Chahat ke Dhun: A Musical Series (IshRa) Akhri Dhun pg 24 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its ver nice and different.
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice. But too short. Dint feel wat u hv written. Only song lyrics I understood. Hope next Tim too long one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shimla532

Nice. But too short. Dint feel wat u hv written. Only song lyrics I understood. Hope next Tim too long one


I am keeping the updates short as every update is based on one song. I have already drafted the next few updates. will try to make the rest longer.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
wow again a beautiful work
awesome song
n d last line now I'm eagerly waiting for next dhoon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhun 3

Maine Socha Na Tha

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOnIyS7cs0s

When a pair of eyes closed, another pair of eyes opened. She sat up with a jerk. As her eyes fell on the sleeping form of her husband, she calmed down. He was facing her and she knew he had been looking at her all the time. She could not help but smile at his concern.


Indeed she had gone through hell but at the end of the day she found her heaven in his arms. She was amazed at how her life had taken a U-turn.


She recalled the occurence of similar events in her life. She remembered how he made her apologise to Adi for no fault of hers, he had blurted out the truth of their marriage in front of everyone when Param accused her but now things were different. He stood by her when Adi sent her to jail. This time when Param and his cheapster friends tried to harass her he became her comfort.

She sat on the floor near the couch, lovingly gazing at his face and recalling how he became the reason of her happiness.

Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

She never thought life could ever be so beautiful. A few months ago she had accepted what she thought was the bitter truth of her life. Happiness was never meant to her. She had always dreamt of a family but never believed she could ever have one. How wrong she was in assuming so!

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen

Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen

Maine Socha Na Tha


Now she had a family. She had an adorable daughter for whom she had married in the first place. Now priorities had changed. She was glad to have a loving husband. The way he looked at her gave her goosebumps. She wove infinite dreams when their eyes met. She lost her senses when he came closer.

Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagin

Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagin

Ek Din Is Tarah Hosh Kho Jayenge

Paas Aaye To Madhosh Ho Jayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha


She blushed crimson red. So many emotions were playing havoc in her body. She went to the balcony to shake off the havoc inside her.


A cold breeze hit her. She folded her arms and enjoyed the beautiful weather. She looked up at the dark sky decorated with shining stars just like her dark life was now adorned with happiness everywhere. She could not help admiring the beautiful moon that now resembled her bright and beautiful life.

Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai

Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hai

Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai

Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Baraat Hai


She felt the love in the air. It felt amazing to have fallen in love. Yes she was in love, not with him but with her life with him.

Ek Din Dil Ki Raahon Mein Apne Liye

Jal Uthenge Mohabbat Ke Itne Diye

Maine Socha Na Tha


In that moment she knew what she had to do. She thought she was aware of everything. But she was unaware. Unaware that moments ago, her husband recalled the same events.Unaware that while she rejoiced the memory, he regretted them. Unaware that while her realization took away all her pain, it had been extremely painful for him.

She closed the door to the balcony, admired her sleeping husband yet again and walked to her bed.

With a smile of satisfaction, on her realization, unaware of her husband's decision, she made plans for confession.

She had never felt so much at peace. Was her peace short-lived?

Keep tuned Dhun abhi baki hai

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Fingers crossed. I hope u enjoyed the update.

Please share ur thoughts, it wil help me improve.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice...beautiful words n beautiful songs...nice concept...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey this is one of my fev song n update was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow, this is really wonderful👍🏼
loved all 3 parts😃
superb dear⭐️
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Very nice. Hoping next part longer. Her thoughts very good about life n love she Hv with him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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falling in luv with ur Dhun,,,,,,nice song selection...and nice updates...👏

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