AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14 - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
After so long tym ha..
Tht was beautifull..
I loved it..

Their 1st hug..
Ng the kiss of promise was nc..
Luking frwrd for nxt prt..

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yippie an update...
wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful chapter...all the flashbacks were sweet...their kiss n hugs!!!
what is zoya worried for?? i hope asad will figure it out soon...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Rivs,

I actually started reading this story sometime ago and then completely forgot about this because you took so long in updating and the SS was missing from Forum... but i don't think i read your other story.. do PM me when you update that as well... then will read the whole thing.

coming to update, story is moving well... so asad and Zoya were more than just friends once upon a time... thats a surprise.. now wondering where and how Ayaan came in to picture.. was that something Zoya did in anger?

And is there a surprise family secret lurking behind?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update Rivs and welcome back. Am still reading so please dont forget to pm me 😳

The story is moving at a good pace and I just loved the way they were close buddies when younger.

Their first hug and then the kiss of promise uff my stomach did flip reading about it.

Loved the update and i hope Zoya thinking so much does not mean trouble.

Thanks for the pm n please update soon 😃
Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
Unres

- January 2005 -

Had to go through the earlier update to get the timeline fixed.

he does not want me around, moping like a girl, apparently. I don't know how he does it, but I cannot live on behaving like nothing has happened. I miss Ammi and I do not see why I have to hide it. My Ammi deserved better, she deserves better."

I still don't understand why men are supposed to control their emotions. That's a good point you touched upon.

"You need to do some yoga to manage that temper of your's." She spoke all of a sudden, giggling a bit.

This had me giggling.

She was mad at him and at herself for being so affected by what he had just said.

Asad, uff, when will this boy/man learn.

Their first hug. *sigh*

An emotional one. But this Asad is fast, learning the ropes of trade/love.

"I will forget you and move on in my life like you were never there. And I mean it."

I guess she meant it and proved it with Ayaan.

The constant blinking of the lights was a clear indication that the girl was in a dilemma and looking for answers.

This kind of communication had happened before too? Quite a unique saamne waali khidki communication.

If I don't get upset, should I dance around in joy?]" Zoya mumbled, but loud enough for Asad who just chuckled at her childish rant.

I can almost visualise this screen with Zoya's taunts and Asad's smirks.

Asad made her the promise she asked for and being caught in the moment they had even sealed it with a kiss. A teary eyed, smiling Zoya had called it a "Kiss of Promise",

Aww how romantic. His studies abroad seems to have done a world of difference to Asad's prude nature.

He also knew that there was no backtracking now. Each one of them just had to follow through with whatever it was that had been set into motion.

The dice has been rolled and players ready. Update soon Rivs. And next update at least I want a glimpse of Ayaan.


Nice Asyalicious update Rivs.

What happened for Zoya to elope with Ayaan? Asad's indifference.

Was Ayaan Zoyas retaliations against Asad or Gafoor or both?

Does Ayaan even exist?😆

Waiting for next update. Hopefully it will be Zoyaan.

Edited by GitaIyer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Res!

Welcome back Rivs! 😃

Unres ~

Okay, I don't usually do it, but heck. This is special!
So, FIRST SPOT! Woohoo!

I am so so relieved that you're continuing this story. I was honestly looking forward to the updates.
So yeah, coming to it, it was engaging! The story's moving at a nice pace.

And aww, the flashbacks! There's something about friendship turning to love. I don't know what it is, but I'm a big sucker for it! 😳

The 'first hug', the 'side hug', and the 'kiss of promise'... OH MY! My heart fluttered!
They did kiss!

Now Zoya's contemplating the matter, and Asad's worried 'coz Zoya is. How adorable can they get?!

I can't wait to know what happens next!

I'm getting an update next week, right? RIGHT?!
I better!

Thanks for updating Rivs! 🤗

Glad u enjoyed being first to read and comment. Me too...friendship into love is my favorite kinda stories.
Yes they did kiss as teenagers...the first kiss...
They are both worried and next update will shed some light on why they are worried.
I am out of town nextw eek but I will try to update before or after.

Thanks for the comments.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
well hello welcome back
u had us waiting for so long
so the decision was told to zoya actually ultimatum
so these 2 were friends from childhood till adulthood
the friendship changed love bcuz they kissed the kiss of a promise
another promise broken he didnt come back until years later when he moved back
and they did see each other once when he came back
want to know what happened their when thy meet again
so she is in her room in a dilemma and he sees the sign and he is worried
so they have feelings for each other LOVE possibly but he did not come back
from 2007 the age of 19 and I guess she was angry and when she saw him
again yrs after he blasted him ...hopeful plz I need to know r they in a plan to
get their abu to marry them plz plz plz need to know
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
i love this ss...
the flashbacks from their childhood r so cute n interesting ...
plz continue soon

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