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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

avi!

your ideas always surprise me Chaitalee Ghosalkar!! kaha se laati ho tum aise unique ideas...

a Raizada who is Khushi and a theif who is Arnav?? too much to digest man!

well kudos to you for writing THIS!

I am smelling something fishy. why khushi is saving Arnav now and hiring him as her bodyguard??

mystery always excite me. let me see how you unfold this. ..

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

Welcome back. How do you come up with such different story lines yaar 😊. Enjoyed reading the first chapter and I am all buckled up for the suspense ride 😛. Thanks for PM.

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Res

Edited.

Welcome back.

You gave Arnav Akash's lanky personality. And he is Arnav __? A robber or robs well sought out things for fun?

A well planed and thought out process he follows for robbery - made 2 mistakes in one incident to land in this situation. And going against his nature - likely made a third one or is his idea of these mistakes are disillusion and he is being played all though.

Khushi Raizada? Ms. at that? Wants a robber as her body guard? Something she had planned to do in return of his freedom from this case? What's cooking?

This story is already intriguing, just like all other. You came back with a bang so like you Chaitalee. 👏

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Khushi is a Miss.Raizada?? Then Arnav??

okay.. When i concluded that Arnav was "robbing" the precious pendant , my thoughts immediately fled to the Aryan style of getting things done.. Alas..!!

bodyguard?? This is pretty intriguing...!! Khushi surely must be in some danger coz of which she cleverly manipulated our hunk for her service... for more!! :D Hmm..!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

fantabulous update

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the mail

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

congratulations on starting a new story.

Interesting start. i love arnav's character a smart thief but a greedy one and because of his mistake he is in jail.

Khushi is mysterious. Its odd that ho one gives a job to a thief of a personal guard. I think Khushi life is in danger, i am curious to know more about her.

waiting for the next chapter...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats on the new story. I'm so excited to read this one.

So Arnav is a thief? Hmmm. Very nice twist. So Khushi offered him a job in exchange for her silence. This is gonna be fun to read. I'm so glad you are writing again.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

good to see you back.. welcome.. 😊

interesting start of Disillusioned.. from thief to body guard.. lets see how many more mistakes is arnav doing at he is continuing them?? description of khushi was quite enchanting.. well would like to see the reasons behind khushi gave arnav the job for his freedom.. best wishes and happy writing.. 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Is Arnav a Gupta?

And why would Khushi want Him around her?

Interesting start, Chaitu!

So happy to see you writing again.

Waiting for the next chapter.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

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Yayyy!!!! A new story...😊

Awesome start...

Arnav is a thief... And khushi's personality is quiet intriguing... Why is she hiring a thief as her bodyguard... He can't be trusted... So there must be a strong reason behind her this decision...

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

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