Chahat ke Dhun: A Musical Series (IshRa) Akhri Dhun pg 24 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
This is so great... beautiful and painful!😭

You did a great job but...😭😭😭

I guess we have to get through the pain to get to a stronger ISHRA right? I will try to be strong! *sniff* *sniff*

Terrific update- love the tags , especially that 'kya' moment... hope that Ishu comes back in full JKR mode and drags Raman to his senses. 😉

Can't wait for the next part- please do PM me again!😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its very intrstng...
im totlly in lov wid dis...
waitng fr nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Dhun 8
Tere Ishq Me

"Kya apko sach me koi farq nahi padta Raman? Kya sachmuch hamare beech kuch nahi badla?" she sat contemplating.


"Samajh nahi ata kis bath me vishwas karun? Us pyar par jo kal rath apki ankhon me nazar araha tha ya us nafrat pe jo apki ankhein aaj ugal rahi thi? Kal apki bathon me chupe us Iqrar par vishwas karun ya aaj ke inkar ko? Aisa kya hogaya jo aap ne mujhe ek pal me paraya kar diya?" she was not able to decide.


"Kaisi duvidha me daal diya hai Raman aapne! Mai apko apni dil ki bath bataun ya nahi? Kya aap meri bath sunkar mere paas rukoge ya phir mujhse aur door chale jaoge? kuch samajh me nahi araha ke mai kya karun"


"Par mai aise khamosh nahi baith sakti. Murugan please mujhe batao ke mai kya karun"


She quickly wiped her tears as something struck her mind. "Kisi se bath kar lethi hun jo meri dil ki bath samjhe aur mujhe bataye ke mai kya karun" she took out her phone but then stopped pondering.


"Par kisse bat karun? Amma aur Mummyji to pehle se hi meri wajah se pareshan hain, unhe bataungi to aur pareshan ho jayenge. Jiju? Nahi Jiju ko ye bath nahi bat sakti. Pichli baar Raman ko kitni galat salah di thi FIRST STEP ki" she laughed reminiscing the fool she had made out of herself.


"Mani se? Par wo is bath ko nahi samjhega. Wo to pehle se Raman ko pasand nahi karta. Use ek aur mouqa mil jayega MERE Raman ki shikayat karne ka. Nahi usse nahi bol sakti"


"Papaji to Raman par hi bhadak jayenge. Simmi bhi bechari apni pati ke kartooth par sharminda hai. Mihika abhi naadan hai usko nahi bata sakti. Akka! Haan Akka se bath karleti hun. Wohi mujhe sahi salah dengi" she was about to dial the number when she realised "Nahi! Akka is pregnant. Aisi halath me unhe stress me daalna sahi nahi rahega"


"Ayyo Murugan! Ye kaisi kashmakash hai? Kisise apna dard baant bhi nahi sakti. Koi to hoga jo meri pareshani ka hal bata de"


She was trying to remember people she could talk to and simply scrolling the phone when an app caught her attention. "Radio! Haan Radio! Radio station call karke RJ se apni problem discuss karungi. Koi na koi solution to mil hi jayega" she was reminded of the night when she and Raman had spoilt the show of an RJ.


She quickly tuned into a radio station.

Jab se tune karli hai duri
Zindagi hai tab se adhuri

She could not help but connect herself to the song that was playing. It had been only a few hours since Raman had left and she was already feeling incomplete.


Tune mujhko apna na mana
Hai kuch teri aisi majboori

On hearing the lyrics, she realised that there must be something that is stopping Raman from accepting her. But what? she wondered.


Teri raza teri marzi
Meri toh hai bas yeh arzi
Tere liye jina ho mera

She decided then and there "Aap chahe jitni bhi dooriyan badhalo Raman, mai hamesha apki hi ban kar rahungi"


Pau tujhe ya na pau
Khona tujhe mai na chahu
Hoke rahu mein toh bas tera

"Aap chahe mujhe apnayein ya nahi par mai aapse pyar karti rahungi"


Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum dil se gaye hum jaa se gaye
Hum dil se gaye jaa se gaye
ha ek tere liye
Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum tujpe mitte Ha tujpe mare
Hum Tujpe mit gaye hai mar gaye
Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha

No lines could describe her condition better than the lines she just heard. Indeed she had lost herself in his love.


