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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 7

Scene starts with Ishita shifting her luggage to 401.She keeps her liggage in their room and starts making breakfast.Ruhi is helping her in her new house.

Ishita "Ruhi abh bataon daily naastha papa banaathey they ?"

Ruhi "Han aur khilaathey bhee they.Aap nahen they naa."

Ishita "Har baath pey yaad dilaana jaroori hain kyaa?"

Ruhi "Aapney humey choodkey kasiey gayee?"

Ishita feels sad but her bing sad is not solution now."Ruhi maaf kardo naa Ishima ko.I promise main kabhee nahen jaaongi."

Raman coming same time "Maafee bilkul nahen.Aur yaaad rakhnaa tum iss baar kabhee jaaney kee socha bhee naa room mey bandh karkar lock kardoonga."

Ishita looks at him "Ruhi rule book mey aur ek rule add karnaa.Ishita ko brain use karna mana hain."

Ishita smiles listening this.Ruhi runs to get rule book.

Raman "Han madam abh sey koi bhee baath hon naa.Pehley mujhye bathaana apnaa dimaak jho kee hain nahen fir bhee istamaal karney kee koshish kee naa bola naa lock kardoonga."

Ishita smiles "Ravan Kumar."

Ruhi comes running and starts writing rule :101 Ishima ko dimaak use karnaa mana hain.Very strict punishment.

Ruhi "Papa aap ready hon .Hum kabh jaayengey zoo."

Raman "Pehley tum donon ready ho jaon."

Raman "main abhee aatha hun .Main kuch laana bhool gayan."

Ishita "kyaa?"

Raman "personnal."

Ishita "Kyaa personnal?Aap mujhey kyon nahen bathaarahen hain?Aapney abhee abhe kahan kee sab kuch share karengey.Abha aap hee."

Raman "Who rule sirf tumhaarey liyen hain.Hummarey liyen nahen hain."

Raman "Waisey ek baath bathaon.Iss ek saal kahan thee tum?"

Ishita "Raman main NSS camp mey thee poorey India mey medical camp's rakhrahen thee."

Raman "Tumney kissey sey baath nahen kee?Tumney ek baar bhee kissey sey baath nahen kee?Ek baar bhee socha nahen kee ghar mey kyaa ho rahan hoga?"

Ishita was silent "Raman main aapsey baath karney bahuth koshish kee Raman kissey ney mujhyeb aapkey baarey mey naheh bathaaya.Koi mujhsey baath karney tayyar hee nahen thaa.Aur Mani..."

She stops after uttering his name.

Raman "Mani kyaa?"

Ishita "Mani sey baath kiyan thaa aapkey baarey mey janney ussney kahan keee aapkey patha kissey ko nahen patha .Phone number bhee badal dee hain.ussey nahen patha."

Raman "Jhoot bola ussney.Sab log jaanthey hain mera ghar yahan hain.Parr koi andhar nahen aasaktha."

Ishita "Raman who rule kissney rakha?"

Raman looking at Ruhi."Shaila bua aaye thee.Ussney Ruhi ko bahuth tang kiyan.Ussdin sey ussney sabko bahaar rakhdee.Maa ko bhee."

Ishita "Aur aapney bache kaa saath diyan.Raman who kaisa rule hain.Koi aisa karthey hain kyaa."

Raman "Tumhey koi problem ho tho Ruhi sey baath karkey decide karnaa .Mujhye beech mey math laana."

Ruhi "Bilkul nahen who rule nahen badalega."

Ishita understood how adamant Ruhi is over each and every rule of that book.

Ruhi "Ishima aap apnaa dimaak use karnaa bandh karon.Warnaa room mey lock kardengey."

Ishita is sure Ruhi is no more Ruhi she is definatly feminine version of Raman Bhalla.

Raman gets a call and he leaves to take it.Ishita gets ready and comes down side .

Ruhi is watching TV in full volume.

Ishita comes there and tries to reduce volume.

Ishita "Vol kam karon naa."

Ruhi "Kyon?"

Ishita "Tum hummesha aisey TV dekhthee hon?"

Ruhi "subaha?"

Ishita "Issliyen papa bahaar gayen hain.Fir tho.Ruhi papa heart patient hain.Itney loud sound rakhogee tho papa ko problem hogee naa."

Ruhi understood matter and stopped TV."Ishima papa ko bahuth pain hogaa?"

Ishita "Abh nahen hoga.OK" kissing her.She started changing the house and planning where each thing should be.

Raman comes back.Raman "aaj TV itna jaldhee kyon bandh ho gayana?"

Ruhi comes running and hugging Raman "Sorry"

Raman "Sorry?Kyon?"

Ruhi "TV itney loud"

Raman "Ruhi aisa nahen hain.Kuch nahen hainn naa."

They have break fast together and still Raman has to make Ruhi eat and even Ishita joined the job.

