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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow, this seems to be a very interesting and a totally new concept...

and khushi is already a raizada here...

eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was beautiful start...

So Arnav is a thief and he went to Kushi's house to stole their heirloom jewelry... So Kushi is a Raizada not Gupta????

Cant wait to read more on this story...

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hmmm...lovely update..the concept is very fresh n new!!
Continue soon!
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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

oh chaitu, new story

awesome news

will read now

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very interesting and thrilling start Chaitu !

Yay, a new fanfiction and this time Arnav has come in a thief's avatar to steal our hearts. 😳

Seriously, I got bored of reading Arnav being filthy rich fanfictions and despite that can't digest Arnav's character being poor, it does not do justice to his 'I own the world' persona. But thieves are supposed to be sly, smart, shameless, they can get whatever they want by hook or by crook and Arnav seems to fit the bill.

Oye, if Khushi is a Raizada then what is Arnav's surname a 'Kumari' 'Gupta' or 'Jha'?

And hope Khushi is born to the rich and not married to some obnoxiously rich old man called Snakewa ( Tera koi bharosa nahi, because can't trust you when it comes to twists)

What makes me wonder is why does she need a thief as a bodyguard, how could she even trust a petty thief, she could have hired a professional.

P.S. I demand you gift me the same pendant for my next birthday. 😉

Edited by sweetly_sour - 11 years ago

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Res

Unres

It generally takes some time for me to settle down in your story and DI follows the norm.

This is so welcomingly different.

Khushi is a Raizada here and Arnav is, well, don't know yet.

The narration of the theft wants me to doubt if you have any personal experience.

Don't know what the third mistake holds for Arnav but I am thrilled because it is not going to offer anything less than a fun/thrill ride when the writer here is Chiatu.

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow what a start

Arnav is a thief and Khushi was the victim but not for long

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow.. new story? This is the first time I will be reading your story when it's not complete yet 😊

Too late right now.. will read ch.1 tomorrow 😊

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Are wah! a new story by u! me is doing a happy dance :D

is arnav a member of some gang? the pendant is of some significance or did he wanted it because of its beauty?

and why khushi wants him as her bodyguard? :/

too many questions!

this chapter's name should've been - Three mistakes of my life :D

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Wow chaitu that was a brilliant start
Totally a diff concept
Count me in

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