Chahat ke Dhun: A Musical Series (IshRa) Akhri Dhun pg 24 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Poor Raman !
But good for Ishu- Make him suffer a little more I say!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hi Frnds!
I cant thank u all enough for being a great support throughout the series. I had never expected such response. You all have made me happy by reading my works, liking them and sharing ur valuable opinion.
I guess now its pay back time. I am going to wind up this series in a part or two. So I thought why not ask for your suggestions and write something on it. I would be glad to that. I already have something planned up but will still try to consider ur suggestions. So please suggest some good dhuns.

I want to add a short RuMan (Ruhi Raman) scene too. So please suggest a dhun for that.

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
lovely,BEST BEST BEST ...poor RAMAN
love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
hey nice ff...continue soon...n pm me wid ur future upd8s
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww poor Raman
kis ne bola tha jkr se panga lene
I feel for u
nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gusthaki maaf krde from hey baby to mono dying jkr n our angle helping her dad
n meri duniya from same movie for ruman or ishraru
its my POV decision is u r s
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Mere humsafar what an apt and beautiful song. Loved it.
Abt suggestion, i think ' papa mere papa' will be good. Looking forward to your next update and dhun.:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

gusthaki maaf krde from hey baby to mono dying jkr n our angle helping her dad
n meri duniya from same movie for ruman or ishraru
its my POV decision is u r s



lovely dhuns...vl include either of thrm fr sure...thnx buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaram

Mere humsafar what an apt and beautiful song. Loved it.
Abt suggestion, i think ' papa mere papa' will be good. Looking forward to your next update and dhun.:)



From Mai Aisa Hi Hoon? Same pinch dear...I hd d same song on my mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhun 11

Kya Karein Kya Na Karein

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HG0yT7nweq8

"Soch beta jaldi soch" he kept thinking.

"Kya karun? Kaise manaun?"

Kya kare kya na kare yeh keyse mushkil hai

Koi to bataa de iska haal o mere bhai

"Ek hi tareeqa hai ke usne jis tarah apne dil ki bath keh di ab tub hi keh de"

Ke ek taraf to us se pyaar kare hum

"Par ye itna asaan thodi na hai. Wo Jhansi Ki Rani hai. Upar se chidi hui hai. Koi bhi galti hogayi na tujhse wahin kaat dalegi"

Aur usko hi ye kehne se dare hum

"Business ke bade bade moves lena bahut asaan hai. Par dil ki bath kehne ka tareeqa sochna is not my cup of tea. Par ab karun kya?"

Aap to kisi se poochoge nahi. The great Raman Bhalla ka ego jo hurt hojayega' her words rang in his ears.

"Ego ka jo hona haiwo ho jayega. Magar tumse kahan nahi to meri life ki jo waat lagegi uska kuch nahi kar sakta. Kisise pooch hi le beta ke kya karna hai"

Kya kare kya na kare yeh keyse mushkil hai

Koi to bataa de iska haal o mere bhai

"Ab gharwalon ne to uske sath coalition government bana li hai. Ab kisi baharwale se hi madad leni padegi"

"Mihir se poochta hoon. Wo to dil ke mamle me expert hai. Akhir JKR ki behen ko pata liya hai usne. Sahi hai. Mihir se poochta hoon" he was about to dial his number when he remembered "Kya karne jaraha tha Raman? Bhool gaya pichli baar Mihir ke plan ki wajah se Madrasan aur zyada naraz hogayi thi. Is baar risk nahi le sakta. Wrong choice"

"Aur koun hai? Hmmm...Bala? Pagal hai kya? Bala se poochega? Wahi FIRST STEP wala idea phir se de dega. Tab to Ishita ne chemist ki galti samajhli thi, par is baar us packet ke sath tujhe bhi dustbin me daal degi. Nahi nahi. Bala out"

"Ab koun bacha? Koi jo Ishita ko achhe se janta ho. Jo janta ho ke Ishita kis bath pe khush hojayegi. Ummm...aisa to ek hi hai. Mr. Chalta Phirta Encyclopedia. Dil pe pathhar rakh ke use call kar hi le beta" he looked for Mani's number in his contact list.

"Par bolega kya? Hello Abhi teri best friend jisse tu pyar karta hai use mai bhi pyar karta hun. To please confession me meri madad kardo.' Aur wo mujhe bolega ke mai kitna bura husband hunk e apni wife ko hi I Love You nahi bol sakta. Aur khud is mouke pe chouka maar diya to teri pyar ki nayya to doob gayi beta"

"Beta pichli baar jo Best Pati banne ka torture kam tha jo is bar bhi bhugathna chahta hai"

"Ab sirf Bhagwan hi meri madad kar sakta hai. Par wo bhi to us Madrasan ki side hoga. Akhir uski favourite jo hai"

"Isse achha tha ke pehle hi batha detha. Hen Party me jane se pehle bol hi detha. Seedhe seedhe bol detha to tera kya jaatha"

Roz roz hum, sochta yahin,

Aaj humko woh agar mil jaye kahin,

To aisa bolega (saala) waisa bolega,

Khullam khulla us pe dil ka raaz hum kholega

"Hmmm...Par kaise bolta. USko dekh kar to teri bolti hi band hogayi thi. By God sexy lag rahi thi"

Woh saamne chamakti hai, saans hi atakti hai,

Aur yeh zabaan jaati hai fisal

"Ab purani batein bhool ja ye soch ke karna kya hai"

Tho kya kare kya na kare yeh keyse mushkil hai

Koi to bataa de iska haal o mere bhai

Ke ek taraf to us se pyaar kare hum

Aur usko hi ye kehney se daray hum

"Itna soch kya raha hai? Kounsi badi bath hai? Jake khullam khulla keh de Oh Jhansi Ki Rani! I Love You' Itna hi to bolna hai. Ginti ke saadhe paanch shabd hain. Bol de jake" he stood up confidently his chest rising.

Koi badi baat nahin,

Humain kehna tha jo bhi,

Woh to hum yoohin kehte magar

"Zyada se zyada kya hoga?" he shrugged "Jhansi ki Rani bahut gusse me hai. Laath maarke bhaga degi" his chest fell and he fell onto the couch again.

Phir bhi kaha nahin,

wajah iski hai yahi,

Bas inkaar se hum ko tha dar

"Kya mushkil hai yaar! Nahi bola to gussa hogayi. Ab bolne jaunga to aur gussa hojayegi"

Ab kahe ya na kahe,

kahan kahe kab kahe,

Soch soch main hi woh gayi nikal

"Kuch special kar Raman! Kuch aisa ke Jhansi Ki Rani ka mood bhi sahi hojaye aur wo maan bhi jaaye. Par aisa kya karega"

Haan, Kya kare kya na kare yeh keyse mushkil hai

Koi to bataa de iska haal o mere bhaai

"Idea!" he rejoiced "Ab dekhta hun Jhansi Ki Rani kaise nahi manthi"

What has Raman planned for confession? Will he be able to put his plan into action?

Stay tuned Dhun Abhi Baki hai.

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Hope u enjoyed the dhun.

Plz suggest Dhuns for the next updates...

Thanks

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