Then Ruhi informing about Raman's tablets and Ishita is keeping them in order against Ruhi's colour order.

Then trio leaves to Zoo.

Ishita planned everything.Even though house is new for her but people are close to her.

She called Sunitha and shared good news with her

Then they went to zoo .Ruhi was enjoying in full scale and Ishita trying to make both Ramana and Ruhi behave.Ruhi doing everything in her style and Raman supporting her.

Then They have lunch outside and thenRuhi planned for movie and this list continued.

Then they finally reach home around 9pm Ruhi sleeping peacefull in Raman's arms.

Raman makes Ruhi sleep and gets his place for himself.

Raman "Yahan kouch tho nahen hain.Yahen kahen so jaon."

Ishita "Raman mujhey aapsey kuch share karnee hain."

Ishita drags Raman outside to speak not to disturb Ruhi.

Raman "Kyaa ?"

Ishita hugs Raman tightly "Raman I love you .I love you so much aap nahen jaanthe main ney ek saal kasiey bithaaya.Mainey aapkey ."

Raman keeps his hands round her "I love you too."

Raman "Pehley nahen batha ssakthee kyaa .Abh kit ey problems aaya tumhaarey wajaha sey."

Ishita "Aap bhe bol sakthey hon naa.Mujhye kyon."

Raman "Fir kyaa baath hain bataon.Tumney mujhye baharr kyon laaya."

Ishita has tears in her eyes. "Raman main yeh baath aapko bathaaney key liyen kabh sey wait kar rahen thee.Aapkey bina yeh kushi adhoori hee hain."

Raman "Kyaa hain pehley bathaon tho sahen."

Ishita "Raman mujhye ek camp mey, firing huan thaa mujhye goli lagee thee."

Raman was shocked "Kabh huan yeh sabh tumney bathaaya kyon nahen .Kaisey."

Ishita "Raman poorey baath tho suniyen.Raman peet mey lagee the."

Ishita "Raman doctory ney treatment diyen they.But uss treatment kee wajaha sey mera aur ek problem treat ho gayen.Therapy kaam kee Raman .Treatment kaam kee."

Raman was confused "Kyaa huan?"

Ishita "Raman extra medicines key wajaha sey damaged cells reprduce kee aur merey liyen kaam kiyan."

Raman "Ishita main buisnee student hun.Seedhey bathaon kyaa huan?"

Ishita "Raman main abh maa ban sakthee hun.Hummarey bachey ho sakthey hain."

Raman was shocked listening this.He was shocked and he could see nothing as tears of happiness covered his eyes.and Ishita's too.

Ishita "Raman kaisey patha nahen .Lekin who kaam kiyan.Main yeh baath aapko bathaana chaahthee the."

Ishita hugs Raman more tightly not wanting to loose him one more time.Raman hugged her back.

(cont. )


Sorry guys but get ready.Next part Mani ko laa rahan hun.Laana nahen chaahtha but badalaa to lena hain naa.But just adding one more.Try to assume 6,7 chapter were not updated.Try to take 8 th chapter as 6 and see how story progresses.It is just to show how differently it could be.But story is same even if you see that way or not.



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Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
nice part...
101 rule is amazng...atleast ab sab kuch teek hoga...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
awww...rule no 101...so sweet
and ruhi mini ravan kumar
thats something new now..
family outing and then i love you...wow
and ishita cured...good news
finally waiting for some good scenes now
and this mani..make ishra slap him in next part plss...
i wish he turns out devil in show also
n ishu realizes it..
thnks 4 pm vikas
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ankitasidana

awww...rule no 101...so sweet
and ruhi mini ravan kumar
thats something new now..
family outing and then i love you...wow
and ishita cured...good news
finally waiting for some good scenes now
and this mani..make ishra slap him in next part plss...
i wish he turns out devil in show also
n ishu realizes it..
thnks 4 pm vikas
update soon

slap is there but there would be many parts .

now I am just trying to provide more ways for cv's to make us angry.more mani and Ishita .
its a strange trap one who is thinking he is trapping is getting trapped
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
awsome wowww ruhi a liltle ravan kumar loved it! mani entry finally mani ka bhanda phutega plz cont.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
I read all d parts all r gud.. n female raavan kumar ke to baat he alag h I like that concept
continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
awwwsome update I loved it awww that 101 rule is awesome ruhi d mini Raven Kumar is so sweet n cute hey I guess it right she can b a mother I'm happy for her hey confession done shani again kkk waiting for next update update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Awesome story..
I read 3rd part to 7th part in one go..
I was wondering what will happen next..
Was really excited to read the story..👏👏
Brilliantly written and thanks for the pm..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
ha ha ha...jst loved it...👏
jaldi upload karo yaar...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update rule 101 the bestrule chotu raavruhi osam
Next kab

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