Smitar's OS: Intoxication (For tvbug2011) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that was sooo cuutee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very cute OS - lovely caregiving by Paro and the twist at the end from Major Saab 's side was unexpected and wonderful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg! Bade shaatir nikle aap, major saab!
And paro, bechaari!

Lovely story, lovely twist. Perfect length. Beautifully done.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!Too cute. Actually I wish they show this in the serial ...Rudra acting drunk and paro serving him and showering him with her love. Picture of Rudra is very apt.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome just loved it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesome OS.
Its lovely..
I always like the writing style if yours..
Hooe to see some more of your writings on this forum.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg so Rudra's pretending... Eeek! I love it
u should do a part 2 where paro finds out and confronts him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MissAsian

Omg so Rudra's pretending... Eeek! I love it
u should do a part 2 where paro finds out and confronts him



This is a one shot..ha..ha.. Don't tempt me.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Wow...
aap yahan bhi

Hai re Nandakisore
😆

aap jahan
hum wahan😆😆

Nice os Smita ji

Intoxication

Hmmm... A very Rudra rude way to get to his Paro

while She was a Paro full of love n life😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: smitar



This is a one shot..ha..ha.. Don't tempt me.😆

u should atleast write it to 4 parts n complete it
Pretty please

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