Koi na sahe aisa gham bhi
Kar na sakay aankhen num bhi
Ya rab hai tujhse ye dua

She thought about what she was going through a while ago. She wanted to discuss her problem with her close ones yet could not share it with anyone.


Saath koi kyun ho aise
Saath kabhi the na jaise
Pal me paraya sab hua

"Sach hi kaha hai. Ek pal me Raman ne mujhe paraya kar diya" a tear escaped her eye.


Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum dil se gaye hum jaa se gaye
Hum dil se gaye jaa se gaye
haan ek tere liye
Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum tujpe mitte Ha tujpe mare
Hum Tujpe mit gaye hai mar gaye
Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha


Tears were not stopping anymore. "Agar apki khushi mujhse door hone me hai to yahi sahi. Apko hamesha khush dekhna chahti hun Raman" and as if the lyricist had heard the next line played:

Dil ye bole mein le aau
Tere labon ke aangan mein
Dhoop si khili ek Zindagi
Tere naino ke sawan mein
Ek dhank saja pau mein
Aisi ho meri bandagi

She was amazed at how well the song depicted her present state of mind. She was right in tuning into the radio station she admitted.

Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum dil se gaye hum jaa se gaye
Hum dil se gaye jaa se gaye
haan ek tere liye
Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein
hum tujpe mitte ha tujpe mare
Hum Tujpe mit gaye hai mar gaye
Na bole tum na maine kuch kaha

She was so lost in the lyrics that she forgot why she had tuned into the Radio station in the first place. her trance broke as the song stopped and the RJ started speaking.

"Wow! That amazing song was from a daily soap Na Bole Tum Na Maine Kuch Kaha which came back with a second season on popular demand. Na bole tum, Na maine kuch kaha! The title is so striking na.
Aksar real life me bhi aise hi hotha hai ke hum sochte hi reh jathe hain ke apne dil ki bath kahein ya nahi aur na hum kuch keh pathe hain na woh. Duniya me isi wajah kitni hi aisi love stories adhoori reh gayi hongi.

"So dear listeners! Agar aapne ab tak apni dil ki bath apne special someone se nahi kahi hai to mai to yahi kahungi ke boss jaao aur keh do ke 'Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte, tere bina kya wajood mera'
Jab pyar kiya to darna kya? Jao aur bindaaz bol do. Agar usne maan liya to 'Mauja hi Mauja' aur nahi maana to koi aur mil jayega. Just joking haan.
I just wish ke aap apne dil ki bath kehdo. Ye afsos lekar kyun jeena ke 'kash maine kaha hota to aaj zindagi kuch aur hoti'

On that note lets attend the next caller...hello..."


Ishita felt her hopes rising. The RJ was right indeed.

She was back to where she was in the morning. She washed her face and redid her make up to look as beautiful as she wanted to this morning.

She had made a decision. Confrontation? or Confession?

Stay tuned Dhun abhi baki hai.
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I have been an ardent fan of NBT before YHM. Call it co-incidence, the lyrics of the title song of NBT wen with the story so well that i couldn't help but adding it to the series. I hope u enjoyed this parted. The much awaited part is coming soon. Hopefully I will give a double update today.

Do share ur thoughts


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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
kash maine kaha hota to aaj zindagi kuch aur hoti'

Life is too short to have regrets...so true...just go and get ur love Ishita...Raman is being stupid here..trying to avoid the person who is a part of his heart,his soul..a part of HIM..you please be the smart madrasan of Ravan kumar and confront him...confess ur love 😳lovely chapter dear
Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Very interesting... Continue soon..
Thanks for PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Raman needed one tight slap. Poor ishu only tears left for her. Excited wat u gonna update. Itna emotional hai. thankuuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
beautiful song selection
hope for d confession ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhun 9
Mere Humsafar Mere Paas Aa

Raman was in front of his apartment now. He was going to face her for the last time now. He told himself that he could not fall weak. With a straight and emotionless face he entered his room.


He had expected her in a broken state but what he saw astonished him. His JKR never failed to amaze him after all. He felt the events of the morning rewinding as she looked bright and beautiful.


"Raman agaye aap! Mai apka hi intezar kar rahi thi" she gave her lovely smile.


How can she act so cool and unaffected? he wondered.


