~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am back with a brand new story ...
All my other works are on hold right now because i found this amazing concept and i am working on it.
This is Different because the plot is not entirely according to the show.
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Prologue:-
"Love is innocent, But it somehow spirals into something I don't think innocent people should want"

Baldev and Veera were Rivals since they were child. Their competitive attitude made them fight for a brighter future than the other.
Going away from home in a place full of strangers to pursue their studies made them come close.
They had no idea when their rivalry changed into possessiveness, concern, affection, attraction and love.
But...
Hidden Love can lead to brutal consequences. Hidden Jealousy can destroy lives. Hidden truths can destroy families.
One neglected love... which was there in the heart but was crushed by mind, became the cause of a tragedy.
Can love be the medicine for the pain it caused itself?


Rimi.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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princy48
For her help and concept.


Prologue - Page 1 (above)
Initial Notes- Page 3






Chapter6- Page18











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Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems to be an intresting story line,brilliant thinking go ahead,i'm waiting 'n plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: a4aarsh

seems to be an intresting story line,brilliant thinking go ahead,i'm waiting 'n plz pm me

glad u liked it... sure i will pm u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooow..wooow😳..gr8 strt rimi👏 ..luv ya...🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princy48

wooow..wooow😳..gr8 strt rimi👏 ..luv ya...🤗🤗

thnks dearm, just updated ur credit .. do check it out... :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMjHiM..

glad u liked it... sure i will pm u 😃

danku ji😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks a lot every1 :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what? only few ppl wanna read it???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz continue i like it 😃

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