank u thank uuuy. yaaar i cant beleive ths u really did it. truly yaar u xsprsssed ishra emotions in vry beautiful way sacchi kahun na toh beyonddd my imaginationsss. sacchi mein yaar ab toh yeh song mera aur bhi zyada favourite ho gya only bcoz of uuu. thanx agan budddy. nd gud going. waiting for nxt part. lge rho buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this was awesome
song beautiful
n specially d story of bracelet
so sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update, thanks so much for the PM!👏

I love it, especially the family involvement in it all!😊

Can't wait for your next update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dhun 16

Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

"Hamari shadi ek contract thi. Sirf Ruhi keliye. Ab mai us contract ko renew karna chahta hun. Aur iski ek hi condition hogi"

"Kya?"

"Ke hum hamesha ek doosre se pyar karte rahenge aur ek doosre ka sath kabhi nahi chodenge"

She grinned wide.

"To contract manzoor hai?"

"Haan"

"To chalein?"

"Kahan?"

"Contract sign karne"

"Ab aap mujhe court to nahi le jaoge na?" she asked bewildered.

"Chalo to sahi" he dragged her with him.

"Aap log khade khade yahan kya kar rahe hain. Chaliye. Mujhe witnesses ki bhi zarurat padegi" he gestured his family to follow and they followed enthusiastically.

They came to a halt in front of a beautifully decorated Wedding Mandap.

Raman

Weds

Ishita

Their names were beautifully engraved in gold on a red background. She looked at herself now realizing why she was made to wear the Red wedding saree.

She shook her head meaning You are just perfect. Raman winked and shrugged meaning I know that.

"Panditji muhurat shuru hone me kitna waqt hai?"

"Bilkul sahi samay pe aye ho beta. Shubh muhurat bas abhi shuru hua hai"

"To chalein?" he asked her.

She nodded her head. Vandu and Mihika held her arms and took her to the Mandap while Romi and Mihir joined Raman.


Shravan brought Varmala for Ishita and Ruhi brought it for Raman. The song played as they exchanged garlands and finished the initial rituals

Dil kahin rukta nahi

Dil kahin rukta nahi

Chalta hi jaye teri ore

Dil mere sunta nahi

Flowers were showered on them as they took pheres

Saari fizaon mein hain,

Meheki hawaon mein hain,

Tera aur mera fasana

Janoo main bhi yeh

Jaane hai tu bhi yeh

Jaane yeh saara zamana

They finished the phere and sat down

Kabhi kam na hongi yeh chahatein,
Pal Pal bade yeh hai mohabbatein

They smiled at each other

Hasne laga sehra

Khilne lagi kaliyan

Ghar angaan galiyan

Raman filled vermillion in her partition

Do haseen tan man ka,
Yeh haseen bandhan hai
Jhoom uthi hai ghadiyan suhaani

"Ye vivah sampann hua" Panditji announced. Toshiji and Madhavi joined their IshRa's heads together

Yeh kabhi tho hona tha
In dilon ka khona tha
Ban gayi hai prem kahani

They took elder's blessings.

Ruhi stood in front of them and signaled with her fingers to come closer. They smiled and came closer to kiss her cheeks, when she signaled them to stop and pointed towards her feet. They looked at her asking what.

"Mai to Dadi Amma hun na. To Dadi Amma ka ashirwad nahi lena?" she asked hands on hips.

They both smiled and silently obliged to her demand. She kept hands on their heads and said "Sada Suhagan Raho"

Dua hai nibhe inki chahatein

They kissed her and took her in a perfect family hug

Pal pal bade yeh hai mohabbtein

Click Mihir, Mihika, Romi captured the picture perfect moment in their cameras.

Kabhi kam na hongi yeh chahatein,
Pal Pal bade yeh hai mohabbatein

--------------------------- Probably the Akhri Dhun-----------------------------------

Thanks Buddies for the unconditional love and support throughout the series. I am overwhelmed and honestly as this series has ended I have turned emotional😭

Share ur views about this part...Thanks again

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Posted: 11 years ago
woww.. i'm 1st cmntg here.. but on last prt.. 😒
1st of al..
sory bcz.. i've not cmntd earlier.. i thougt i'll do it later after readng al updts .. but it cnt hpnd..

I've readed al prts.. loved al prts nd songs too...(sng slectn was super bst 👏 👍🏼 , Jane b de jo b hua al famly singing it nd suports raman.. it was awsme ❤️ ) specialy few last prts... 🥳
after ishita cnfsn scene in airport...
nd d last prt was...(9 wrds 2 descrb it.. seriously yar i'm spechles.. ) U knw u've cmpltd my dream wish.. i'm on top of d World on cloud 9... 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
franlky sayng ,, i want in real shw also dat dey shud remarry after confsn scne or when mihir-mihika marige hapnd.. hope so 2 c it..
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It was Beautiful story... 👏
nd ur updts wid sngs.. 😳😉
i loved it nd ejoyd readng it.. smytyms wid sngs also which u mentiond.. 😆 😉
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