"Mujhe aapse bath karni hai" she closed in the gap.


He reminded himself to avoid meeting her eyes. He increased the gap and looked away. "Mere paas tumhari faltu baton keliye waqt nahi hai. Mere flight ka waqt ho raha hai" he moved towards his suitcase.


She held his wrist "Raman! Please mat jaao"

Mere humsafar mere humsafar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa
Mere humsafar mere humsafar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa

"Mera hath chodo" Raman said trying to loosen her grip on his hand. She tightened the hold in result.


"Raman aap mujhe aise chodke nahi ja sakte" she said firmly.


"Kis haq se mujhe rok rahi ho?" he said angrily.


"Biwi hoon mai apki. Apke sath 7 phere liye hain. Hamesha sath rehne ki kasam khayi hai"


"Mai aise rasmon ko nahi maanta"


"Rasmon ko nahi maante par business to sa,jte ho na. To Mr CEO of the Year, let me remind you aapne mere sath life-long deal seal kiya hai aur aap is deal ko thod nahi sakte" she pointed at the ring in her finger.

Humein saath chalna hai umr bhar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa


"Aisi cheezon ki meri zindagi me koi maayne nahi hain"


"Jhoot"


"Mujhe koi shouq nahi hai jhoot bolne ka" he said lookin away.


"Jiske dil me chor nahi hotha wo nazrein jhukake nahi nazrein milake kehta hai" she repeated the lines he had once told her.


"Mujhe der horahi hai" he said unable to counter her and lifted his suitcase. She pulled it away.


"Der nahi hui hai Raman. Abhi to hamara rishta shuru hua hai. Abhi to humne ek doosre ko samajhna shuru kiya hai. Kal hi to aapne mujhse wada kiya tha ke kar takllef me aap mera sath denge. Agar aapke jane ke baad mere sath kisine badtameezi ki ya bura sulook kiya to mujhe koun sambhalega" she said trying to convince him

Hai safar ye hamara naya naya
Kisi pal andhera jo ho gaya


"Tumhari hifazat karne keliye aur bhi bahut log hain" he didn't know what to say.


"Par aap nahi honge na" she said with expectant eyes.

Kahin kho na jaayein ye reh guzar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa


He was at loss of words. He had not expected a confrontation after all.

"Aap ko kis bath ka dar hai Raman? Kya apko hamare rishte par bharosa nahi hai?"


"Jis rishte ka koi future nahi uspar kya bharosa karna"


"Ek mouka to dekar dekhiye. Thoda waqt dijiye is rishte ko. Aise beech raste me chodkar mat jayiye" she begged.

Zara theharja mere humnawaa
Yahan agle mod pe hoga kya
Kise hai pata kise hai khabar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa


"Mere paas bekar cheezon keliye waqt nahi hai" he strengthened his resolve and dragged himself out of the room with his luggage.


"Raman" she called out but he didn't stop.


His family gathered in the living room. He had informed them of leaving when he had come home to collect his luggage.

"Puttar tu kyun..."


"Maa please! Mujhe rokne ki koshish mat kijiye. Aaj mai kisi ki nahi sunoonga. Mai jo kar raha hun bilkul sahi kar raha hoon" he didn't let anyone talk and marched out.


Ishita came running behind calling out his name. He had already left. She stood emotionless as she felt her heart being crushed ruthlessly.


"Mai unhe nahi rok payi Mummyji" Ishita broke down in her mother-in-law's arms


"Puttar aise na bol. Mai janti hun agar koi use rok sakta hai to tu wahi hai. Tune hi mere Happy ko wapas laya tha. Agar is baar wo chala gaya to mera Happy mujhe kabhi wapas nahi ayega. Puttar tu himmat nahi haar sakti. Jaa puttar use rok le" her mother-in-law instilled faith in her.


"Haan Ishita! Tu bhai ko rok sakti hai. Jaa Ishita bhai ko rokle" Simmi joined in.


Ishita felt her hopes rising yet again.
'Jab pyar kiya to darna kya? Jao aur bindaaz bol do. Agar usne maan liya to 'Mauja hi Mauja' aur nahi maana to koi aur mil jayega. Just joking haan.
I just wish ke aap apne dil ki bath kehdo. Ye afsos lekar kyun jeena ke 'kash maine kaha hota to aaj zindagi kuch aur hoti' the RJs words rang in her ears. She gathered herself, picked up her car keys and zoomed off to the airport.

