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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

ani I loved it yr...

again an emotional chappy...

swayam don't find it love...why...

reason of his this behaviour is may be related to tani...

oh..
cliffhanger...

update soon..
thanks 4 d pm


thanks a lot!!!! 😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

u said will kill u after reading😡


let me tell u that i will nt kill😉

bt i would like 2 hug u🤗

it was seriously awesome😃

i loved it❤️

there was so much pain😭

n i love it coz i know i was needed fr d story line😃

u r becoming a awesome writer day by day👏

seriously😊

m loving d twist n turns u r giving😃

i could really feel d pain😎

it was a very emotional update😭

bt y is sharon trying 2 do sucide??😲

hope he saves her 4 something happens 2 her😃

hope kya he has to save her😆

update d next part supersoon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊


thanks mansi!!!!! muaaahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Preetirox

Again an emotional update!!

why why why??? You make me cry all the time?? 😭 😭

now I'm very very curious to know what on earth did swayam see that mde him doubt sharon's love for him??

And how is taani related in this matter that he is feeling so insecure for his sister??

God!! You always do this to me!! You make me more and more curious each and every time! 😡 😡

I hate you for this!!

Anf about the update I have nothing to say! Its very very beautifully penned! Do I have to even say that??

Your a wonderful writer!!

Update soon!


thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

DIDUUU!!

Am soo sooo sorrry!!
I know am late!!
I know I didnt comment for 2 whole chaps!!
No wait 1!!
But still I didnt comment!!
AM so sooo sorry!!!
Okies this time I promise will comment daily and very big ones!!!
Oh aur btw even I want biiiggg comments okiesh!!
That reminds me u have to comment on mine 😛

OK OK!!
Ab back to the updates!!!

PART 3

Didu u write sooo well!!
Sharon's views were just too goooddd
every explaination was up to perfect.
thhe way u described was just commendable
Swayam drunk!!
And then what was that!!
Oh godz!!
SO many surprises!!
First I LOVE U and then that intimacy..
OMG!!!
DIdu ur stealing my title!
Twist Queen!! plzz woh toh ek rehne do naa 😛
Hehe JOking!! Aapne itna bada shock diya na ki mere bhi bheege pad gaye!!
Haye it was just sooo goooddd!!!
I love thhis update soo sooo much!!!


Chalo Ab moving on!!
Hehe!! I know aur padna thaa par bas itna hi uske liye 😛

Acha ab PART 4
This was one just amazing amazing!!
Didu, mindblowinggg
The way u write! Oh godzz!! I am in love with it!!
Perfect words!
Emotions, feelings beautifully penned down!
From start to the end my heart was beating as fast as it ever could!
Everything was just soo emotional
I literally started crying...
Swayam's rude words...
Sharons tears falling...
Oh godz!
Kitna dard dogi inn dono ko didu..
Par the way u wrote just amazing!!
Fir Karwa Chaut!
Nysh Nysh!!!
Swayu actually felt Sharon's love!
Huraah!!
Ab bhaisahab bhi kab agree karenge -.-
hehe!!!
I knowww i want that fastt!!
Fir the last part, the ending...
Sharons about to ...
And Swayam!
Mujhe iske baare mai toh baat hi nahi karni!
What the hell!
Aap!! URGH!!!
Itna rulwa diya mujhe!!!
Hehe!!


Chalo bas THE END AAGAYA
Haan haan, pata hai bahot pakwaya..
Sowwie!!
Kya karu!!
Jo bhi man mai tha sab bol diya!!
Arre


Inn sab mai!! Mai toh bhul hi gai!
Jaldi update karo!!
JALDI JALDI!!

Aur I repeat!!
Ur a muich much much better writer than me!
Samjhe didu!!?

Heheess!!
Loved these 2 update sooo much!!
Love u even mroe!!!

Chalo AB UPDATE!!

Wiating...
Waiting like a crazy idiot...
Waiting like a mad fan!!!

Love,
Your idiotic restless!!

