Smitar's OS: Intoxication (For tvbug2011)

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

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SingaporeFan

@SingaporeFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww...too cute! Rudra pretending to be drunk to get pampered by Paro...loved it

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lalpeeli

@lalpeeli

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is such a wonderful way of thinking hope majorsaab does this in the show . this is a lovely story

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

A bottle of whisky and a drunken act to enjoy some moments with his wife...!!!!!

Nice, cute OS... Loved the finishing line...

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Zeeliciousxo

@Zeeliciousxo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Omg what an ending! Loved the twist! So adorable ☺️

I had to re-read the OS with the new knowledge that Major saab was actually sober and knew exactly what he was doing 😆

Edited by Zeeliciousxo - 11 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Smita! You're here too!

This is great :D

Anyways, I loved the OS as always ;)

I was reading it and was waiting eagerly for your Smita wala touch and there it was.

I couldn't resist the smiled the curled upon my lips!

Thanks for being such a wonderful writer Smita ^.^ Looking forward to more!

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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Priya

@123priya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

I am so glad that U wrote sumthing on Parud..I appreciate ur writing but this is the 1st time u wrote on parud who r my favourite currently,

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-NatureLover-

@-NatureLover-

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG!!! That was just superb!!!

I have just started reading your arshi work and now reading this was a real treat...

There's some innocence in your writing ...something...something magical...there's not only words but something else too...which I dont know...but I can feel it..

When Paro said that he only knows how to protect her not him...that was so sweet ...😳

And last ka twist was so sweet...Major Saab...you are no less than a child...who pretends to be ill so that everyone hovers over him with their love...BUT I agree...who wont when they have someone has sweet as Paro in their life??..

Love

Sambhavi...

Edited by tic-tac - 11 years ago