~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinnithelover

dance part was my fav
Hope we get more veeba scenes like this without ananya and akash.

thnks vinni!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

Awww girl I loved it... I used to wait for this update... Love the bachpan ka pyaar...It is so true how much so ever you wanna run away from your love, it is never possible...

yaaa 😳 thnku so much!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

this was just so... beautiful,all the parts till now were simply amazing 👍🏼 you are a brilliant writer rimi,have enjoyed all your stories so far 👏just keep up this good work and update fast! cant wait to read more and get to know what actually went wrong,really very interesting yaar!just one request,can you add translations to the dialogs,i'm not so..good with hindi

oho!!! thnku thnku thnku!!!! 😃 i'll try to add the translations 😃
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maardala...🤢 super excited 4 the nxt 1,plz update soon yaar.👏
P.S:Sorry 4 the late replay i was having exams...😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update dear!! Plz plz update it soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arre rimi..i really love this FF, it's unique! Please continue!!

Sorry for late comment.. i was busy...Anways! Continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaar rimi srry for late comment but loveD this one ... plz continue ASAP👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww thnku so much guyz!! no worries abt late replies yaar!!! its ok!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love The following 18 people who liked the previous chapter!!!
I love each on of you! you mean a lot!😃🤗🤗

On request i tried to add translations. I hope that helped.
My translations are in Bright Red! 😃

Congrats princy48 ( the concept of this FF was given by her)
She is now a dazzler!!! love you princy!! 😳


Chapter:-7



Professor:- class! please go and decide your research topic with your partner. C'mon fast!

Veera made a sour face and went next to her partner. Vivek. He had childhood rivalry with her. And he had a bad eye on her.
She was very uncomfortable with him.

Baldev, with his partner -Billa was watching them with anger.

Vivek - toh veera jee.. bataiye..😈😈
(So veera... tell me)

He leaned towards her.
Vivek:- kiss pe research kare??😈

Veera:- what nonesense! ek jhaapad marungi na toh akal thikaane aa jayegi teri!😡

(I'll give you a tight slap! 😡)

Vivek:- toh maar leejiye na...😈

(Then Go on..)

And he kept his hand on veera's shoulder.
Baldev got up in anger😡. Billa aslo got up with him.

Billa:- bhai..😕
Baldev looked at billa and gave him a tight SLAP!

the whole class stood up due to the sound.
Billa held his cheek with a sad face.
billa- bhai??
baldev- chup chaap khadaa reh!😳

Professor:- kya ho raha hai ye sab?? baldev!? what's all this?

baldev- sir! Actually my partner baldvinder wanted to work on your favourite topic:- Science and Disaster management!🤢

Every1 obviously hated this topic.
Billa was furious.
Professor:- haa toh? its good !! well done Mr balvindar!😳😳 Do u have a problm with that Mr Singh?😡

Baldev- oh jee nai! ... i mean.. no sir.. But Vivek had already planned this topic with Balvindarr.. and now.. they have gone so far with the research that i won't be able to take Vivek's place.😭😈

Before Vivek cud say a word.
Professor:- wow! Mr Vivek! i am proud of you and Mr Balvindar!😳😃

They faked a smile.😳
Professor:- ok.. now i can change the partners.. switch places students.

Baldev smiled and made a pleading face to Billa.
Baldev now happily went to Veera.

B- dekha! ye saale ko apne fav topic ke saamne kuch bhi bol do.. ye sun lega.
(Did You see that, You just say anything related to his favorite topic and he's done!)

V- chup reh! teacher ko toh baksh diya kar!
(shut up! he is your teacher!)
B- ohhh!! attitude haan? chal mai vaapas vivek ko bheju tere paas?
(Should i send Vivek back to you then?)

V- uh!ruko!! ! no! !! use matt bhejna yaha!

baldev smirked!😉

Professor:- ok.. class be ready by evening. We will have a trip to the Jungle. We'll do campfire tonight.
Be with your partners!

Veera was hell irritated by this.

Late night the bus reached the campfire site.
Proff was already there with the bonfire.
Every1 got down and sat in a circle.
Baldev and Ananya who were a famous couple by then sat together. While veera was with her best frnd aakash.

Proff:- students. i am leaving you all here and i am going with the other teachers. We are not far away from here. Still...Don't create any problem!
Enjoy!

Meera:- Guyz! aaj ki shaam ki shuruat! baldev karega! apne guitar and ek gaane ke saath! OK!!
(baldev will start the evening with his guitar and a song)

every1:- yeahhh!!!!

Baldev looked at veera.
She looked away.
He kept staring at her. He took up his guitar and started playing it.