Haye, koi toh dimaag daalo iss ladki mai!😳


okay meri diyu!!!!!!!!!

thanks a lot se bhi zyada for this awesum dosum comment...

i love u too baby!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

I AM SO VERY SORRY FOR BOTHERING YOU WITH THIS FAST UPDATE..BUT I PROMISED ROSY DI THAT I'LL UPDATE SOON... SO ITS A DIWALI GIFT FROM MY SIDE...

HAPPY DIWALI!!!


Part 5 : FALLING APART

Swayam felt his breath stuck in his throat seeing sharon on the edge of the wall...


"Sharon...ye kya kar rahi ho..pagal ho gayi ho..." he shouted...

He could see Sharon not looking at him or hearing if...as if she was in a trance...

Kuch rishte ajeeb hi dor mein badhe hote hai...

"Sharon...don't you dare..." He started breathing heavily and rushed inside the house and ran upstairs to the terrace... He zoomed into the terrace to see Sharon's back facing him and her standing on the wall and jump...

"Sharon..age mat barna...gir jaogi..." Swayam shouted from the door... Sharon got her sense back and looked at him...

Takraar se suru hote hai...pyaar k saye mein tanapte

"Sharon..niche utro..." Swayam came forward...

"age mat barna.." Sharon warned... " mujhe nahi jeena hai... I don't want to live..." She cried out...

"Sharon...stop it... niche aao..." swayam moved forward...

"nahi swayam... I just don't want this life any more...tum mujhse nafrat karte ho na??? jis insaan se mai itna pyaar karti hoon wo mujhse nafrat karta hai...use lagta hai all I want is intimacy... Use lagta hai ki mai trust aur pyaar k layak nahi hoon..." She shouted...

Nafrat ki saye mein Girte hai ,

parte hai , par kayam rahete hai...

Swayam came forward and pulled her down...

"hath choro mera swayam..." she struggled to get out of the hold...

Swayam left her hand and shook her shoulders... "pagal ho gaye ho tum????" he shouted...

"haa mai pagal ho gaya hoon... Aaj mai tumhe aise jaane nahi dungi.. tumhe batana hoga kit um aise behave kyun kar rahe ho... I need answers...kyunki ye meri life hai zisse tum khel rahi ho... I have the right to know the truth swayam...aur aaj mai sach jaane bagair tumhe jaane nahi dungi..." She shouted...

"mujhe tumhare aur shivam ke bare mein paata hai..." He shouted back... Sharon felt all the blood drain away from the body...

Nafrat barti jati hai

aur rishte ki gaat aur bhi gaheri hoti hai

Itni ki ekdin nafrat bhi

aur barne se Sharma jaye...

*flashback*

It was a week before rey and taani's marriage that Sharon got a call from shivam..yes , the same shivam from their college who once tried to be with Sharon and once with taani...

He had told Sharon that he had the official documents of rey's dance academy and can easily forge it...sharon got really scared as he heard it... shivam asked her to meet him alone to get the papers and instead she will have to do something... Sharon decided to meet him...

It was the day before rey and taani's wedding , Sharon met shivam in the lawn of her house...

"mere paas saare documents hai aur mai chahu to ek minute mein wo academy apna bana sakta hoon..." shivam smirked...

"tum aisa kuch nahi karoge..." Sharon warned...

"my my... I am so scared sharon..." shivam taunted her...

"mujhe documents wapas do shaivam..." Sharon gritted her teeth...

"haa de dunga ... par uske badle mujhe kya milega???" he smirked...

"kya chahte ho tum???" she shouted...

"yehi...ki kal taani k badle tum rey se shadi karo..." Shivam said calmly...

"what the hell..tum pagal ho chuke ho..." She shouted...

"chillao mat... Kal rey se tum shadi karogi aur tumhe paper mil jaenge... Aur mujhe taani..."

"what???" Sharon was shocked...

"I love her...mai taani se pyaar karta hoon aur wo sirf meri hai... Tumhe rey se shadi karni hi paregi..."

"just get lost you fool..." She giggled... "tum hosh mein nahi ho..."

"tum rey sekya kahogi ye mujhe nahi malum but you have to do as I say... or tumhare paas choice hi kya hai??? Papers to tumhe chahiye... n moreover I wanna see swayam lose..."