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"Raman rukiye"

Raman was about to step out of the parking lot when he heard her melodious voice.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?"


"Raman aapse ek zaruri bath kehni thi"


"Mai pehle bhi bata chuka hoon ke mai ruknewala nahi hoon. Kaho jo kehna hai"

"Yaad hai Raman pichli baar jab hum airport aye the to aapne kaha tha ke mai aapse woh bath kabhi na kabhi kahungi. Ittefaq dekhiye ke aaj is airport pe hi wo bath mai aapse kehne wali hun."


"Tumhare kuch bhi kehne se mera faisla nahi badalnewala"


"Faisla to apko hi lena hai ke aapko kis raah pe chalna hai. Par mai apni bath kahe bina apko jane nahi dungi"


"Raman mai aapse kehna chahti thi ke chahe aap jitni bhi dooriyan badhaa lo mai hamesha apko apne paas paaungi.

Jo gharon ko chhodke hain chale
Unhein kya darayenge faasle


"Aap chahe rishta tod do par mai hamesha is rishte me bandhi rahungi. Aapki zindagi me mere liye chahe koi jagah na ho par aap hamesha meri zindagi banke rahoge. Apke door jane ki takleef to hogi par agar apki khushi mujhse door jane me hai to mai bhi khush rahungi. Apki khushi me hi meri khushi hai Raman. Kyunki mai aapse bahut pyar karti hun. I love you Raman" she stood on her toes and pecked his cheek.


Raman was dumbfounded. He could not believe that she had just confessed to him. He thought that he was the reason for her pain. But she proved him wrong yet again. She admitted with all honesty that her happiness lies in him and with him.


She looked at him expectantly. She was trying to gauge his emotions but she failed to do so as he stood dumbfounded. She had confessed but the fear of rejection was haunting her. She didn't want to face rejection again in her life. She thought it was better to leave and she turned around.


He saw her leaving. He had to take his final decision before she left. She was reaching her car and his mind and heart were having a heated debate.

"Ishita" she turned back. He tore his ticket into pieces and threw it in the air. He finally let his heart take over his mind and stretched his arms for her.
Humein jaana hai dil ke nagar
Mere paas aa mere paas aa

She ran as fast as she could and embraced the love of her life. He reciprocated with equal passion. They shared their first hug of love.


"Pehle kyun nahi bataya? Bekar me ticket ka kharcha karwa diya na" Raman said teasing her.


"Apko kharche ki padi hai. Yahan meri halath kitni kharab hogayi thi zara bhi ehsaas hai apko. Kitna rulaya mujhe" she said hitting his chest.


"Sorry Ishita. Tumhare chehre pe khushi dekhna chahta tha. Par kya patha tha ke is faisle se tumhe aur dukh hoga. I am sorry" he said genuinely.


"Itna pyar karte ho mujhse?" she asked in awe.


"Maine kab kaha ke mai tumse pyar karta hoon?"


"Haww Ravan Kumar. Kitne insensitive ho aap!"


"Isme insensitive kya hai. Zaruri nahi ke tum jisse pyar karo wo bhi tumse pyar kare" he said teasing.


She was already exhausted with the roller-coaster of emotions. She could not take it anymore.

"Apko kisi ke feelings ki khadar hi nahi. I hate you Raman" she said and walked off angrily.


"Ishita ruko to mai mazak kar raha tha"


"I hate you" she said again and zoomed off in her car.


"Arre yaar! Ye kya kar diya...Hmm ab JKR se pyar kiya hai to shaheed hone keliye tayyar hojao. Chal beta Raman tere shaheed hone ka waqt agaya" and he sat in his car.


Ishita's confrontation and confession made Raman change his decision.

Ab Raman kaise shaheed hoga?

Stay tuned Dhun abhi baki hai

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It is late night and I am hell tired. Don't know how dis part turned out. Sorry for that.

Do share ur thoughts







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Posted: 11 years ago
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AMAZINGGG...loved the confession from Ishu...Raman's teasing back fired...ab toh shaheed hona hi hoga😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the confession...amazing update..continue soon...

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