Veera eyes widened.

"Gulaabi aankhe.. Jo teri dekhi..
Sharaabi ye dil ho gaya...!"


Every1 clapped.
Aakash:- veera.. ye toh tera favourite gaana hai na?
(Veera, this is your favorite song! right?)
Veera grew emotional and sad.

Baldev acted as if he was singing it for ananya. But he was giving side looks to veera all the while.
She was very happy.

"Sambhaalo mujhko oh mere yaaro..
sambhalna mushkil ho gaya.."


The fire was burning and People were mesmerized by Baldev's voice.
He stood up.

"Maine sadaa.. chahya yahi...
daaman bacha loon haseeno se mai..
teri kasam.. khwaabo me bhi..
bachta fira naazneeno se mai"


He was looking at veera but suddenly looked at ananya.
"taubaa magar..
mil gayi tujhse nazar..
Mil gaya darde jigar.. Sun zaraa oh bekhabar"



"gulaabi aankhe.. jo teri dekhi.. deewaana ye dil.. ho gaya"

Ananya Got up and hugged him.
Ananya:- i love you dev!! 😳


Veera tightly clenched the end of her kurti.. how could she not be jealous!


It was late night.. everyone was asleep.
Baldev cudn't sleep so he got up for a walk.
He suddenly heard a voice.
Baldev- kaun?😕

He went ahead looking for the voice and Saw Vivek roaming here and there.

Baldev- ye! itthe ki kar raha hai?
(what is he doing here?)

Then he hid himself behind a tree.
He saw that Vivek was following Veera.

B- ye ladki bhi na! akele ghoom rahi hai raat me aur bhootni ko khabar bhi nahi hai ki vivek bhediyaa uske peeche pada hai! uff!😡
(What the hell is this Girl doing here? she doesn't even know that Vivek is following her)

Veera was walking and thinking abou her and baldev's life!. She was lost.
She didn't realize that she was far into the forest.
Vivek was ready to take all the advantage and grab her from the back. But she turned back and saw him.
Vivek:- abb kaun bachayega tujhe veera?
(Now who wills save you?)

Veera ran for her life. She ran as fast she she could.
Running deep into the forest, she foud a broken house. She took shelter there and hid herself.

Vivek was nearby.. she tried to look where he was when a hand grabbed her wait and another shut her mouth.
She was dragged behind a wall.

She was shocked. She wanted to scream.
But it wasn't vivek, it was baldev.
B- chup kar!!shhh! Vo bhediyaa yahi hain!!
(Be quiet, Vivek is still here)

Veera wasn't listening! She was doing her "uuummm ummm" below his hand.

It was loud enough for vivek to hear it. So baldev had to shut her up somehow.

B- dekh! mai hu..! mai baldev!! baldev! tera baldev!!
(Look, its me baldev)

Veera wasn't listening at all..! she was restless.

Hearing Vivek nearing their hiding place, Baldev got irritated and removed his hand from Veera's mouth and he had no option but to press his lips against hers, sealing it totally.. !

Veera turned into a solid figure. Not moving at all.
Baldev wasn't kissing her, he had just sealed her lips and waiting for Vivek to leave.
He felt a gaze on him from the girl whose lips were under his. She was stunned.
He looked at her innocent eyes and backed off.
He again heard footsteps. He looked at veera and pulled her by waist.
This time he kissed her. She replied slowly.
Soon they forgot all about the whole world, Vivek, Jungle, Camp. etc.

Baldev. who was holding on to her waist with both his hands, brought one hand to her cheeck and pushed her against the wall with the other.

She had no option but to surrender.
she hugged him with her hands travelling though his back.
He slid his hand throgh her soft hairs and clutched her hairs... He enjoyed playing with her hairs so much.
And veera started tightly grip his shirt at the back.

With a loud sound of Thunder, They came back to senses. Baldev broke the kiss and looked at her.
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No precap ! Keep thinking! 😉
And please tell me how was it?? again, i am busy with CSP so i cudn't re-check it.. there can be errors.. please inform me, and forgive me!!
Please hit like and comment!! i am waiting!!😳
Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaw..thanku for d update ...rimi..

🤗🤗 🤗🤗

lovvvd it..its jus sooo awesumm..yaar..😳😳
luving the developing bond b/w veeba😈
n jus wondering that hw they r supporting each odr..😳😳(u got it ryt😉 my dear)
thanks for the hot update..😳

especially i luvd the song part..as i felt vishal(baldev) is only singing it..☺️

but u didn't give the precap..mummie..ab mera kya hoga..😭😭

Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago

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