"swayam???"

"yeah I wanna see him lose in front of me... behen or girlfriend dono mere kahene par hi chalega..." he laughed...

"accha plan hai tumhara... kal mai rey se shadi karungi aur iss tarah taani tumhari ho jayegi aur mujhe academy k papers bhi mil jaenge..." Sharon taunted shivam... Swayam was entering the lawn of sharon's house to meet her and heard her say this to shivam...he misunderstood the taunt in her voice and took it as a statement as his whole world came crashing down... he immediately left from there...

"shivam tum shayad nahi jante ho ki mera pyaar aur dosti itna shallow nahi hai... so just take your papers and leave... mujhe papers nahi chahiye...we can take that legally from you n agar nahi bhi mila na to hume rishto ki kadar hai..." She said calmly and went inside the house...

Meanwhile swayam was driving aimlessly in the streets...he stopped the car in front of a now where and cried his heart out...

"how could you Sharon..how could you do this to me...maine tumse itna pyaar kiya fir bhi..." He cried more...

"I won't let you destroy taani's life... tumhare dad ka deal crack ho chukka hai aur unhone loan pay bhi kar diya... par shadi k chakkar mai tumhe ye nahi bataya unhone... ab mujhe hi kuch karna parega..." He was helpless at that moment ...he felt his entire world was shattered in a second...his sister and his best friend's happiness on one side and he couldn't believe that Sharon can do this to him...he felt his body going numb with pain...he didn't know what to do...he felt like crying out loud and kill himself but he had to save a lot of lives now n the only option was to marry Sharon...but obviously she wouldn't agree and thus decided to force Sharon to marry him in order to save taani and rey...

*flashback over*

"mujhe tumhare aur shivam k bare mein pata hai Sharon..." he shouted...

Aur wo rishta sirf ek

bandhaan ban k rahe jata hai...

lekin sirf nafrat aur chupi hui pyaar par

"pata hai mujhe ki tum dono milkar kya karne wale the... How could you even think that you can hurt rey aur taani??? Mai bhai hoon uska... bachpan se lekar ab tak koi anch tak aane nahi diya uspar... I can do anything for her... you heard me Sharon..uss din tumhare ghar par maine shivam aur tumhari bate sun liya tha...aur job hi hai dimaag mein chochna bhi mat...mai tumhe un dono ko hurt karne nahi dunga..." He jerked her away and left from there leaving Sharon fighting with herself in the darkness of night...

Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai

jaise nafrat k us mahol mein

Sharon had gone numb..she understood that swayam had heard only a part of their conversation and misunderstood her but the thought that swayam believed whatever he heard broke her...how can he think so low of her ... how can he even think that she can even think about hurting taani in her dreams also... how can she think about hurting rey... how can she even think about marrying someone other than swayam...

kuch to hai jo kaheta hai ki iss ansune se

unkahein se ehsas ko ek mauka to do...

She slowly sank down on the ground...


THANKS GUYS...DO LEAVE YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS...


LOVE , ANI



Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unresing
Thanks so much for doing tis ani
I loved the update
I knew the reason must be sumthing
Tat cud be sorted out easily
But the phrase shown Was beautiful
Sharon she was heart broken
N swayam he felt betrayed
The more he wanted to take steps
Towards sharon more he felt tat he was betraying
Tanni n his helplessness was brilliantly penned
I hav to say tis ani even thou shivam was
A villian here we cant ignore another
Villan which is our ego agar swayam
Baat clear kar letah toh shayad itna baat nahi bardti
I want to read futher ki how
The story unfolds from here
How will they reduce thr gap b/w them
All in all dil khush kar ditah
Do update soon 🤗
Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally reason revealed...nice update
Waiting for next chp
Update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
so shivam is the reason for all this.. ya how could swayam believe all that...he should have asked sharon about this once... hope sharon tell him the truth nd he understand it... nd rectify his mistake... update soon thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u reveld...


do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So finally u reveld the reason of swayam angryness
No waiting Hw sharon vl'l clear all the missunderstanding between them :)
Do update soon

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