Smitar's OS: Intoxication (For tvbug2011)

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww that was sooo cuutee

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Very cute OS - lovely caregiving by Paro and the twist at the end from Major Saab 's side was unexpected and wonderful!

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Omg! Bade shaatir nikle aap, major saab!

And paro, bechaari!

Lovely story, lovely twist. Perfect length. Beautifully done.

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sairam03

@sairam03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow!Too cute. Actually I wish they show this in the serial ...Rudra acting drunk and paro serving him and showering him with her love. Picture of Rudra is very apt.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 41

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

That was awesome just loved it so much...

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awesome OS.
Its lovely..
I always like the writing style if yours..
Hooe to see some more of your writings on this forum.

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Omg so Rudra's pretending... Eeek! I love it
u should do a part 2 where paro finds out and confronts him

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Omg so Rudra's pretending... Eeek! I love it
u should do a part 2 where paro finds out and confronts him

This is a one shot..ha..ha.. Don't tempt me.😆

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow...

aap yahan bhi

Hai re Nandakisore

😆

aap jahan

hum wahan😆😆

Nice os Smita ji

Intoxication

Hmmm... A very Rudra rude way to get to his Paro

while She was a Paro full of love n life😃

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: smitar

This is a one shot..ha..ha.. Don't tempt me.😆

u should atleast write it to 4 parts n complete it

Pretty please

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